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    Post by Guest 22nd July 2014, 9:07 am

    Hey there Alyia, Legzy here again to review your magics =]

    First of all I wanna say that this is definitely an interesting magic so nice work on that. However there are a few things that need to be edited.

    1. At D-rank you start off with 4 spells. You can buy more spell slots from the Official Magic Shop once you have sufficient jewels. I won't check each spell individually at the moment as I don't know what spells you'll want to keep and what ones you'll remove, so that will come later.

    2. You mention that heavenly magic increases MP and HP regeneration. I can accept HP regen increase so long as it's not too large, but MP increase is a no-no I'm afraid. Mages regenerate 10% MP every 5 posts.

    3. All of your cooldowns are rather long (as perhaps are some of your durations). Cooldowns are usually equal to or one post longer than the duration (depending on the spell in question), so having a 4 post duration with an 8 post cooldown is really, REALLY long XD

    4. Could you possibly add a bit more of a description to your spells please? Try to get a paragraph for each one.


    I'll leave you with these edits for now since you've obviously got some decisions to make and whatnot. Please Bump this thread, nudge me in the chatbox and/or PM me as soon as you're ready for me to review the spells in full detail =]
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    Post by Guest 22nd July 2014, 10:27 am

    Thank you for the edits so far. I've now gone through your spells and suggested some edits which are written up in blue. Once these edits are made I can't see any reason not to approve the magic =]

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    Post by Guest 22nd July 2014, 10:59 am

    Thanks for all the edits =]

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    Post by Indiana Jones 21st August 2014, 1:18 pm

    Unlocked for C-rank additions.


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    Post by Aliannah 21st August 2014, 2:01 pm

    Bump.
    Finished.


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    Post by Grizzly 21st August 2014, 6:12 pm

    Depths of Hell:

    "~This spell increases the damage of other dark spells used after it is cast by 20%
    ~Decreases damage of Dark spells by 5-10% depending on the rank of the spell"


    Do you mean that this spell decreases damage of Heavenly Spells by 5-10%? If not, please explain this vagueness.

    Fallen Blessed:

    Lower the range to 80 sq ft.

    You want to scale this spell's strength by charging. Sorry, but to charge your spells will have to be separate. This spell's flat range and flat damage will be 80 sq ft and regular damage for an AoE C Rank spell. All I can allow is that you can change the AMOUNT of beams in one post if you charge this spell for one or two posts.

    So, instant cast: 5 beams of light per post
    1 post charge: 7 beams of light per post
    2 post charge: 10 beams of light per post

    Other than that, I can't allow anything for scaling.

    Also, add how wide the beams are.

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    Can only absorb light and holy spells of user's rank up to B Rank or below.


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    Post by Aliannah 21st August 2014, 10:40 pm

    Bump. Edits have been made.


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