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    Johnny's Soul Magic

    Johnny Be-Good
    Johnny Be-Good

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    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
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    Posts : 15
    Guild : Lamia Scale
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Sayrn
    Experience : 25

    Johnny's Soul Magic Empty Johnny's Soul Magic

    Post by Johnny Be-Good 28th July 2015, 2:22 pm

    Primary Magic: Soul Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Soul magic is an ancient art passed down from ancient adventures in terrifying lands. Therefore, the magic must be scary as well, to keep up with it. This magic, although not for the faint of heart, or soul, is extremely powerful as it draws on the power of the soul of the user. People who use this type of magic are normally incredibly strong willed and very loving, as their soul grows with every person they help, although they don’t know that. Combat against a soul mage will normally result in a loss for th opponent, as only the strong can wield the awesome power of soul magic. The uses of this magic are many and varied but it specialises in creating constructs with the basic essense of what makes up a living being,the soul. The constructs created in this fashion are merely temporary in nature but can cover any number of situations from simple noncombative work to mid line battle support and everything inbetween. In addition to the more standard attacks that this magic posseses it also happens to be of great use when trying to secure or subdue a target that has made themselves known as most of the offensive spells that are within it's purview also have a stunning or movement limiting ability to accompany their outright damage.

    Strengths: -As it is based on the soul of the user, it grows in power as they get stronger, but it can also hurt them if they try to use too much of it.
    - Very versatile spells.
    -They all have a small for of cc, be it slowing, silencing, stunning, impaling, or so forth.

    Weaknesses: -Can deal damage to the user.
    -all spells have a chance to miss, about 1 in 30, but if the user is concentrating, the effect is reduce until it is essentially nullified.
    -It can be used on friendly targets.
    -as it mainly focuses on damaging the soul of the user, opponents without a soul will be mostly unnaffected, reducing the damage they take from the spells by 75%

    Lineage:

    Abilites:

    D-Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Johnny Be-Good on 8th August 2015, 11:01 pm; edited 5 times in total
    Chelvaric
    Chelvaric

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    Post by Chelvaric 29th July 2015, 9:17 am

    - make your description atleast 250 words

    - remove betrayel to much for a ability
    - explain rage more....

    - homing mass max range 20 meter no homing
    - soul shield breaks at 2 D ranks


    - rework berserk completly its to strong

    - use the formating like the template and delete your spell fusions


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    It is a man’s heart which sets the world aflame..


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    Johnny Be-Good
    Johnny Be-Good

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    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
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    Age : 31
    Mentor : Sayrn
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    Post by Johnny Be-Good 29th July 2015, 3:00 pm

    Bump


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    Magic: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t16013-johnny-s-soul-magic
    Johnny Be-Good
    Johnny Be-Good

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    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Sayrn
    Experience : 25

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    Post by Johnny Be-Good 30th July 2015, 11:49 am

    Bump


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    Post by Thorn 10th August 2015, 6:56 am

    Johnny Be-Good wrote:Primary Magic: Soul Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Soul magic is an ancient art passed down from ancient adventures in terrifying lands. Therefore, the magic must be scary as well, to keep up with it. This magic, although not for the faint of heart, or soul, is extremely powerful as it draws on the power of the soul of the user. People who use this type of magic are normally incredibly strong willed and very loving, as their soul grows with every person they help, although they don’t know that. Combat against a soul mage will normally result in a loss for th opponent, as only the strong can wield the awesome power of soul magic. The uses of this magic are many and varied but it specialises in creating constructs with the basic essense of what makes up a living being,the soul. The constructs created in this fashion are merely temporary in nature but can cover any number of situations from simple noncombative work to mid line battle support and everything inbetween. In addition to the more standard attacks that this magic posseses it also happens to be of great use when trying to secure or subdue a target that has made themselves known as most of the offensive spells that are within it's purview also have a stunning or movement limiting ability to accompany their outright damage.

