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    Ninetails Derpfox

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    Completed Angels and Demons

    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 27th August 2015, 1:29 pm

    Job Title: Angels and Demons
    Rank: 
    A - Rank
    One Time Only
    Neutral Job

    Player Requirements:
    Either 1(or 2) A rank, or 2x B Ranks
    OR
    A combination of 1 A rank + 1 B Rank
    No more than 2 wizard

    Job Requirements:
    400 words per post, 40 posts minimum
    Complete all 6 waves
    Amount of rolls is dependent on wave

    Job Location:
    Heaven (Unknown Lands)

    Job Description:
    Walking along the road, you and your partner come across a strange sight. A crack in the air lays before you. Looking into it, you both spot a world filled with light, and hear a humming sound from within beckoning you to enter. Inside, there's a world where winged beings with human bodies fly about. On notices you and immediately stops you from moving any further into its home. The being appears to be female, wielding a staff with sharpened edges. She doesn't know either of you, but since you're not from her world she assumed you to be demonic invaders. Her logic is, to prove your selves to not be invaders you must fight in a Colosseum type building. You don't know exactly when the onslaught will end, but if you want to leave alive you'll have to prove yourselves.


    WaveRolls
    11
    22
    34
    56
    6Boss


    Enemies:
    Weak: 2x Poop Shoveller Angels
    They have poop covered shovels and are VERY skilled at smacking you with them. They deal 30HP damage per hit and have a 150HP gauge.

    Normal:Angelic Warrior
    Wielding a single sword, they have pretty average skills and know no magic. They can fly at normal sprinting speed, and have 250HP. Their swords deal 35 damage per hit.

    Strong:Guardian Angel
    These guys wield swords made of pure light, and a shield also made of light. They have the durability of a Legendary(+) weapon and armour respectively. The sword deals 40 damage per hit. While they know no magic, they are able to fly at 20mph and are extremely skilled with their swords. They have 400HP, but will admit defeat if knocked down to 50HP.

    Boss: Gabriella, the Archangel
    The divine Archangel known as Gabriella, a woman who's beauty is beyond words. She has the whitest wings of all the angels, so pure that it even glows with while lights. She is immune to Light element attacks, cannot be stunned, poisoned, burned, corrupted, or slowed. She has the ability to fly, but has a sense of honor that will make it so she will remain on the ground if you cannot fly. She knows 5 spells, and uses 2 Artifact(+) rank swords that each have 2 abilities on them. Her attacks with melee deal 50HP damage per sword. Suriel is an A Rank opponent with 1,000 HP that you and your ally must take down.

    PurgeD Deals 20HP Damage to all within 15 meters of Suriel (3 post cooldown)
    RebukeC Deals 15HP damage to all within 30 meters, and an additional 10HP damage every post for 4 posts.
    SealB Reduces the MP of both players by 30, deals 25 HP damage to 1 player (1 use only)  
    CompelA Both players begin to see the light, the error of their ways... nope that's a massive blast of light that's gonna deal 32 damage to all within 60 meters of Suriel and then burn them for 20 damage every post for 2 posts. (7 post cooldown)
    SmiteS Deals 100 Damage to all within 200 meters of Suriel, deals 50 damage the next post, 25 damage the post after that, and another 100 damage the post after that, then 25 more damage after that post to round it off (1 use only)
    Weapon 1
    WingsS Suriel can fly
    StunS Opponents of equal or lower rank are paralyzed for 1 post from being hit by this blade. This cannot paralyze the same opponent within 4 posts of a previous paralyzation.
    Weapon 2
    LoopS 1 time per 5 posts Suriel can reflect an attack back to the attacker
    BurnS Opponents hit by this sword will suffer a burn that deals 25 damage per post for 4 posts. This cannot burn the same person within 5 posts of a previous burn, and does not stack


    After beating Gabriella, she'll apologize for having confused you for a demon. She states 'as you weren't ripped apart by our holy attacks, you couldn't possibly be demonic.' as her reasoning behind this epiphany of hers. As a way to make up for her forcing you to fight for your life, you (both is in group) are taught to channel spells through your body more efficiently, allowing you to learn an additional spell.




    Reward:


    2x A Rank XP
    1x B Rank Spell Slot


    Last edited by Seikatsu on 15th September 2015, 4:36 pm; edited 1 time in total
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    King Elyx

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    Completed Re: Angels and Demons

    Post by King Elyx 15th September 2015, 1:01 pm

    Elyx here! I am here to grade the job! ^^ Lets begin.

    I would expect a story in the beginning to create the scenarios that made this job possible. Instead, the job demands that the job-takers are the ones to make those circumstances, which probably should not be forced onto them. Same for the reason why the angels believe the job-takers are demons. And the same applies for getting to a coliseum, which doesn't have a description of how the user figures out what they need to do, nor does it show how the user figures out how there are exactly 10 waves approaching. The enemies can't be given to the players, the player dice is there for that reason. We can't have people being lost now, freedom, but a road to stay onto as well please. ^^

    Now for the enemies. The Weak enemies seem borderline fair, same applies for the Normal ones. The Strong enemies do not say how many swords that each one has. I would say 3 is fair enough, considering they all inflict 40 damage each. They come in huge groups, a long time for them to be knocked out, there are just too many according to the enemy chart shown above.

