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    Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan)

    Antonia Leviaette
    Antonia Leviaette

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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 3rd May 2014, 10:13 am

    Magic


    Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan) Arcane-circle

    Primary Magic: Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan)

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan) is an unique form of Summoning Magic that involves the user calling creatures from another dimension called ''The Purgatory''. It is believed that in ancient times, the Purgatory was a place that took in souls that needed purification, but really, what it is is a place where all supernatural creatures go. However, this magic consists in summoning creatures from the Purgatory by drawing a determined symbol:

    Purgatory Symbol:

    (This symbol doesn't need to be drawn with a specific item and it can be drawn in any size)

    However, the User can summon only Supernatural entities with whom he has a deal. A deal between a mage and an entity is made in an incredibly difficult way: The mage must fight the entity in a melee fight. If the mage wins, the entity will have to make a deal with the mage which consists of going to the outer world in case he is called by the mage. A deal is broken when the mage dies, since entities from the Purgatory cannot die.

    Blaise learned this magic by spending time at the Purgatory itself, since he grew up there after his brother got kidnapped. One day he got in a fight with a Succubus and won, and she explained to him the deal system. After that event, Blaise began making more and more deals until he became a Purgatory Summon Mage.

    Strengths:

    · Blaise can summon monsters to help him in a fight at any time, as long as he is capable of drawing the symbol

    · This magic permits summoning creatures without the need of having a key. It makes it much easier because, if for example a Celestial Mage loses his keys, he cannot open the gate and summon a spirit, but a Purgatory summon mage can summon a spirit without a key.

    · Each Purgatory monster, or at least most of them, can cast a spell.

    Weaknesses:

    · Each Purgatory Entity Has its personality and can sometimes slip out of Blaise's control and attack the incorrect person.

    · Many of the Entities despise Blaise because he beat them up, so they tend to try to attack him, ignoring the deal.

    · The Purgatory Symbol is incredibly elaborate and has to be done with all detail. It must be done like this or the summon will fail.

    · Obtaining a deal is incredibly hard, since the entity with whom the deal is made must be defeated, and most entities aren't exactly weak.

    Abilities/Powers:

    · Summoning Monsters from the Purgatory.  

    D Ranked Spells:


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    Post by Guest 3rd May 2014, 11:30 am

    The description of your spells is supposed to enlist the abilities of your summons. Also, as your magic is all about summoning monsters, you should thoroughly describe the monsters you possess, including their physical features (an image will suffice), and measurements (which are highly recommended, if not mandatory in text). With this being said, I ask that you reset all of the spell work you have done, and redo it properly.

    NOTE: This is only regarding the four spells you made, not the magic entirely.
    Antonia Leviaette
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ultimate Écriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 4th May 2014, 8:46 am

    All corrected, Aye.


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    Post by Guest 4th May 2014, 9:59 am

    More rates on speed are required. "Fast" isn't acceptable, for example.
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    First Skill: Ultimate Écriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 4th May 2014, 10:20 am

    Corrected, Mr. Kichiro Yukine.


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    Post by Guest 4th May 2014, 10:36 am

    A D-Rank Summon shouldn't be able to run at 50 or 60 MPH. Lower it to 30 MPH, please.

    Just to ensure everything is alright, I will also get another mod to look at this before approval.
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    First Skill: Territory Magic
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    Post by Nykyrian 4th May 2014, 11:08 am

    Mr Badass wrote:Magic


    Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan) Arcane-circle

    Primary Magic: Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan)

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Purgatory Monster Summon (煉獄モンスター召喚 Rengoku monsutā shōkan) is an unique form of Summoning Magic that involves the user calling creatures from another dimension called ''The Purgatory''. It is believed that in ancient times, the Purgatory was a place that took in souls that needed purification, but really, what it is is a place where all supernatural creatures go. However, this magic consists in summoning creatures from the Purgatory by drawing a determined symbol:

    Purgatory Symbol:

    However, the User can summon only Supernatural entities with whom he has a deal. A deal between a mage and an entity is made in an incredibly difficult way: The mage must fight the entity in a melee fight. If the mage wins, the entity will have to make a deal with the mage which consists of going to the outer world in case he is called by the mage. A deal is broken when the mage dies, since entities from the Purgatory cannot die.

    Blaise learned this magic by spending time at the Purgatory itself, since he grew up there after his brother got kidnapped. One day he got in a fight with a Succubus and won, and she explained to him the deal system. After that event, Blaise began making more and more deals until he became a Purgatory Summon Mage.

    Strengths:

    · Blaise can summon monsters to help him in a fight at any time, as long as he is capable of drawing the symbol

    · This magic permits summoning creatures without the need of having a key. It makes it much easier because, if for example a Celestial Mage loses his keys, he cannot open the gate and summon a spirit, but a Purgatory summon mage can summon a spirit without a key.

    · Each Purgatory monster, or at least most of them, can cast a spell.

    Weaknesses:

    · Each Purgatory Entity Has its personality and can sometimes slip out of Blaise's control and attack the incorrect person.

    · Many of the Entities despise Blaise because he beat them up, so they tend to try to attack him, ignoring the deal.

    · The Purgatory Symbol is incredibly elaborate and has to be done with all detail. It must be done like this or the summon will fail.

    · Obtaining a deal is incredibly hard, since the entity with whom the deal is made must be defeated, and most entities aren't exactly weak.

    Abilities/Powers:

    · Summoning Monsters from the Purgatory.  

    D Ranked Spells:

    For all summons you need to calculate the amount of damage they can take before being sent back.


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    Post by Guest 11th May 2014, 6:18 am

    You could probably have each of your summons take 3-4 D-rank hits, otherwise they're gonna last like, 2 posts at best.

    Also you've still not stated a damage limit for Victus.
    Antonia Leviaette
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    First Skill: Ultimate Écriture
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Antonia Leviaette 11th May 2014, 9:33 am

    Bumpity Bump


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    Post by Guest 10th June 2014, 2:18 am

    I'm guessing you're focussing on Memory-make now rather than this magic? If so then I will remove this topic and look at your Memory-make magic app.

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