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    TakeOver Divine Soul (Light)

    carealotqueen
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    First Skill: Take Over
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    Bump TakeOver Divine Soul (Light)

    Post by carealotqueen 14th October 2015, 3:07 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Takeover: Divine Soul
    Secondary Magic: (must be filled in later. magic bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Divine soul allows the user to Takeover Divine beings and become it. the user gains the being's abilities, strengths and also its Weaknesses. each individual has a different element that all of their full body takeovers are associated with. the rank of each takeover form is equal to the user's ability.

    Strengths:

    • increase damaged by 20%


    • Speed is increased by 20%


    • Because of the divine Blood one stops ageing at the age of 20


    Weaknesses:

    • Uses a lot of Magical energy


    • could result Magic deficiency for a Day (if not healed) if a God is Taken over


    • only allows one element meaning each divine being that is taken over has to be of the same element


    Lineage: Avatar of Illyria
    Description:In the old days, a demon goddess once ruled over the vast emptiness of space. She called each one her garden, for she like to sow seeds where ever her slimy tentacles would land on. Millenniums passed and the old gods were forgotten. Losing worshippers means losing access to their world. Fortunately for her, a small sect who used to worship her clumsily left the artefacts she left them in their temple for everyone to see or rather steal. Yes the temple was well guarded with guardian monsters and booby traps. But that can never stop the heart of a real adventurer.

    With the discovery of her relics, old knowledge which was supposed to be forgotten was remembered. And the door which was supposed to be close was opened. To prevent ever losing contact with this world, she offered a deal which the finder of the treasure could not refuse. "Would you like to be my vessel and have infinite powers beyond your wildest dreams."
    Ability: Vessels of the Forgotten One are given enhanced speed (25%) and strength (25%) as well as enhanced magic defense and durability (25% damage reduction). Also allows them to call the forgotten one if ever they are in need of assistance.
    They gain a user-ranked (S-max) signature spell that summons a tentacle to attack or grasp or a non-signature spell(S-max) that summons tentacles to attack or grasp in an area effect.
    Once per thread an S-rank mage user can call Illyria into this world. A 20 meter tall mollusk like monster with 12 tentacles stretching up to 10 meters long and bat like wings with the same length used for attacking and sometimes flying. Once summoned, she gains the same base stats of the user but with their values increased by 100%(besides speed which is instead lowered) and the mage's own increase by 25%. The goddess only has 50% of the HP of the user and moves 50% slowed than the user due to her size and weight. The goddess can only remain in our world for 3 posts of until defeated. This ability cannot be cancelled by user or outside forces.
    Usage: Active ability that lasts 3 posts and is once per thread. Spell is made in addition to the user’s own magic in their spells. Passive enhancements

    Unique Abilities: Divine Eyes (Passive) - user is immune to visual magic of her rank or lower (visual illusions, stone eyes, etc.)


    Spells

    Name: Divine Soul: Light Angel
    Rank: D
    Type: Takeover, Supportive
    Description: golden Aura, White robe, with white feathery wings of an angel, eyes turn to gold, hair turns golden as though it was made of gold. healing abilities and self healing. if the user sings the user's Allies' stats are increases by 10% while enemies' stats are decreased by 10% however leaves the user vulnerable until singing stops. can not cast any offensive or defensive magic.

    Name: Divine Soul: Archangel Uriel
    Rank: D
    Type: Takeover, Weaponry
    Description: Eyes turn gold, Hair turns golden, White Feathery wings with Gold armoured Plating, wears a golden armour that is both strong and light which reduces Magic damage by 30% , has a golden Aura. Armour is highly Magic resistant but movability is decreases by 5%. utilises Weaponry Made Of Divine Light (a bit like maker magic and requip magic mixed together). high physical Strength 20% higher than pre full body take over but speed is lower 20% due to the golden Armour. Flight (with the wings that she has which is Armored) she practically becomes an armoured Angel.

    Name: Divine Soul: The Light God
    Rank: D
    Type: Takeover, Offensive
    Description: appearance unknown due to the tremendous light that surrounds it, all that is seen is the glowing golden light. uses Light Magic. Light Magic strengthens it. Highly destructive (50%) but a user usually cannot go in this form unless Angered and uses a Lot of Magic Power. also hard to control so rarely utilised. Levitation. (magic a bit like God slayer magic since it is a god that has been taken over but magic is not black) and can cause temporary blindness (stuns) in a fight for about a minute.


