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    Story of the Sword [Completed]

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    Completed Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 10th October 2014, 3:24 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Story of the Sword
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder/Lost Magic
    Description: Story of the Sword is a Holder Magic that has secretly existed since Fiore was first-discovered. A book and sword existed, bonded together by a single magic reserve. The writer of this book created several tales of different swordsman. Each swordsman held the same sword, except for a distinct purpose. This very sword was created officially by the same person who wrote this book. Later on, as magic was also first-discovered in Fiore, so was magic in the author. The author blessed the book and sword during his life, and passed them onto his successor, who did the same once he or she died in his or her lifetime. Ultimately, the author and his successors literally lived by this book. The author lived by the first chapter he wrote in this book; the first sword he described, then sent his successor off to live by the second sword. A final chapter came about during Ayato's time, and was known as "Genesis": the beginning of time. This tale told of the ultimate swordsman, who united the powers of all previous swordsman into one.

    Ayato uses this Lost Magic properly by holding the book and sword at the same time, every time the two are in need, for they only work together. The book and sword were blessed to never leave their owner's side when in desperate need, which is considered to be Ayato's "starting benefit." As a D-Rank Mage, however, Ayato can only control the powers of Chapter One in his ancestor's book. The book and sword were blessed to look modern in any generation they've lived in, thankfully, and so while one would think the book is too old to be comprehensible, it is not.


    Strengths:

    • Instant- Transactions with this magic are immediate
    • Versatile- Numerous abilities were written in this book, and so as long as Ayato is strong enough to control them, they are all in his grasp
    • The Aspect of Self- The objective of this magic is to enhance the user, which it can do in endless ways: speed, strength, health- whatever is written in the book as long as the user can handle it. So far, Ayato can only lift as much as his weight, regardless of magic. However, as he ranks up, Ayato could lift various heavy items that an average man couldn't normally lift. It is all dependent on rank for each aspect of self. For example, he could lift a 10 foot tree with 2 feet in diameter.

    Weaknesses:

    • Drains Life- As the user is connected with his book and sword under this form of magic, every spell costs the user a various amount of health. The set amount is listed in his spells.
    • Extra MP- Due to the immense power produced from this form of magic, extra magic power is required to use spells in Ayato's case than the average Mage. The set amount is listed in his spells.
    • Metallic Material- These spells are useless against metal-related materials of equal rank (regarding strength).

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Channeling- Allows the user to convert abilities written in an ancient book (the one specified in the magic description) to his sword (also specified in the magic description)
    • Expulsion- Allows the user to expel whatever abilities that his sword gathers towards his opponent in a negative manner (regarding the target). For example, Ayato converts a fire-related spell written in his book to his sword, then unleashes that same fire upon the enemy.
    • Story and Sword- This allows Ayato to place his swords in a portal created by his book (solely for that purpose) for later use.
    • Perfect Memory- All memories Ayato experiences are stored in the book. Additionally, by focusing on the book, Ayato can recover the memories, making his own memory perfect.  



    D-Ranked Spells:


    C-Ranked Spells:


    Signature Spell:


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Aria Beleren 11th October 2014, 12:47 pm

    Seitenshi Ayato wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Story of the Sword
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder/Lost Magic The term Lost Magic is loosely used here. You might want to expand upon this.
    Description: Story of the Sword is a Lost Magic that has secretly existed since Fiore was first-discovered. A book and sword existed, bonded together by a single magic reserve. The writer of this book created several tales of different swordsman. Each swordsman held the same sword, except for a distinct purpose. This very sword was created officially by the same person who wrote this book. Later on, as magic was also first-discovered in Fiore, so was magic in the author. The author blessed the book and sword during his life, and passed them onto his successor, who did the same once he or she died in his or her lifetime. Ultimately, the author and his successors literally lived by this book. The author lived by the first chapter he wrote in this book; the first sword he described, then sent his successor off to live by the second sword. A final chapter came about during Ayato's time, and was known as "Genesis": the beginning of time. This tale told of the ultimate swordsman, who united the powers of all previous swordsman into one.
    This does not define "Lost Magic"

    Ayato uses this Lost Magic properly by holding the book and sword at the same time, every time the two are in need, for they only work together. The book and sword were blessed to never leave their owner's side when in desperate need, which is considered to be Ayato's "starting benefit." As a D-Rank Mage, however, Ayato can only control the powers of Chapter One in his ancestor's book. The book and sword were blessed to look modern in any generation they've lived in, thankfully, and so while one would think the book is too old to be comprehensible, it is not.


