Nex M. Mortris (W.I.P)

Name: Nex M. Mortis

Gender: Male

Age: 21

Birthday: 7/16

Sexuality:Straight

Special Characteristics: Missing right eye

Personality: Nex is not the most righteous or holy man on the planet and doesn't clam to be one, he thinks of himself as ladies man and a bad ass. Nex is a womanizer, so he would hit on any girl around his age. Nex thinks he so handsome that he could, if he wanted to, stare at himself in the mirror for hours. When he is around girls his age, he would flirt with them. he would try to impress them, but he would use his charm to get in a relationship with them. Nex is so bad ass, he has so much class, not enough space.

Nex does not remember his past, all he remembers is waking up in a demolished, burned down village, with his right eye missing. When he awoke, he does not remember what his name is or who he is or where he is. All he say was death and despair and utter destruction. He views his surrounding and realize either everyone is dead or ran away to other places. Nex ways confused and yet sad for some odd reason. As he was adjusting his left eye, he say a figure, coming close to him. He wanted to run, but for some reason, he could not. As the figure got close, he could visualize what it look like. The figure looked like a hermit, but with a ragged cloaked hood, with no legs, but still floating. The suspicious  hermit came closer until finally Nex asked," S-stop, stay away, w-who are you!?" The hermit stopped and spoke in a persuasive, unholy tone," The question is, who are you." Nex thought to himself before answering to the suspicious hermit. "I-I don't know" he said,"I do not know who I am." The hermit studied Nex before he spoke in his persuasive, unholy tone,"I see," he said,"You lost your memory, you are wondering who you are,what happened to this village, why are you here, and what does all this mean?" As the hermit finished what he said, Nex thought to what the hermit said."He-hes right, why am I here, what does all this have to do with me, and... wh-who am I?" His train of thought was stopped when he heard the hermit said,"You know, I can help you." Nex rises his head staring into the hermit's pitch black eyes."Really? You can help me?" The hermit smiled like a mad man having his way."Of course, just hold out your hand and I will help you." As Nex held out his right hand nervously to him, the hermit pulled out a rusty, old knife and cut Nex's palm, drewing blood. Nex was in intense pain, he looked at the hermit and was about to hit him, but he felt something in his right hand. He was shock and creeped out to see his blood move like a snake in his hand and onto the ashy ground. The blood started change into three word on the ground. Nex then looked at the writing and said,"Nex Massacre Mortis?" He looked at the hermit with curiosity." What does this Mean?" he said.The hermit responded with his usual tone," This is your name now, Nex. And with this I give you this ability to find what you are looking for. But be warned, the answer you are looking for, may not be as it seems." Said the hermit as he is fading away into the distance. Nex got up on his feet as the hermit was fading into the distance."Wait, I have more questions," he said."What am I suppose to do?" The hermit responded with an echo,"That is up to you, my friend." "Wait! Who are you!?" Replied Nex."I have been called by many different names." said the hermit,"We will meet again, in this life.....or the next." This time, the hermit was gone. Nex was still curios of what he said."In this life or the next? been called by many different names? The decision is my choice?" These words from the hermit kept popping in his head. He then started to walk out of the ruined village, and started his journey."Well, lets see what the world have in store for me."

The way Nex fight is that he is the first one two strike. When he attacks an opponent, he goes full on berserk on them. But when things start to turn sour for him, he would pull back and starts planning on how to beat his opponent. Nex learns from his mistakes and learns from his mistakes with results. When he is with a team following a leader, he would still rush in without a plan. But still, when things turn sour for him and/or his team, he would gather the team and give his strategy to the team and give it to the leader to execute the plan. When he leads the team, he would still, rush in to battle, but gives the team a plan before the meet the enemy. Either he is a leader or not, he would make certain that his team come home alive.  



Likes:
   *Women - The reason he like women because he was traveling and came across this,"Gentlemen Club". And after that, he love women ever sense.
   *Dogs - The reason why he likes dogs is because during his travels, dogs were always around, so one day, he decided to hang out with them, and he got really attached to then.
   *Gambling - The reason he likes to gamble is because through his travel he came across a tavern, so he decided to stay for one night. When he was in the tavern, a group of drunken men ask him to play. He sat down with them and the said if they win, they get his money and his eye patch. He accepted the challenge and beated them and took their money. He became really good at gambling after that.
 
Dislikes:
   *The cold - The reason why is that because he freezes up and he can fight well in the cold.
   *Rich people - The reason why is that because a rich man thought he could by him for a lot of money. Nex punched the rich man because he was beating his servants for not doing what he said when he gave them orders. He hates it when a rich person thinks they are superior then others who serves them
   *Thugs - The reason why is because they think they can do what they want, when they want. He hates when they prey on the weak, so he would go and stop the thugs from them hurting others.

Motivations:
   *Getting a girl - The reason why is that he hopes to get a girl to be with him during his travels so that one day, he could settle down and start a life.
   *Friends - The reason why is that he wants to be with his friend for a long time. He does not want anything bad happening to them, so he will be there to protect his friends.
   *The mystery to his past - The reason why is because he is still trying to find out what his past is and to find out who he is.

Fears:
   *Clowns - The reason why is that the way clowns look and sound, really scares the hell out of him.
   *Water - The reason he does not like the water is because he can't swim.
   *Friends death - The reason why is because his friends are the closes to him, and that he would break down to see his friends die.

General Appearance


Height: 6'1

Weight: 195

Hair: Black hair and has spikes

Eyes: gray

Skin Tone: tan

Appearance: Muscular, no shirt, black trench coat, bluish-grayish jeans,black eye patch, black shoes, silver collar.    

Guild/Council

Guild: Fairy Tail

Tattoo: It would be red fairy tail guild emblem and the location would be dead center in the chest.

Rank: D-Rank

I know this is a work in progress, but I think it would be better to put some more detail of how you act and stuff. You've got reasoning behind how you act with this hermit bit, but not a lot of how you actually act.

Also could you break it down a bit rather than have it as one big chunk of text