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    Nikolai's Equipment

    Alexander
    Alexander

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    Lineage : Beast Pride
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    Posts : 176
    Guild : Tartarus
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    Age : 1543
    Experience : 425

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    First Skill: Cycle of Revenance
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    Nikolai's Equipment Empty Nikolai's Equipment

    Post by Alexander 10th May 2014, 2:55 am

    Below is Nikolai's currently used equipment;

    Armor:

    Weapon:


    Last edited by Nikolai on 12th May 2014, 8:36 pm; edited 7 times in total
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    Nikolai's Equipment Empty Re: Nikolai's Equipment

    Post by Guest 11th May 2014, 10:59 am

    You need to elaborate on some statements for your glasses. For example, how clearly can you see these "minor details" you speak of? Also, how far can your glasses function to read things clearly (range). Finally, how much force/spell power does it take to break your glasses (Example: 1 D-Ranked spell).

    For your Armor, give an example (spell power) as to how fragile the bands, straps, and the like are. It's recommended that you show this by detailing how many spells (and of what rank), could these bands, straps, and the like break. Finally, give a percentage as to how much more mana/magic you comtrol. With what I've read from your Armor, it seems like it's a mana booster, anyway. Either that, or health- perhaps both?

    Your third item: The scrap metal- Give as many measurements as possible. How dense and heavy is your scrap metal? Also, how much does this scrap metal increase your magic's strength (I recommend 5%)? Finally, give an example of how easily your metal could melt (spell power). Finally, give an amount as to how much metal you can summon.

    Everything should seem fine after these changes are made (if adjusted properly)


    UPDATE: Approved!

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