    Strengths:

    • Instant- Transactions with this magic are immediate
    • Versatile- Numerous abilities were written in this book, and so as long as Ayato is strong enough to control them, they are all in his grasp
    • The Aspect of Self- The objective of this magic is to enhance the user, which it can do in endless ways: speed, strength, health- whatever is written in the book as long as the user can handle it You need to specify how this enhances strength. Give me examples of what you can and can't lift at your current rank.

    Weaknesses:

    • Drains Life- As the user is connected with his book and sword under this form of magic, every spell costs the user a various amount of health Please place here that the set amount is listed in the spell.
    • Extra MP- Due to the immense power produced from this form of magic, extra magic power is required to use spells in Ayato's case than the average Mage. Please place here that the amount is listed in the spell too.
    • Metallic Material- These spells are useless against metal-related materials of equal rank (regarding strength).

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Channeling- Allows the user to channel abilities entailed in a book to his sword To general of a description, please specify more. I have no clue what you're talking about here.
    • Expulsion- Allows the user to expel whatever abilities that his sword gathers towards his opponent in a negative manner (regarding the target) To general give me examples
    • Extraordinary Memorization- Allows the user to gain knowledge over everything written in the Story of the Sword, with the flaw of only being able to use certain abilities at certain levels of magic (D-Rank to S-Rank)You're going to have to give me examples here too.


    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: Chapter One- Unsheathed Seeker
    Rank: D
    Type: Supportive
    Description: By remaining still, while before an incoming attack, or within the presence of a D-Ranked summon, Ayato lunges his sword upward, and creates a black hole in the sky. This black hole only devours the summon(s), or spells incoming instantaneously, ultimately ceasing their existence. This is a sacred spell that devours spells even the user's naked eye cannot trace. Instead, the sword lunges itself immediately, as if it has its own eye, and causes the black hole to open instantly.
    Strengths:

    • Nullification- Nullifies a spell of equal rank via a black hole
    • Immediate- Can capture spells even a naked eye couldn't see
    • Activation- Activates instantly upon the sword detecting an incoming spell or assault from a D-Ranked summon, and devours that threat


    Weaknesses:

    • Immobile- Other than the uncontrollable movement of the sword, the user mustn't move for this spell to activate properly.
    • Mandatory- This is a mandatory spell that must activate (unless on cooldown), if a noteworthy spell (a D-Ranked spell or summoning) is detected, thus giving the user no freedom
    • Life-Draining- Subtracts 5 health from the user
    • Cost- Costs 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked spell activations (15% MP for a D-Rank)
    • Duration/Cooldown- Can only be used once per post, and for one post only before a three-post cool-down is required


    Name: Chapter One- Judgment
    Rank: D
    Type: Supportive
    Description: This spell can only be used under the conditions that the target has already been hit by the user's sword directly, or has been impacted by another spell known as Unsheathed Seeker. This spell will literally divide any C or D-Rank offensive spell the opponent uses next (despite speed), and redirect it towards him or her with perfect accuracy. The redirected spell will gain new properties (though the original speed will remain unedited), and deal no damage. The divided spell, however, if it connects with the target, will leave a yellow circle on both sides of the target. These are known as stun points, and will paralyze the target for one post. This does not mean, however, that the opponent cannot use spells. The opponent can still use spells if the spells do not require any movement. The stun also deactivates if the opponent changes form, afterwards (Example: Shadow Dragon Slayers turn into shadows)
    Strengths:

    • Stunning- This spell is capable of stunning the opposition You can only stun D rank players. Include the amount of stun posts someone has to go through if they are stunned.
    • Two better than One- This spell divides an opposing spell by two, and redirects the split spell towards the enemy
    • Speed- The speed of the redirected spell remains unedited, despite being divided into two

    Weaknesses:

