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    Jikū sōsa: Destruction

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    Completed Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 28th October 2014, 6:08 am


    Jikū sōsa: Destruction Eye10

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Law of Destruction
    Secondary Magic: Titan
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Law of destruction is a magic based on destruction. The user uses his own magic power with the help of a seal to destroy the space between him and something else or just to destroy a mass of stuff. He can even destroy the space around him to make him self invisible or untouchable.
    The user has a special contract with a seal, a destructive seal which gives him the power of time and space destruction. To use this power, the user has burned his skin with black fire, drawing a seal which lets him cast different spells of destruction. To become stronger, Marik created two seals, one by burning his hand, and the other one by burning his eye.
    If the user dies, the seal will burn his body, and the user will neither go heaven nor hell.

    This seal has his own soul. It tries to stay inside a mage's body, that's why it gives the user magic
    power if its necessary. Marik's body is a chest that locks the real power of the seal.
    This means that the seal has a mind too, it can communicate with the owner and feel the power around him if he wants to.

    The seal is hard to control for a human being, it has the power of destroying, manipulating, distorting and creating time and space in any way. A human, can only choose one of this abilities, and Marik has chosen destruction.
    Strengths:
    - The user gains the power to manipulate the space with the demon's permission, he most of the times gives him the permission when the caster will use it to destroy something, even a simple shoe.
    - The seal gives him power when the user needs it, this does not happen always, he needs to be in extreme conditions.
    - The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can't use time spells until B-Rank.
    Weaknesses:
    - The magic has a link with a demon's seal, the user will receive 20% more damage from demon slayers spells.
    - The magic is destructive, it can damage the user and his friends as well.
    - The user can lose easily control of the spell, he will destroy anything that he finds, with out even thinking it.
    - The space destruction only works with non-living objects, it doesn't work with living things.
    Abilities/Powers:

    Space Destruction.
    The user has the ability to destroy the space between him and any other thing, it will be visible, if there is a tree between him and his target, the tree will be visible, but when he moves his hand against the tree, the hand will immediately appear at the other side of the destroyed space. The user can use this to reach stuff at many meters* or lower, he can decide the distance between 1 meter and his limit depending of his rank. He can also touch non-living objects and completely destroy them. Leaving nothing that death space. The user can only destroy car size or lower size objects. (This will deal no damage to anybody or any of their items, it won't deal damage to spells either).
    The user can only use this two times per post. This will increase depending of hi rank (D2, C4, B6, A8, S10)
    *Depending on the user's rank:
    D=5 meters
    C=10 meters
    B=15 meters
    A=20 meters
    S=25 meters

    Seal Power.
    When the user reaches a Mp of 30%, the seal will start to give him 1Mp per post and 5Mp per post when he is not in battle, the regeneration will stop after reaching 55 mp or above. Seal power can only be used once per thread.

    Seal Emergency.
    When the user's Hp is 25% or lower, the user will gain 10 Mp the caster can use this ability any time once per thread.


    D-Rank Spells:

    C Rank Spells:

    B Rank Spells:

    Signature Spells:


    Last edited by Mr. Anderson on 17th June 2015, 5:53 pm; edited 48 times in total
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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 30th October 2014, 2:47 pm

    Bump


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Cirven 30th October 2014, 8:01 pm

    Comments/edits are inTHIS color. Bump after.

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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 31st October 2014, 8:06 am

    Ready! And thanks for checking it


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Cirven 31st October 2014, 10:40 am

    Comments/edits are in THIS color. Bump after and not a problem with helping you. Took me a bit to understand this magic and what you were aiming for lol. This magic is kind of cool after I figured it out and saw what you were doing with the cracks.

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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 31st October 2014, 11:22 am

    Okokok I decided to keep with some stuff, and I finished, but still not sure if its correct


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Cirven 31st October 2014, 12:25 pm

    Last time I think.

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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 31st October 2014, 1:08 pm

    I found some extra mistakes, and I changed what you told me too but I have the feeling you will correct something one more time xD


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Cirven 31st October 2014, 3:35 pm

    Bump after.

