Magic of Jun Kisaragi

Magic

Primary Magic: Six Succession Art

Secondary Magic: None
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Six Succession Art taught by his Master in the land of Bushido, Midi.
What does the Art mean?
Six Succesion Art alson known as The Six Form of Life. It Six Succesion Art is divided in 6 volumes of books.
1. The Human Realm (D rank class)
2. The Animal Realm (D-C rank class)
3. The Hungry Ghost Realm (C rank class)
4. The Hell Realm (B rank Class)
5. The Asura Realm (A rank Class)
6. The God Realm (higher rank class)
The user must master first volume of book then the second then the third... This art is an offensive magic and supportive magic. The supportive magic consist in buffing yourself,which we called AURA, in other words a magic that increase your strenght, agility, dexterity and stamina. The offensive magic consist in distracting the enemy or erasing your presence then attacking them.
The Master taught to his student to master the Six Form Of Life.
Jun was taught the way to wield a katana with the combination of the Six Succesion Art.

How to use this art?
Using this art needs a lot of concentration and practice. Firstly, the person needs to cast the magic on him to increase his agility, stamina and streght. Secondly, after the supportive magic is casted, he can finally use the offensive magic. In other words, he can't use the offensive magic if he didn't cast the supportive skills. The Six Succession Art consist, first casting the supportive magic and then he can use the offensive magic. If the person didn't cast the supportive magic, he might get an injury or might exhaust himself.

Strengths:
- Instant Kill: In other words: killing fast the enemy.
- Buffing himself: Increasing his streght, agility, dexterity and stamina.
- Longer duration of his buff.
- Close Combat: Fighting the enemy in close combat.

Weaknesses:
- The person can't buff the other person. The supportive magic is only for him.
- Exhaustion when the buff is gone.
- Long Range combat counter him.
- Every usage of arts gets minus MP.

Abilities/Powers:
- Samurai's Will (Passive): When the person is low HP, his strenght, agility, dexterity and stamina will increase and his damge will be doubled.
- Stealth detection (Passive): Detects the presence of the enemy.

Spell Template

Shining Aura:

Goko-Joji (Curved Blade X Slash):

Shōshitsu ken'nomai (Vanishing Sword Dance):

Meditation:

Secondary Magic: None
Caster or Holder: Caster
Description: Six Succession Art taught by his Master in the land of Bushido, Midi. This art, also called magic, is divided in two arts: offensive art and supportive art . In other words, The supportive magic consists in increasing their agility, strenght, dexterity and stamina. The offensive magic consist in killing the enemies in a instant.

How to use this art?
Using this art needs a lot of concentration and practice. Firstly, the person needs to cast the magic on him to increase his agility, stamina and streght. Secondly, after the supportive magic is casted, he can finally use the offensive magic. In other words, he can't use the offensive magic if he didn't cast the supportive skills. The Six Succession Art consist, first casting the supportive magic and then he can use the offensive magic. If the person didn't cast the supportive magic, he might get an injury or might exhaust himself.

could you also explain what 'The Six Succession Art' maybe stands for. Like has it some deeper meaning? And has it more special features like first casting the supportive magic before you can use the offensive one.

Also it seems that some of the offensive spells require a weapon. Probably a katana or sword, so can you use regular basic melee attacks as well without requiring a supportive magic for it?

Abilities/Powers:
- Stealth detection (Passive): Detects invisible enemies.

In what for sense can he detect invisible mages, like sensing their aura? Their presence. Or does he has the ability to actually see them?

Name: Shining Aura
Rank: D
Type: Supportive
Description: When casting this magic, the user will generate an aura that surrounds him. The user will feel more powerful than before. The effect of this magic is increase their stats: strenght, dexterity, agilty and stamina. This magic lasts in 10 posts.
Strengths:
- Increase Power.
- Increase Movement Speed.
- Increase Accuracy.
Weaknesses:
- When the buff is gone, -10 MP due exhaustion.
- 1 turn of cooldown.
- The user can only use this buff. In other words, he can't buff other people.
- Can't move for 1 turn.
- Using the Shining Aura costs 10 MP

Honestly the -10 mp exhaustion is to much. You can lower it to -5 Same goes for the other offensive spell as well

Name: Meditation
Rank: D
Type: Healing
Description: The Shining Aura must be cancelled. The user creates an aura that surrounds him. It's an Aura that regenerates MP and HP
Strengths:
- Regenerates MP: Every post that he makes. He can regenerate 10 MP. (Duration: 5 post)
- Regenerates HP: Every post that he makes. He can regenerate 10 HP. (Duration: 5 post)
If it means 10MP and 10HP every post then he regenerates way to much. That would mean in a total of 5 posts he would have recovered half of his starting magic pool and health. However if it means that he would regenerate a total of 10 MP and 10 HP over 5 posts then it is fine. However you need to clarify this and explain it in the spells description.
- Bonus MP and HP when he completes the meditation. ( Finalization of his meditation: 5 MP)

Weaknesses:
- The meditation can be interrupted.
- Can't be used on other people.
- The user can't moved if he meditates.
- Activation: -30 MP.
Way, way to much. It would limit yourself to much, especially when you are reaching a low Mp that you can't even cast it anymore. For this spell I would just use the basic mp cost for a D rank spell and add half of that on it.
- Cooldown: 8 post.

Done editing. Thank you for revising it.
Have a nice a good day Lord.

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