    • Prerequisites- The user must have already assaulted the enemy or used Unsheathed Seeker to properly use this technique
    • Life-Draining- This technique requires 10% health
    • Immobile- The user mustn't move for this technique to activate and resolve successfully. It is the book and sword that detect the incoming assault which triggers this spell
    • Cost- Requires 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked magic to use (15% for a D-Rank Mage)
    • Duration/Cooldown- This spell can be used only once per post, and for one post only before a three-post cool-down is required


    Name: Chapter One- Ghost
    Rank: D
    Type: Supportive
    Description: This spell can only be used after Unsheathed Seeker and Judgment have been used prior to this technique's activation. Through the previous two spells: Unsheathed Seeker and Judgment, the book has now read the enemy perfectly, and has gained an unrivalled sense of his/her magic, but only for a short time. This allows Ghost to trigger, which grants Ayato the freedom to phase through a following assault the foe utilizes, whether it'd be a physical attack or offensive spell. Once the user phases through the assault, he may proceed to unleash his own assault upon the enemy with his sword.
    Strengths:

    • Phasing- Allows Ayato literally run through any type of assault untouched, and proceed as if nothing happened to him
    • Additional Sense- Ayato now recognizes the form of magic the foe uses, and thanks to the book, identifies who the foe is
    • Good for Surprises- Self-explanatory. If Ayato uses this technique in a close range, it could grant him an open, nearly inevitable strike towards the enemy

    Weaknesses:

    • Prerequisites- The user must have used Unsheathed Seeker and Judgment prior to this technique for it to work
    • Life-Draining- Activating this spell requires 10% health to be lost
    • Cost- Requires 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked magic to activate (15% magic power for a D-Ranked Mage)
    • Limitations- The phasing process can only be used on either physical assaults (punching, kicking, etc) or D-Ranked spells
    • Duration/Cooldown- This spell can only be used once per post, and for one post only before a three-post cool-down is required


    Name: End of Chapter- Annihilation
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Requires the usage of Unsheathed Seeker, Judgment and Ghost prior to this spell's activation. When the requirements are met, this spell calls one thousand swords to surround the target in a perfect circle, then travel towards the enemy at 40MPH. The first sword to connect with the target deals D-Ranked damage, whereas the rest leave stun points upon the target. If any stun point is left on the target, it paralyzes them for two posts. This does not mean that the stun points stack. It is only the first stun point that paralyzes the target. The swords that follow after this point are just left for distraction and bluffs, and realistically do nothing upon the enemy. This means it is truly only the first and second sword out of the thousand that matter. The swords are summoned within a 30 meter radius of the target. 30 Meters is too big. 15 is fine.
    Strengths:

    • Stunning- Paralyzes the user for two posts Once again stunning has to be of equal rank
    • Multiple Strikes- By sacrificing his original sword for one post, a thousand are made instantaneously, surrounding the target
    • Bluffs and Distractions- Only the first and second sword that strike successfully are important as they deal damage to the enemy, and paralyze him or her. The rest are just used to make the foe hesitate, or feel endangered

    Weaknesses:

    • Life-Draining- Costs the user 10 health to use
    • Cost- Requires 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked magic to use successfully (15% magic power removed for a D-Ranked Mage)
    • Immobile- The user cannot move for this technique to activate and resolve successfully
    • Affection- This technique only affects C and D-Ranked Mages Only D rank, barriers can go up a rank as it takes "2" spells to take a barrier down in some cases.
    • Duration/Cooldown- This spell can only be used once per post, and for one post only. This spell cannot be used again until Unsheathed Seeker, Judgment and Ghost are all used an additional time



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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 11th October 2014, 1:04 pm

    All changes made. Bumping for completion


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Aria Beleren 12th October 2014, 10:11 am

    Seitenshi Ayato wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Story of the Sword
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder/Lost Magic
    Description: Story of the Sword is a Holder Magic that has secretly existed since Fiore was first-discovered. A book and sword existed, bonded together by a single magic reserve. The writer of this book created several tales of different swordsman. Each swordsman held the same sword, except for a distinct purpose. This very sword was created officially by the same person who wrote this book. Later on, as magic was also first-discovered in Fiore, so was magic in the author. The author blessed the book and sword during his life, and passed them onto his successor, who did the same once he or she died in his or her lifetime. Ultimately, the author and his successors literally lived by this book. The author lived by the first chapter he wrote in this book; the first sword he described, then sent his successor off to live by the second sword. A final chapter came about during Ayato's time, and was known as "Genesis": the beginning of time. This tale told of the ultimate swordsman, who united the powers of all previous swordsman into one.

