Hey there Alyia, Legzy here again to review your magics =]
First of all I wanna say that this is definitely an interesting magic so nice work on that. However there are a few things that need to be edited.
1. At D-rank you start off with 4 spells. You can buy more spell slots from the Official Magic Shop once you have sufficient jewels. I won't check each spell individually at the moment as I don't know what spells you'll want to keep and what ones you'll remove, so that will come later.
2. You mention that heavenly magic increases MP and HP regeneration. I can accept HP regen increase so long as it's not too large, but MP increase is a no-no I'm afraid. Mages regenerate 10% MP every 5 posts.
3. All of your cooldowns are rather long (as perhaps are some of your durations). Cooldowns are usually equal to or one post longer than the duration (depending on the spell in question), so having a 4 post duration with an 8 post cooldown is really, REALLY long XD
4. Could you possibly add a bit more of a description to your spells please? Try to get a paragraph for each one.
I'll leave you with these edits for now since you've obviously got some decisions to make and whatnot. Please Bump this thread, nudge me in the chatbox and/or PM me as soon as you're ready for me to review the spells in full detail =]
First of all I wanna say that this is definitely an interesting magic so nice work on that. However there are a few things that need to be edited.
1. At D-rank you start off with 4 spells. You can buy more spell slots from the Official Magic Shop once you have sufficient jewels. I won't check each spell individually at the moment as I don't know what spells you'll want to keep and what ones you'll remove, so that will come later.
2. You mention that heavenly magic increases MP and HP regeneration. I can accept HP regen increase so long as it's not too large, but MP increase is a no-no I'm afraid. Mages regenerate 10% MP every 5 posts.
3. All of your cooldowns are rather long (as perhaps are some of your durations). Cooldowns are usually equal to or one post longer than the duration (depending on the spell in question), so having a 4 post duration with an 8 post cooldown is really, REALLY long XD
4. Could you possibly add a bit more of a description to your spells please? Try to get a paragraph for each one.
I'll leave you with these edits for now since you've obviously got some decisions to make and whatnot. Please Bump this thread, nudge me in the chatbox and/or PM me as soon as you're ready for me to review the spells in full detail =]