by Chaotic Rumble 9th November 2015, 2:14 pm
- Spoiler:
Zolona Blackflower wrote:Zolona's Pet      Heero Jr is extremely protective of Zolona kind of like how a brother is of there little sister. He knows how Zolona is feeling at all times so when she is scared he will rush to her self, she is feeling down he will try to cheer her up (mainly by licking her face), and/or she doesn't know or doesn't know he will chase/scare them off. Heero Jr is very used to being Zolona's pillow cause wither he wants to or not he always ends up being that. "Grrr... You better stay away from her!" 
- Heero Jr can speak
- Heero Jr can float
- Heero Jr is able to turn his whole body into air
 - Offensive:
Name: Air Roar Rank: B Duration: Instant Cooldown: 4 Description: Heero Jr would perform an powerful fear shattering roar, causing a shockwave that would damage and stun anyone nearby that would get hit by it other than Zolona and her allies. Strengths:
- The range of the shockwave is based on Heero Jr' current rank, starting at 10 meters in diameter with each rank adding 5 meters in diameter to it's range.
| Rank | Meters | | D | 10 | | C | 20 | | B | 30 | | A | 40 | | S | 50 |
- Anyone within 2 meters of Heero Jr would get knocked back for up to 3 meters away.
- It would stun enemies hit by the shockwave for one post.
Weaknesses:
- Allies caught by the shockwave would get 50% of the damage.
- Walls and barriers of the like can block the shockwave from hitting someone completely.
- By covering the ears, the damage dealt from the attack would be decreased by 15%
- Mages that are two ranks higher can't get stunned and knocked back by the attack.
- Supportive:
Name: Sparkling Breeze Rank: A Duration: Instant Cooldown: 5 Description: Heero Jr stands still while the air brushes against his fur, causing it to glimes and sparkles. What looks like a shiny coat over Heero Jr, is him using the air around himself to heal. Strengths:
- The amount of healing is based on Heero Jr' current rank, starting at 5% with each rank adding 5% more to it's healing.
| Rank | Heal | | D | 5% | | C | 10% | | B | 15% | | A | 20% | | S | 25% |
Weaknesses:
- Only able to heal himself
- Without the wind blowing it only heals for half of what it normally would
| Rank | Heal | | D | 2.5% | | C | 5% | | B | 7.5% | | A | 10% | | S | 12.5% |
 - Regarding Slayers and Wind Mages:
Additional Pet Weaknesses:Regarding Slayers inclined with Air/Wind Attributes:
I would allow Heero Jr consumption but Heero Jr must be burped back out after 2 posts. Heero Jr can only be consumed once per thread by the same player with this magic. (Note: Reason being I don't want anyone doing an insta-kill by eating my pet or to keep on eating him over and over to spam the power boosts.) Only slayers that are the same rank or higher than Heero Jr' current rank can consume him. Any slayer with a rank lower than Heero Jr' current rank won't be able to absorb him. Regarding Spells that can control Air/Wind: I would allow Heero Jr to be controlled by other players with this kind of spells for up to 2 posts only but Heero Jr can't use abilities and can only use his basic attack while controlled by another player. Heero Jr can only be controlled once per thread by the same player. (Note: You can't order him to do anything that would lead to instantaneous death like jumping off a cliff or something of the likes that would kill him for sure.) Only Air/Wind Controlling spells that are the same rank or higher than Heero Jr' current rank can control him. Any spell with a rank lower than Heero Jr' current rank won't be able to control him him. @Made by Aldritch to save all pets from insta death
|
Heyo mate, since I'm the one who approved and unlocked your application, I'll be reviewing it, too. Just gonna quote your application to see how it was like prior to changes; won't actually write in it.
Right, so let's begin!
Description and passive abilities look fine to me.
Let's move onto its spells.
Air Roar - Most of it is fine, but the stun is a bit problematic. It's completely stopping from anyone doing anything for a single post... Which leaves you to do whatever you desire, which is insanely powerful. First thing is first, however; it will never be able to have any S-Rank effect, because it is a Legendary Pet. They can go as far as A-Rank, so I'll have to ask you to remove the additional range you'd get for being S-Rank. The cooldown would also need to scale according to rank; at A-Rank, it would have to be 5 posts. This is minimum for any A-Rank ability. Secondly, it will only be able to stun targets that are of equal rank... Unless there's something you'd like to add that might balance out the stun itself.
Now, this is most important, and I want you to answer with your next post - did you intend a stun as though a full stop of the target(s) struck doing nothing, or the stunned as regaining balance and recover while being shaky?
Sparkling Breeze - Like the last ability, because the pet is only legendary, it can only go as far as having an A-Rank ability at maximum, but since this the the higher ranked one, that means that the last one has to remain at B-Rank; Legendary pets can only have one spell equal to their rank (up to A-Rank) and a spell one rank lower than that (up to B-Rank).
Now, let's talk about the spell itself.
It looks good!
![Master [1000]](https://i.imgur.com/AQXM4xC.png)
![Senior [500]](https://i.imgur.com/Nmfn8cD.png)
![Novice [250]](https://i.imgur.com/lrYlde6.png)
![Grand Master [2000]](https://i.imgur.com/SGD5XSW.png)
