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    Junior

    Ethair
    Ethair

    Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Viktor's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 88
    Guild : Basilisk Fang
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Master Yang [Chinese Swordsman], Master Matsushita [Japanese Swordsman], and Master Kang [Korean Swordsman]
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Unknown
    Second Skill: Unknown
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ethair 29th October 2015, 5:58 am

    Zolona's Pet

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    "Junior"
    Heero Jr

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    Legendary(+)

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    Air Lion

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    Combat Pet

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    Heero Jr is extremely protective of Zolona kind of like how a brother is of there little sister. He knows how Zolona is feeling at all times so when she is scared he will rush to her self, she is feeling down he will try to cheer her up (mainly by licking her face), and/or she doesn't know or doesn't know he will chase/scare them off. Heero Jr is very used to being Zolona's pillow cause wither he wants to or not he always ends up being that.

    "Grrr... You better stay away from her!"

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    • Heero Jr can speak
    • Heero Jr can float
    • Heero Jr is able to turn his whole body into air


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    Offensive:
    Supportive:
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    Regarding Slayers and Wind Mages:


    Last edited by Zolona Blackflower on 10th November 2015, 4:07 pm; edited 5 times in total


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    Jian Liu the Stalker | Unknown | Unknown | Unknown
    Junior L9TXIdw
    Jobs:

    Theme:
    Mistress Venir
    Mistress Venir

    Administrator- Moderator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- A-Rank- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Archmage's Seal
    Position : None
    Posts : 1394
    Guild : Golden Phoenix
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 24,000

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 2nd Gen Flame Goddess Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Junior Empty Re: Junior

    Post by Mistress Venir 29th October 2015, 5:01 pm

    Very cute I am digging the lion and the template! Overall it looks pretty good I just wanna clarify some things:

    • Weak combat pets get 1 C-Rank ability and 1 D-Rank ability

    • I also wanna make sure that you know that the pet does not rank up with you, so in order for the pet to rank up you would have to upgrade it and such

    • For the supportive Heal spell start of at 5% for D and then work your way up


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    Jobs:


    When you ask me to do stuff:
    Ethair
    Ethair

    Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Viktor's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 88
    Guild : Basilisk Fang
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Master Yang [Chinese Swordsman], Master Matsushita [Japanese Swordsman], and Master Kang [Korean Swordsman]
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Unknown
    Second Skill: Unknown
    Third Skill:

    Junior Empty Re: Junior

    Post by Ethair 29th October 2015, 10:09 pm

    Bump


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    Jian Liu the Stalker | Unknown | Unknown | Unknown
    Junior L9TXIdw
    Jobs:

    Theme:
    Mistress Venir
    Mistress Venir

    Administrator- Moderator- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- A-Rank- Veteran Level 1- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Archmage's Seal
    Position : None
    Posts : 1394
    Guild : Golden Phoenix
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 24,000

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: 2nd Gen Flame Goddess Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Junior Empty Re: Junior

    Post by Mistress Venir 30th October 2015, 3:38 pm

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    Jobs:


    When you ask me to do stuff:
    Chaotic Rumble
    Chaotic Rumble

    Dark Insanity


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    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Tournament Participation Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Corrupted King of Knights
    Position : King Of Kings
    Posts : 2754
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : Sapphiron ; The Shadow
    Experience : 601,187

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Refraction : Sword King
    Second Skill: N/A (for now)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 9th November 2015, 8:16 am

    Unlocked and moved for upgrades!


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    Junior V4W5D0r


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    Ethair
    Ethair

    Character Application Approved!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Viktor's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 88
    Guild : Basilisk Fang
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 32
    Mentor : Master Yang [Chinese Swordsman], Master Matsushita [Japanese Swordsman], and Master Kang [Korean Swordsman]
    Experience : 50

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Unknown
    Second Skill: Unknown
    Third Skill:

    Junior Empty Re: Junior

    Post by Ethair 9th November 2015, 10:45 am

    Bump


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    Jian Liu the Stalker | Unknown | Unknown | Unknown
    Junior L9TXIdw
    Jobs:

    Theme:
    Chaotic Rumble
    Chaotic Rumble

    Dark Insanity


    Dark Insanity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Tournament Participation Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Corrupted King of Knights
    Position : King Of Kings
    Posts : 2754
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : Sapphiron ; The Shadow
    Experience : 601,187

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Refraction : Sword King
    Second Skill: N/A (for now)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Chaotic Rumble 9th November 2015, 2:14 pm

    Spoiler:

    Heyo mate, since I'm the one who approved and unlocked your application, I'll be reviewing it, too.  Just gonna quote your application to see how it was like prior to changes; won't actually write in it.

    Right, so let's begin!

    Description and passive abilities look fine to me.

    Let's move onto its spells.

    Air Roar - Most of it is fine, but the stun is a bit problematic. It's completely stopping from anyone doing anything for a single post... Which leaves you to do whatever you desire, which is insanely powerful. First thing is first, however; it will never be able to have any S-Rank effect, because it is a Legendary Pet. They can go as far as A-Rank, so I'll have to ask you to remove the additional range you'd get for being S-Rank. The cooldown would also need to scale according to rank; at A-Rank, it would have to be 5 posts. This is minimum for any A-Rank ability. Secondly, it will only be able to stun targets that are of equal rank... Unless there's something you'd like to add that might balance out the stun itself.

    Now, this is most important, and I want you to answer with your next post - did you intend a stun as though a full stop of the target(s) struck doing nothing, or the stunned as regaining balance and recover while being shaky?

    Sparkling Breeze - Like the last ability, because the pet is only legendary, it can only go as far as having an A-Rank ability at maximum, but since this the the higher ranked one, that means that the last one has to remain at B-Rank; Legendary pets can only have one spell equal to their rank (up to A-Rank) and a spell one rank lower than that (up to B-Rank).

    Now, let's talk about the spell itself.

    It looks good!


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    Junior V4W5D0r


    Bank

    Seru's Main Theme

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    Seru's Battle theme

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    Chaotic Rumble

    Dark Insanity


    Dark Insanity

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- God Slayer- Dragon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Tournament Participation Badge- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Corrupted King of Knights
    Position : King Of Kings
    Posts : 2754
    Guild : Blue Pegasus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Mentor : Sapphiron ; The Shadow
    Experience : 601,187

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Refraction : Sword King
    Second Skill: N/A (for now)
    Third Skill:

    Junior Empty Re: Junior

    Post by Chaotic Rumble 10th November 2015, 4:07 pm

    Looks good.

    'Tis approved~!


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    Bank

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