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    Darkness

    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 22nd May 2014, 6:56 am

    Name: Darkness
    Rank: Strong
    Type: Sword
    Description:Able to take shape of great swords and a gun
    Gun:
    Sword:
    Strengths:
    - Able to take shape of other weapons to be most fit for that battle.
    - Gun Form is easy to travel with
    - Projectiles deal D-rank Damage
    - Projectiles travel at 30mph
    - Runs on it's own supply of MP
    Weaknesses:
    - Each bullet uses MP. (10% per shot, can only fire once per post)
    - Sword Form can be broken by one B-rank hit or higher.
    - Can only change shape once every other post
    - Gun Form can be broken by one C-rank hit
    Abilities: May change from form to form. (May only chance once per post, every other post.)


    https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t7117p165-official-magic-shop#114493


    Last edited by Kaseki on 10th July 2014, 4:35 pm; edited 10 times in total


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    Post by Guest 24th May 2014, 8:09 pm

    Please specify the dimensions of this sword, and specify how much damage "Frost damage" does
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 27th May 2014, 6:31 am

    Bump


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    Post by Guest 16th June 2014, 6:51 am

    Generally dice rolls are a bad idea. I'd suggest 5% frost damage as it's a weak weapon.

    You've not stated how the holder may be damaged as well. Please state this.

    Finally you need to have at least 3 strengths and 3 weaknesses for this weapon.

    Please bump when these changes have been made =]
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 19th June 2014, 6:57 am

    Bump
    It's completely changed,
    Copied my "Khaos" weapon but made a gun.


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    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 22nd June 2014, 9:07 pm

    Bump?


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    Post by Guest 23rd June 2014, 9:15 pm

    This is too strong for a weak weapon. A weak weapon should consist of maybe one effect (maximum) regarding magic power. As I can see right now, this weapon can be highly abused. I mean, you have a weapon that can change into a gun with limitless ammo. A bullet is hard for anyone to read (unless you give a specific rate of speed), and so, despite how much damage each bullet does, I could shoot with this gun limitlessly in a post until my opponent is dead. You also have two contradicting weaknesses. You mention that a C-Rank hit or higher can break the weapon, yet you say only Legendary or higher ranked weapons can ruin this item. Even a Strong weapon comes within the lines of C-Rank, so this doesn't make sense. If you are to keep the several bullets weakness, give an exact number as to how many bullets equal a single amount of D-Ranked damage.

    Overall, the weapon you have here is very overpowered for a weak weapon, and quite messy with its effects, weaknesses and strengths. I had to be strict here as there are much issues to deal with in this situation.
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 23rd June 2014, 9:19 pm

    Bump?


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    Post by Guest 23rd June 2014, 9:35 pm

    Forgot to include a speed rate for each bullet. Also, increase the time it takes this weapon to reform to 2 posts.
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 23rd June 2014, 9:37 pm

    Bippity bump~


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    Post by Guest 23rd June 2014, 10:35 pm

    The speed is way too low. Try 25 MPH
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 25th June 2014, 7:05 pm

    Bump


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    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 10th July 2014, 4:28 pm

    BUMP.


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    Post by Samus Aran 10th July 2014, 4:30 pm

    Remove the ability. Weak weapons get nothing extra, absolutely nothing extra.


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