    Strengths: -As it is based on the soul of the user, it grows in power as they get stronger, but it can also hurt them if they try to use too much of it.
    - Very versatile spells.
    -They all have a small for of cc, be it slowing, silencing, stunning, impaling, or so forth.

    Weaknesses: -Can deal damage to the user.
    -all spells have a chance to miss, about 1 in 30, but if the user is concentrating, the effect is reduce until it is essentially nullified.
    -It can be used on friendly targets.
    -as it mainly focuses on damaging the soul of the user, opponents without a soul will be mostly unnaffected, reducing the damage they take from the spells by 75%

    Lineage:

    Abilites:

    D-Rank Spells:

    [color=red]hay Chelveric has asked for me to take this as he is very bizy


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    Johnny Be-Good
    Johnny Be-Good

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    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
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    Posts : 15
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Sayrn
    Experience : 25

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    Post by Johnny Be-Good 10th August 2015, 3:15 pm

    ok, but why did you just quote the entire thing?


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    Post by Thorn 11th August 2015, 3:13 am

    Because that's the way I do it edits are in red


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    Johnny's Soul Magic S6Eaz9K
    Johnny Be-Good
    Johnny Be-Good

    Player 
    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Sayrn
    Experience : 25

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    Post by Johnny Be-Good 12th August 2015, 3:02 pm

    Ok cool. Just hoping you can finish it quick...


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    Post by Thorn 22nd August 2015, 1:31 am

    You have done no edits


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    Johnny's Soul Magic S6Eaz9K
    Johnny Be-Good
    Johnny Be-Good

    Player 
    Lineage : Necromancer's Passion
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Guild : Lamia Scale
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : Sayrn
    Experience : 25

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    Post by Johnny Be-Good 22nd August 2015, 1:56 am

    I have been waiting for you to provide me with something to change before I edit. Otherwise, I don't know what you want me to change. I cant edit without an idea of what needs to be changed...


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    Magic: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t16013-johnny-s-soul-magic
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    Johnny's Soul Magic Empty Re: Johnny's Soul Magic

    Post by Thorn 22nd August 2015, 9:43 am

    Thorn wrote:
    Johnny Be-Good wrote:Primary Magic: Soul Magic
    Secondary Magic: (Must be filled in later. Magic you bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Soul magic is an ancient art passed down from ancient adventures in terrifying lands. Therefore, the magic must be scary as well, to keep up with it. This magic, although not for the faint of heart, or soul, is extremely powerful as it draws on the power of the soul of the user. People who use this type of magic are normally incredibly strong willed and very loving, as their soul grows with every person they help, although they don’t know that. Combat against a soul mage will normally result in a loss for th opponent, as only the strong can wield the awesome power of soul magic. The uses of this magic are many and varied but it specialises in creating constructs with the basic essense of what makes up a living being,the soul. The constructs created in this fashion are merely temporary in nature but can cover any number of situations from simple noncombative work to mid line battle support and everything inbetween. In addition to the more standard attacks that this magic posseses it also happens to be of great use when trying to secure or subdue a target that has made themselves known as most of the offensive spells that are within it's purview also have a stunning or movement limiting ability to accompany their outright damage.

    Strengths: -As it is based on the soul of the user, it grows in power as they get stronger, but it can also hurt them if they try to use too much of it.
    - Very versatile spells.
    -They all have a small for of cc, be it slowing, silencing, stunning, impaling, or so forth.

    Weaknesses: -Can deal damage to the user.
    -all spells have a chance to miss, about 1 in 30, but if the user is concentrating, the effect is reduce until it is essentially nullified.
    -It can be used on friendly targets.
    -as it mainly focuses on damaging the soul of the user, opponents without a soul will be mostly unnaffected, reducing the damage they take from the spells by 75%

    Lineage:

    Abilites:

    D-Rank Spells:

    [color=red]hay Chelveric has asked for me to take this as he is very bizy

    i repeat myself edits are in red look at the spells


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