    And then there is Gabriella. Her health is 10,000, X ranked mages (In which there are none) inflict 200 damage at a time. That towering base health is too much on it's own, if X ranks take time to beat it, A rank mages are sure to fail. Too many things she is immune too, and she can inflict 100 damage per post with her two swords alone. Her C rank spell inflicts 80 damage (A rank mages inflict that much damage). Her B rank spell puts down player MP by 30... That's just impossible to deal with. Her A rank spell inflicts 180 damage after resolving, that puts down a C rank mage in just one cast (Which A rank mages could barely do with heavy amounts of boosts in power). And then her S rank spell, after all of the turns pass, inflicts 300 damage. Three of those shots would take out an H rank mage.

    I don't know what is wanted from this, but these all seem like minor fixes, once you are done, please bump this thread. Thank you ^^


    Last edited by Elyx Reiaki on 15th September 2015, 4:49 pm; edited 1 time in total
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    Completed Re: Angels and Demons

    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 15th September 2015, 4:39 pm

    Elyx Reiaki wrote:Elyx here! I am here to grade the job! ^^ Lets begin.

    I would expect a story in the beginning to create the scenarios that made this job possible. Instead, the job demands that the job-takers are the ones to make those circumstances, which probably should not be forced onto them. Same for the reason why the angels believe the job-takers are demons. And the same applies for getting to a coliseum, which doesn't have a description of how the user figures out what they need to do, nor does it show how the user figures out how there are exactly 10 waves approaching. The enemies can't be given to the players, the player dice is there for that reason. We can't have people being lost now, freedom, but a road to stay onto as well please. ^^

    Now for the enemies. The Weak enemies seem borderline fair, same applies for the Normal ones. The Strong enemies do not say how many swords that each one has. I would say 3 is fair enough, considering they all inflict 40 damage each. They come in huge groups, a long time for them to be knocked out, there are just too many according to the enemy chart shown above.

    And then there is Gabriella. Her health is 10,000, X ranked mages (In which there are none) inflict 200 damage at a time. That towering base health is too much on it's own, if X ranks take time to beat it, A rank mages are sure to fail. Too many things she is immune too, and she can inflict 100 damage per post with her two swords alone. Her C rank spell inflicts 80 damage (A rank mages inflict that much damage). Her B rank spell puts down player MP by 30... That's just impossible to deal with. Her A rank spell inflicts 180 damage after resolving, that puts down a C rank mage in just one cast (Which A rank mages could barely do with heavy amounts of boosts in power). And then her S rank spell, after all of the turns pass, inflicts 300 damage. Three of those shots would take out an H rank mage.

    I don't know what is wanted from this, but these all seem like minor fixes, once you are done, please bump this thread. Thank you ^^ all nerfs made. Originality and challenge thrown out the window.
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    This picture is not necessary. It's obvious you don't approve, and it's kind of getting on my nerves seeing it every time I scroll down to check what needs nerfing.
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    Completed Re: Angels and Demons

    Post by King Elyx 15th September 2015, 4:48 pm

    Seikatsu wrote:
    Elyx Reiaki wrote:Elyx here! I am here to grade the job! ^^ Lets begin.

    I would expect a story in the beginning to create the scenarios that made this job possible. Instead, the job demands that the job-takers are the ones to make those circumstances, which probably should not be forced onto them. Same for the reason why the angels believe the job-takers are demons. And the same applies for getting to a coliseum, which doesn't have a description of how the user figures out what they need to do, nor does it show how the user figures out how there are exactly 10 waves approaching. The enemies can't be given to the players, the player dice is there for that reason. We can't have people being lost now, freedom, but a road to stay onto as well please. ^^

    Now for the enemies. The Weak enemies seem borderline fair, same applies for the Normal ones. The Strong enemies do not say how many swords that each one has. I would say 3 is fair enough, considering they all inflict 40 damage each. They come in huge groups, a long time for them to be knocked out, there are just too many according to the enemy chart shown above.

    And then there is Gabriella. Her health is 10,000, X ranked mages (In which there are none) inflict 200 damage at a time. That towering base health is too much on it's own, if X ranks take time to beat it, A rank mages are sure to fail. Too many things she is immune too, and she can inflict 100 damage per post with her two swords alone. Her C rank spell inflicts 80 damage (A rank mages inflict that much damage). Her B rank spell puts down player MP by 30... That's just impossible to deal with. Her A rank spell inflicts 180 damage after resolving, that puts down a C rank mage in just one cast (Which A rank mages could barely do with heavy amounts of boosts in power). And then her S rank spell, after all of the turns pass, inflicts 300 damage. Three of those shots would take out an H rank mage.

    I don't know what is wanted from this, but these all seem like minor fixes, once you are done, please bump this thread. Thank you ^^ all nerfs made. Originality and challenge thrown out the window.
    Angels and Demons Merp_zpsjsgcc49o
    This picture is not necessary. It's obvious you don't approve, and it's kind of getting on my nerves seeing it every time I scroll down to check what needs nerfing.

    For the photo ^^ That was the first time I tried it, I literally had it made recently. I see it wouldn't work if that's the impression it gives off. It was for good humor, but if it offends, then it goes down.

    Second, challenge is good to a certain point until eventually, it begins to hurt. I see where you come from, but there are many other ways to be creative and original. If you claim it is unoriginal with no challenge, all right, I'll let your opinion be. Regardless, I'll approve it as it is now.

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    Ninetails Derpfox

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    Completed Re: Angels and Demons

    Post by Ninetails Derpfox 15th September 2015, 4:51 pm

    It's not that it's offensive, I'm just an excessively serious person. Other people may find it cute, some might laugh at it.

    As a side note, would you lock this thread for me please.
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    Completed Re: Angels and Demons

    Post by Thorn 3rd October 2015, 4:14 pm

    has this been moved? if not please PM me


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    Completed Re: Angels and Demons

    Post by Thorn 9th October 2015, 1:38 pm

    uploaded


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