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    Kaseki's Weapon

    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 15th May 2014, 11:22 am

    Name: Khaos (Young)
    Rank: Weak
    Type: Offensive
    Description: Able to take shape of great swords and a twin scythe
    Sword Form:
    Kaseki Weilding Khaos in Scythe Form 1:
    Kaseki Weilding Khaos im Scythe Form 2:
    Strengths: Able to take shape of other weapons to be most fit for that battle
    Weaknesses: Nothing special, it's just a piece of metal. May shatter upon contact with higher rank magic.
    Abilities: Takes one post to reform after shattering. May change shape from sword to scythe


    Last edited by Kaseki on 20th May 2014, 5:53 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Post by Guest 19th May 2014, 10:59 pm

    Alright, several things here:

    1) No such thing as an Epic Weapon on this site. Unless you've purchased a strong and/or legendary weapon, this weapon should be considered weak.

    2) "Countering most attacks and spells" is overpowered. You need to add limitations to this.

    3) Changing randomly as a weakness can be abused, and so, not to be a jerk, but I ask that you please change the weakness entirely.

    4) The only shifts it should be able to do are the two you showed via images unless it's legendary.

    5) If this is all mistaken, and you have not purchased a weapon ranked above weak, then this needs to be changed. Should the weapon be weak, I will only allow a second form
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 20th May 2014, 10:22 am

    Kichiro, thank you or your input. I figured it would have been easier to take something above my rank and bring it down than to bump something lower up higher.

    Is it better? How else can I improve this tool?


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    Post by Guest 20th May 2014, 3:38 pm

    Edit the Type of Weapon to Offensive, then reply to this post.
    Kaseki
    Kaseki

    Demon of life


    Demon of life

    Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- Coming Storms- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Armored Beast
    Position : None
    Posts : 1723
    Guild : Savage Skull / Aelyst Crux (Dragon Fang Co-Founder)
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Dregon (Magic), Master Aoi (Weapons), & Edward (Combat)
    Experience : 150

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Cʏʀᴏᴍᴀɴᴄʏ
    Second Skill: Aʀᴛ ᴏғ ᴡᴀʀ
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Kaseki 20th May 2014, 5:54 pm

    Okay, it's now offensive, what can I improve on next?


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    Post by Guest 20th May 2014, 7:20 pm

    It's all good now. Approved!

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