    Ayato uses this Lost Magic properly by holding the book and sword at the same time, every time the two are in need, for they only work together. The book and sword were blessed to never leave their owner's side when in desperate need, which is considered to be Ayato's "starting benefit." As a D-Rank Mage, however, Ayato can only control the powers of Chapter One in his ancestor's book. The book and sword were blessed to look modern in any generation they've lived in, thankfully, and so while one would think the book is too old to be comprehensible, it is not.


    Strengths:

    • Instant- Transactions with this magic are immediate
    • Versatile- Numerous abilities were written in this book, and so as long as Ayato is strong enough to control them, they are all in his grasp
    • The Aspect of Self- The objective of this magic is to enhance the user, which it can do in endless ways: speed, strength, health- whatever is written in the book as long as the user can handle it. So far, Ayato can only lift as much as his weight, regardless of magic. However, as he ranks up, Ayato could lift various heavy items that an average man couldn't normally lift. It is all dependent on rank for each aspect of self. One last change here. Give me an "example" of what he can lift. Like a 10 ft tree with a 2 ft in diameter.

    Weaknesses:

    • Drains Life- As the user is connected with his book and sword under this form of magic, every spell costs the user a various amount of health. The set amount is listed in his spells.
    • Extra MP- Due to the immense power produced from this form of magic, extra magic power is required to use spells in Ayato's case than the average Mage. The set amount is listed in his spells.
    • Metallic Material- These spells are useless against metal-related materials of equal rank (regarding strength).

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Channeling- Allows the user to convert abilities written in an ancient book (the one specified in the magic description) to his sword (also specified in the magic description)
    • Expulsion- Allows the user to expel whatever abilities that his sword gathers towards his opponent in a negative manner (regarding the target). For example, Ayato converts a fire-related spell written in his book to his sword, then unleashes that same fire upon the enemy.
    • Extraordinary Memorization- Allows the user to gain knowledge over everything written in the Story of the Sword, with the flaw of only being able to use certain abilities at certain levels of magic (D-Rank to S-Rank). For example, under some circumstances (certain spells), the book can identify who a person is based on what kind of magic they use, what rank they are, and their name (that's as far as it can go).


    Spell Template
    Note: BE SPECIFIC AND ADD DETAILS

    Name: Chapter One- Unsheathed Seeker
    Rank: D
    Type: Supportive
    Description: By remaining still, while before an incoming attack, or within the presence of a D-Ranked summon, Ayato lunges his sword upward, and creates a black hole in the sky. This black hole only devours the summon(s), or spells incoming instantaneously, ultimately ceasing their existence. This is a sacred spell that devours spells even the user's naked eye cannot trace. Instead, the sword lunges itself immediately, as if it has its own eye, and causes the black hole to open instantly.
    Strengths:

    • Nullification- Nullifies a spell of equal rank via a black hole
    • Immediate- Can capture spells even a naked eye couldn't see
    • Activation- Activates instantly upon the sword detecting an incoming spell or assault from a D-Ranked summon, and devours that threat


    Weaknesses:

    • Immobile- Other than the uncontrollable movement of the sword, the user mustn't move for this spell to activate properly.
    • Mandatory- This is a mandatory spell that must activate (unless on cooldown), if a noteworthy spell (a D-Ranked spell or summoning) is detected, thus giving the user no freedom
    • Life-Draining- Subtracts 5 health from the user
    • Cost- Costs 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked spell activations (15% MP for a D-Rank)
    • Duration/Cooldown- Can only be used once per post, and for one post only before a three-post cool-down is required