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    Bump Re: TakeOver Divine Soul (Light)

    Post by Mistress Venir 15th October 2015, 2:40 pm

    Alrighty, I shall be taking a look at your magic! For All edits requested are made in this lovely color! If there's any edits made that you disagree with please let me know via PM and we'll try and work something out! In the meantime here's something that need fixing before I can do a full editing run through (though I did make some editing marks throughout):

    Please follow the Spell template:

    Magic Rulse:

    carealotqueen wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Takeover: Divine Soul
    Secondary Magic: (must be filled in later. magic bought at the store goes here)
    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Divine soul allows the user to Takeover Divine beings and become it. the user gains the being's abilities, strengths and also its Weaknesses. each individual has a different element that all of their full body takeovers are associated with. the rank of each takeover form is equal to the user's ability.

    Strengths:

    • increase damaged(By how much?)


    • Speed is increased(By how much?)


    • Because of the divine Blood one stops ageing at the age of 20


    Weaknesses:

    • Uses a lot of Magical energy


    • could result Magic deficiency for a Day (if not healed) if a God is Taken over


    • only allow three full body takeovers and no partial takeovers(I believe you must have partial takeovers to have full body takeovers but let me check.)


    • only allows one element meaning each divine being that is taken over has to be of the same element


    Lineage: Eagle Vision - In an ancient civilization, there were three enormous eagles that carried wisdom and knowledge. They shared it with those who were worthy and intelligent enough not to abuse it. When they felt their life was almost coming to an end, they bestowed their gifts onto three young mages who they deemed worthy. The mages and their descendants gained the ability to see incredibly far, but also to gain incredible sudden insight. They can read body language like no other and find hidden messages in conversations.
    Ability: User can see through lies, has extended vision range (telescopic vision) and capabilities, and can further understand a person through the minute movements and twitches of the living body.
    Usage: Passive.

    Unique Abilities: Divine Eyes (Passive) - user is immune to visual magic(Please explain what visual magic is and then we'll see if you're immune to it.)


    Spells

    Name: Divine Soul: Light Angel
    Rank: (see Character Rank)(just put D)
    Type: Takeover, Supportive
    Description: golden Aura, White robe, with white feathery wings of an angel, eyes turn to gold, hair turns golden as though it was made of gold. healing abilities and self healing. if the user sings the user's Allies' stats are increases by 10% while enemies' stats are decreased by 10% however leaves the user vulnerable until singing stops. Immune to Light magic due to the Fact that Light is only Absorbed however the user can not attack with it. the can not cast any offensive or defensive magic. can also boost by 50% another's stats by singing the person's name and the stat that it wants to increase temporarily during a fight.(Way too many effects for one spell. Also you cannot be "immune" to light magic you can take reduced damage from it but you're gonna have to pick between that, the 10% increase/decrease, and the boost someone else's stat thing.)

    Name: Divine Soul: Archangel Uriel
    Rank: (see character Rank)(Just put D)
    Type: Takeover, Weaponry
    Description: Eyes turn gold, Hair turns golden, White Feathery wings with Gold armoured Plating, wears a golden armour that is both strong and light, has a golden Aura. Armour is highly Magic resistant but movability is decreases. utilises Weaponry Made Of Divine Light. high physical Strength but speed is lower. Flight(How much stronger is she how much slower is she? What is going on in this spell exactly? Does she get armor/wings??? Or does she get a weapon too?)

    Name: Divine Soul: The Light God
    Rank: (see Character Rank)
    Type: Takeover, Offensive
    Description: appearance unknown due to the tremendous light that surrounds it, all that is seen is the glowing golden light. Light Magic. Light Magic strengthens it. Highly destructive but a user usually cannot go in this form unless Angered and uses a Lot of Magic Power. also hard to control so rarely utilised. Levitation.(What does this do?)

    (You can also have a 4th D-Rank spell.)


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    carealotqueen
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    Post by carealotqueen 29th October 2015, 5:15 am

    I fixed the things u said to so see what u think


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    Mistress Venir
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    Bump Re: TakeOver Divine Soul (Light)

    Post by Mistress Venir 30th October 2015, 10:46 am

    Alrighty we're slowly but surely grttimg there! There's just a few tiny issues:

    • Your spells also aren't following the correct spell template as I had mentioned before at the top of my previous post.


    • Your lineage: You rolled like 5 times (3 dice each time) in the lineage thread, however hoe the lineges work is you get 3 free rolls (3 dice rolled) so the lineages in which you can choose from are gonna be the first 3 that your rolled: Avatar of Illyria, Pride of a Mercenary, and Silver Chaotica


    • Strengths: In order to have a full body take over you should have a partial take ove.


    • Unique abilities: I wanted to let you know that you're allowed to have up to 3 at D-Rank so you can add more if you'd like or if you're happy with just one that is fine. Also note that she immune to visual magic of her rank and not that of higher ranks.


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