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    Daichi Rin's Magic [FINISHED]

    DeathTouch
    DeathTouch

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    Lineage : Viktor's Descent
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    Guild : Savage Skull
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    Age : 26
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    First Skill: Sinistram Umbra of Abaddon
    Second Skill:
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    Post by DeathTouch 5th July 2014, 7:01 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Sinistram Umbra of Abaddon
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster and Holder

    Description: If translated then "Sinistram Umbra of Abaddon" literally means Devil's left hand of Darkness, which perfectly explains the nature of this magic. Daichi wields a sword in his left hand which he mainly uses to gather and induce it with his magical power and release in different forms of attacks, mainly being slashes of different sizes and purposes. This magic mainly focuses on offensive attacks and has a minimal amount of defensive skills, such as a simple shield or barrier.
    When using this dark magic, Daichi tries to be careful not to hit any comrades as the magic affects and reacts with anyone and anything it gets in physical contact with. He first gets as close as possible to the enemy and only then begins carrying out several quick attacks, whilst avoiding get too far from the target - distance is his weakness due to most skills being close combat based.

    Strengths:


    • Single Targeting - This type of magic is ideal for destroying ranged mages via close combat and quick attacks. Single targeting allows Daichi to keep focusing on that one particular person and helps him to avoid falling into traps.


    • High movement speed-  Some of the skills either passively or actively increase Daichi's movement in order to reach his foes in the quickest possible time.


    • Light Magic – Daichi's dark magic power is extra-efficient when fighting against light mages as his skills are going to do extra damage and will be penetrating a portion of their defensive skills.




    Weaknesses:

    • Long Range Magic – Daichi is almost helpless against mages who are comfortable with fighting at long range as he won't be able to get in range to deal any damage to them unless he finds a way to get close to them.


    • Light Magic – As well as a strength, light magic is also a weakness as its power is going to penetrate his defensive skills as well as his would, but a huge disadvantage is that Daichi has almost no defensive skills, which is a huge weakness.


    • Minimal Defense – This type of magic largely focuses on offensive attacks and has almost no defense against any type of magic so Daichi will have difficulty evading and dodging attacks.


    • Weapon – One of Daichi's weakness is that he can only perform his offensive skills whilst wielding his weapon so if he would get disarmed then he would get in a very difficult situation as he wouldn't be able to perform any skills.


    Abilities/Powers:


    • Dark Vision – Due to Daichi controlling dark magic he receives a passive trait which enables him to perfectly see in complete darkness, which helps him to travel during night through dark tunnels/forests.


    • Shadow Footsteps – Whilst being in the dark/shadow, Daichi receives a passive buff which increases his movement speed by 25%. Other movement speed increasing stack as well until his movement speed is increased to a maximum of 50% - after that no additional movement speed can be stacked.


    • Moon's Darkness Empowerment – Whilst fighting under the moon's darkness, Daichi receives an extra 20% damage towards any type of mages. Also Daichi takes 50% less damage from his own attacks whilst being under the effect of “Moon's Darkness Empowerment”.


    • Eyes in the Darkness – Daichi's possession and ability of controlling darkness allows him to use shadows and dark patches as his own eyes to observe things. He places his palm on a shadow or dark patch and can use the shadow/dark patch as his eyes, spying on people without getting spotted.


    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:


    Last edited by DeathTouch on 14th July 2014, 10:09 am; edited 7 times in total


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    Post by Guest 6th July 2014, 4:23 pm

    Heya DeathTouch, sorry it's taken me a while to review this.

    First of all, nice work so far. I'm liking the look of this magic =]

    Next up, there are a few edits that need doing before I can approve the magic. All edits are in the spoiler below and are written in blue so that they stand out from the rest of the text.

    Please post a bump as soon as the edits are made. If you want to talk about any of the edits I request then please PM me and I'll happily talk to you about them =]

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    DeathTouch
    DeathTouch

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    Lineage : Viktor's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 196
    Guild : Savage Skull
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Experience : 275

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sinistram Umbra of Abaddon
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by DeathTouch 6th July 2014, 4:41 pm

    Bump. ^_^


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    Post by Guest 6th July 2014, 4:54 pm

    Very nice work on this magic =] Have fun with it!

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    Indiana Jones
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    Post by Indiana Jones 14th July 2014, 10:03 am

    DeathTouch wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Sinistram Umbra of Abaddon
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster and Holder

    Description: If translated then "Sinistram Umbra of Abaddon" literally means Devil's left hand of Darkness, which perfectly explains the nature of this magic. Daichi wields a sword in his left hand which he mainly uses to gather and induce it with his magical power and release in different forms of attacks, mainly being slashes of different sizes and purposes. This magic mainly focuses on offensive attacks and has a minimal amount of defensive skills, such as a simple shield or barrier.
    When using this dark magic, Daichi tries to be careful not to hit any comrades as the magic affects and reacts with anyone and anything it gets in physical contact with. He first gets as close as possible to the enemy and only then begins carrying out several quick attacks, whilst avoiding get too far from the target - distance is his weakness due to most skills being close combat based.

    Strengths:


    • Single Targeting - This type of magic is ideal for destroying ranged mages via close combat and quick attacks. Single targeting allows Daichi to keep focusing on that one particular person and helps him to avoid falling into traps.


    • High movement speed-  Some of the skills either passively or actively increase Daichi's movement in order to reach his foes in the quickest possible time.


    • Light Magic – Daichi's dark magic power is extra-efficient when fighting against light mages as his skills are going to do extra damage and will be penetrating a portion of their defensive skills.




    Weaknesses:

    • Long Range Magic – Daichi is almost helpless against mages who are comfortable with fighting at long range as he won't be able to get in range to deal any damage to them unless he finds a way to get close to them.


    • Light Magic – As well as a strength, light magic is also a weakness as its power is going to penetrate his defensive skills as well as his would, but a huge disadvantage is that Daichi has almost no defensive skills, which is a huge weakness.


    • Minimal Defense – This type of magic largely focuses on offensive attacks and has almost no defense against any type of magic so Daichi will have difficulty evading and dodging attacks.


    • Weapon – One of Daichi's weakness is that he can only perform his offensive skills whilst wielding his weapon so if he would get disarmed then he would get in a very difficult situation as he wouldn't be able to perform any skills.


    Abilities/Powers:


    • Dark Vision – Due to Daichi controlling dark magic he receives a passive trait which enables him to perfectly see in complete darkness, which helps him to travel during night through dark tunnels/forests.


    • Shadow Footsteps – Whilst being in the dark/shadow, Daichi receives a passive buff which increases his movement speed by 25%. Other movement speed increasing stack as well until his movement speed is increased to a maximum of 50% - after that no additional movement speed can be stacked.


    • Moon's Darkness Empowerment – Whilst fighting under the moon's darkness, Daichi receives an extra 20% damage towards any type of mages. Also Daichi takes 50% less damage from his own attacks whilst being under the effect of “Moon's Darkness Empowerment”.


    • Eyes in the Darkness – Daichi's possession and ability of controlling darkness allows him to use shadows and dark patches as his own eyes to observe things. He places his palm on a shadow or dark patch and can use the shadow/dark patch as his eyes, spying on people without getting spotted.


    D-Rank Spells:

    C-Rank Spells:

    Okay, the edits are in this color. Please bump the thread when edits have been made. ;3


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    Post by Indiana Jones 14th July 2014, 10:25 am

    Edits have been made. So nothing else for me to do but this. 

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