    Name: Chapter One- Judgment
    Rank: D
    Type: Supportive
    Description: This spell can only be used under the conditions that the target has already been hit by the user's sword directly, or has been impacted by another spell known as Unsheathed Seeker. This spell will literally divide any C or D-Rank offensive spell the opponent uses next (despite speed), and redirect it towards him or her with perfect accuracy. The redirected spell will gain new properties (though the original speed will remain unedited), and deal no damage. The divided spell, however, if it connects with the target, will leave a yellow circle on both sides of the target. These are known as stun points, and will paralyze the target for one post. This does not mean, however, that the opponent cannot use spells. The opponent can still use spells if the spells do not require any movement. The stun also deactivates if the opponent changes form, afterwards (Example: Shadow Dragon Slayers turn into shadows)
    Strengths:

    • Stunning- This spell is capable of stunning the opposition for one post. The opposition must be D-Ranked.
    • Two better than One- This spell divides an opposing spell by two, and redirects the split spell towards the enemy
    • Speed- The speed of the redirected spell remains unedited, despite being divided into two

    Weaknesses:

    • Prerequisites- The user must have already assaulted the enemy or used Unsheathed Seeker to properly use this technique
    • Life-Draining- This technique requires 10% health
    • Immobile- The user mustn't move for this technique to activate and resolve successfully. It is the book and sword that detect the incoming assault which triggers this spell
    • Cost- Requires 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked magic to use (15% for a D-Rank Mage)
    • Duration/Cooldown- This spell can be used only once per post, and for one post only before a three-post cool-down is required


    Name: Chapter One- Ghost
    Rank: D
    Type: Supportive
    Description: This spell can only be used after Unsheathed Seeker and Judgment have been used prior to this technique's activation. Through the previous two spells: Unsheathed Seeker and Judgment, the book has now read the enemy perfectly, and has gained an unrivalled sense of his/her magic, but only for a short time. This allows Ghost to trigger, which grants Ayato the freedom to phase through a following assault the foe utilizes, whether it'd be a physical attack or offensive spell. Once the user phases through the assault, he may proceed to unleash his own assault upon the enemy with his sword.
    Strengths:

    • Phasing- Allows Ayato literally run through any type of assault untouched, and proceed as if nothing happened to him
    • Additional Sense- Ayato now recognizes the form of magic the foe uses, and thanks to the book, identifies who the foe is
    • Good for Surprises- Self-explanatory. If Ayato uses this technique in a close range, it could grant him an open, nearly inevitable strike towards the enemy

    Weaknesses:

    • Prerequisites- The user must have used Unsheathed Seeker and Judgment prior to this technique for it to work
    • Life-Draining- Activating this spell requires 10% health to be lost
    • Cost- Requires 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked magic to activate (15% magic power for a D-Ranked Mage)
    • Limitations- The phasing process can only be used on either physical assaults (punching, kicking, etc) or D-Ranked spells
    • Duration/Cooldown- This spell can only be used once per post, and for one post only before a three-post cool-down is required


    Name: End of Chapter- Annihilation
    Rank: D
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Requires the usage of Unsheathed Seeker, Judgment and Ghost prior to this spell's activation. When the requirements are met, this spell calls one thousand swords to surround the target in a perfect circle, then travel towards the enemy at 40MPH. The first sword to connect with the target deals D-Ranked damage, whereas the rest leave stun points upon the target. If any stun point is left on the target, it paralyzes them for two posts. This does not mean that the stun points stack. It is only the first stun point that paralyzes the target. The swords that follow after this point are just left for distraction and bluffs, and realistically do nothing upon the enemy. This means it is truly only the first and second sword out of the thousand that matter. The swords are summoned within a 15 meter radius of the target.
    Strengths:

    • Stunning- Paralyzes the user for two posts (only D-Ranked Mages)
    • Multiple Strikes- By sacrificing his original sword for one post, a thousand are made instantaneously, surrounding the target
    • Bluffs and Distractions- Only the first and second sword that strike successfully are important as they deal damage to the enemy, and paralyze him or her. The rest are just used to make the foe hesitate, or feel endangered

    Weaknesses:

    • Life-Draining- Costs the user 10 health to use
    • Cost- Requires 1.5 amounts of D-Ranked magic to use successfully (15% magic power removed for a D-Ranked Mage)
    • Immobile- The user cannot move for this technique to activate and resolve successfully
    • Affection- This technique only affects D-Ranked Mages
    • Duration/Cooldown- This spell can only be used once per post, and for one post only. This spell cannot be used again until Unsheathed Seeker, Judgment and Ghost are all used an additional time



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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 12th October 2014, 10:13 am

    Bumping again for completion


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Aria Beleren 12th October 2014, 10:32 am

    Sweet
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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Tōwa Lazmira 10th February 2015, 3:17 pm

    Unapproved for Balancing Edits will be up within 24 hours


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 14th February 2015, 3:32 pm

    Edits discussed made.