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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 31st October 2014, 4:33 pm

    Finished Cirven! Thanks!


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Cirven 31st October 2014, 5:17 pm

    No problem.

    Let me just slip this in here like..

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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Zeno 8th November 2014, 7:39 am

    EDIT: If you feel I have analyzed it incorrectly, or I am not understanding the way your magic works, please don't hesitate to correct me.

    Unapproved for being overpowered.

    All right, I'll be in charge of rebalancing this magic. The main issue here being that you use the difference in ranks as a big weakness to get away with overpowered spells vs mages of your own rank. If we allow this magic to scale up as your character grows stronger, it'll be a big big mess. Here we go.

    Strengths wrote:- The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can only use time spells until B-Rank.
    I will be very very very strict with this one in the future.

    Invisibility needs to become a spell, instead of a passive.

    No magic is allowed to pass through the cracks created with Space Destruction and I will need a limit as to how many cracks you can create per turn, and how long they stay.


    Black Step is overpowered for a D Rank spell. It provides status effect damage, portals and protection. A lot of this needs to be nerfed to the point where he can create two cracks within a limited area. He can go in one and come out the other, and by staying inside he has a D Rank veil of protection. He should only be able to stay inside the cracks for maximum 2 posts. When one crack is destroyed he can move to the other until that one is destroyed, but never for longer than 2 posts in total. The cooldown may be lowered to 3 posts.

    Quick Step does not make much sense. If you destroy space, there is nothing to move through and you just teleport from one point to the next. The 10m/s speed becomes irrelevant and you cannot bump into something because you pass through reality from point A to B. This spell needs to be reworked and rebalanced.

    Dead Space, Space Of Flame is also too complicated for a D Rank spell. It is way too difficult to keep track of the 100 cracks in battle, and you can abuse this easily. The absorbing ability is unbalanced because it has too many different parameters. Here's the list of what I can understand, but it is confusing:
    Crack Burn: Absorb 1% mp, gain 2% / 5% absorbed (so 5 cracks need to be hit before 2% is gained)
    Minimum Crack Hit (guaranteed hit): 2 cracks, absorbing 2% mp from the enemy.
    Crack Endurance: Cracks only disappear after being touched 5 times.
    Crack Damage: 100 cracks / 5 strikes / 5 D Rank damage hits (how do 100 cracks only hit 5 times?)
    Casting this spell point-blank is devastating and way too powerful for a D Rank spell. If we count the aspects of this spell, you get MP absorption, a strategic killzone and 5 times D Rank Damage. The weakness of only being able to drain D Rank mages is good, but it's going to be overpowered if we allow this one to scale up.
    This spell needs to become simplified by redesigning the 100 cracks idea. Make it into something that can be tracked and not abused.


    Black Spot is overpowered for a C Rank spell. We've got a total of C+D potential damage in an Area of Effect, a 10 meter radius  blindzone with potential free hits for the user. You're going to have to choose between dealing damage or creating a blindzone. Either you deal D Rank damage as the circle is created and D Rank upon explosion, with a blindzone that lasts 2 posts. Or you deal C Rank damage in one hit, with a 1 post blindzone opportunity.

    White Zone needs a limitation as to how many C Ranked spells can pass through before it's canceled out.

    Spacial Stream, Reflection needs to lose the burning cracks side-effect in the weaknesses if it is not going to mentioned in the strengths because it can hit both the user and the enemy.

    Spatial Stream, Annihilation does not follow the signature spell rules. It has an immobilizing zone AND a damaging beam attack. It can only have the beam as signature spell.


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 10th November 2014, 8:20 pm

    Sorry if I took a while, I have been very busy but I finished


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 11th November 2014, 5:00 pm

    Bump


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Zeno 15th November 2014, 5:57 am

    Space Destruction: Needs a limit as to how many times Marik can use it per post.

    Invisibility: You gotta clean up the description of this spell a bit. It says you cannot use it during battle at the bottom, but that you can use it in battle in the middle.