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Tōwa Lazmira 20th February 2015, 8:05 pm

    Approved


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 25th February 2015, 11:58 am

    Moved for adding of C rank spells.
    Also added in your final D rank spell that you got approved in a seperate thread


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 25th February 2015, 2:06 pm

    Thanks for the help!

    Additions made.


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 26th February 2015, 12:18 pm

    Seitenshi Ayato wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Story of the Sword
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder/Lost Magic
    Description: Story of the Sword is a Holder Magic that has secretly existed since Fiore was first-discovered. A book and sword existed, bonded together by a single magic reserve. The writer of this book created several tales of different swordsman. Each swordsman held the same sword, except for a distinct purpose. This very sword was created officially by the same person who wrote this book. Later on, as magic was also first-discovered in Fiore, so was magic in the author. The author blessed the book and sword during his life, and passed them onto his successor, who did the same once he or she died in his or her lifetime. Ultimately, the author and his successors literally lived by this book. The author lived by the first chapter he wrote in this book; the first sword he described, then sent his successor off to live by the second sword. A final chapter came about during Ayato's time, and was known as "Genesis": the beginning of time. This tale told of the ultimate swordsman, who united the powers of all previous swordsman into one.

    Ayato uses this Lost Magic properly by holding the book and sword at the same time, every time the two are in need, for they only work together. The book and sword were blessed to never leave their owner's side when in desperate need, which is considered to be Ayato's "starting benefit." As a D-Rank Mage, however, Ayato can only control the powers of Chapter One in his ancestor's book. The book and sword were blessed to look modern in any generation they've lived in, thankfully, and so while one would think the book is too old to be comprehensible, it is not.


    Strengths:

    • Instant- Transactions with this magic are immediate
    • Versatile- Numerous abilities were written in this book, and so as long as Ayato is strong enough to control them, they are all in his grasp
    • The Aspect of Self- The objective of this magic is to enhance the user, which it can do in endless ways: speed, strength, health- whatever is written in the book as long as the user can handle it. So far, Ayato can only lift as much as his weight, regardless of magic. However, as he ranks up, Ayato could lift various heavy items that an average man couldn't normally lift. It is all dependent on rank for each aspect of self. For example, he could lift a 10 foot tree with 2 feet in diameter.

    Weaknesses:

    • Drains Life- As the user is connected with his book and sword under this form of magic, every spell costs the user a various amount of health. The set amount is listed in his spells.
    • Extra MP- Due to the immense power produced from this form of magic, extra magic power is required to use spells in Ayato's case than the average Mage. The set amount is listed in his spells.
    • Metallic Material- These spells are useless against metal-related materials of equal rank (regarding strength).

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Channeling- Allows the user to convert abilities written in an ancient book (the one specified in the magic description) to his sword (also specified in the magic description)
    • Expulsion- Allows the user to expel whatever abilities that his sword gathers towards his opponent in a negative manner (regarding the target). For example, Ayato converts a fire-related spell written in his book to his sword, then unleashes that same fire upon the enemy.



    D-Ranked Spells:


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    Signature Spell:

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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 26th February 2015, 1:06 pm

    Changes made. Decided to get rid of the remote idea in my first C-Ranked spell.

    Thanks for the help!


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 27th February 2015, 6:32 pm

    I feel like the first of the two new abilities is too much. PErhaps a bit of focus in order to see through it and maybe it costs a small amount of mp.

    The second one...is a no for me.


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Alito 27th February 2015, 7:13 pm

    Alright. Edits made. Hopefully this can be approved now.


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    Completed Re: Story of the Sword [Completed]

    Post by Rosetta Crawford 28th February 2015, 2:47 am

    Approved


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