    Quick Step: How exactly does the person take damage? If he is at the destination spot of the destroyed space? If he is in between point A and B? Is there any way to block it?

    Bang Bang Annihilation: The maximum damage for a spell like this is generally 150% spread out. So the first hit could do D Rank damage and the aura can deal half of D Rank one post later. Is there any way to get rid of the aura before the extra damage is dealt?

    Black Spot: A signature spell can only have 1 single effect. This spell has too much going on.


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 15th November 2014, 6:27 am

    I think I corrected it correctly... Still not sure...


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Zeno 16th November 2014, 6:06 pm

    Again, a signature spell can only have 1 effect.
    I count quite a few more in White Zone.

    Invisibility: There is a conflict in the description. It says that it can only work on the same or lower, but also that it cannot work on the same or higher.

    Quick Step: How exactly does it affect the target physically when the space is destroyed? It says it causes pain, but how exactly does it damage?

    Bang Bang Annihilation: 1 km is much too far for this rank. I can allow 25 meters. Also, the aura needs a defined duration after which it automatically wears off.




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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 16th November 2014, 6:38 pm

    I edited it, but I still don't know how does the white zone has more than one ability, It destroys the space around him and his space, making him someone "out" of the human's world, nothing can touch him and he can't touch anything. It might have more than one ability, but I need you to tell me which it is just so I can correct it:/


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Zeno 21st November 2014, 10:32 am

    Marik Anderson wrote:-Any mage that will try to attack the user with a fist or physical attacks will pass through the zone too, with out making any damage to the user.
    -Anyone who touches the zone will be burned, moving back and losing 2% mp.
    -The zone will move with the user and reaches a 4 meters radio.

    It makes the user impervious to physical attacks. (1)
    Burn Damage (2)
    Knockback (3)
    Moving (4)


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 23rd November 2014, 7:50 am

    Ok changed it


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 29th November 2014, 3:51 pm

    Bump


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 19th February 2015, 4:58 pm

    I need someone to check this T.T


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Tōwa Lazmira 20th February 2015, 7:48 pm

    MarikAnderson wrote:
    Jikū sōsa: Destruction Asdfg10

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Jikū sōsa: Destruction
    Secondary Magic: Titan
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: Space destruction is a magic based on destruction, the user uses the magic to destroy the space between him and something else or to just destroy the mass of stuff, he can even destroy the space around him to make him self invisible for the human eyes.
    The user has a special contract with a seal, a destruction seal, this gives him the power of the seal, and also when the user dies, the seal will break destroying his body and anything around him, it will live a black space of nothing.
    This seal tries to stay in a mage's body, thats way it gives magic and power to the owner if its necessary, the seal has a mind too, it can communicate with the owner and feel the power around him.

    The spell not only uses destructive power, the seal is a door of a demon power, he has the power to manipulate space, but he uses it for destruction power. The caster has a special link with the demon, he was chosen by the demon to represent him. The seal has a total manipulation on time and space, but its a strong power hard to control, its used to destroy things, that's what the demon like.
    Strengths:
    - The user gains the power to manipulate the space with the demon's permission, he most of the times gives him the permission when the caster will use it to destroy something, even a simple shoe.
    - The seal gives him power when the user needs it, this does not happen always, he needs to be in extreme conditions.
    - The caster gains manipulation of time in extreme needs, he needs a lot of power so he can only use time spells until B-Rank.
    Weaknesses:
    - The magic has a link with a demon, the user will receive 20% more damage from demon slayers spells.
    - The magic is destructive, it can damage the user and his friends as well.
    - The user can lose easily control of the spell, he will destroy anything that he finds, with out even thinking it.
    - The space destruction only works with non-living objects, it doesn't work with living things.
    - The caster needs a lot of power to use time spells, so he can only use time spells until being B-Rank.
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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 20th February 2015, 8:14 pm

    I think I corrected everything, not that sure


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    Completed Re: Jikū sōsa: Destruction

    Post by Mr. Anderson 24th February 2015, 7:31 pm

    Anyone? D:


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