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    Post by Guest 6th June 2012, 2:31 am

    Primary Magic: Ice Make
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This is a type of Molding Magic which utilizes the element of ice. The user can create a variety of objects out of ice to be used for offensive, defensive or miscellaneous purposes. Outside of combat, the user can also change their surroundings using ice, such as covering the ground with ice. The ice also can be used as wound dressing, stanching bleeding and preventing the swell of an injury. The use of ice also prevents the user from suffering from the effects of low temperatures.

    There are currently two known types of Ice-Make Magic. The first one is called Static Ice-Make. This type of Ice-Make is characterized by the creation of inanimate objects, such as weapons, or by affecting the environment around them. The second type is called Dynamic Ice-Make. This type of Ice-Make focuses on creating animated ice sculptures, usually in the form of animals. Dynamic Ice-Make is said to be more quickly cast than Static Ice-Make

    Strengths:This magic can be much easier to use than other magic , because every place usually has something related to the ice. Magic is also very damaging, because this magic allows users to break the land . Ice element is also known to be strong and elements fast. Versatile and powerful if in right hands, it also causes alot of damage and a variety of attacks and strategies to weaken and overpower the opponent. It it extremely powerful to Ice.Can be used to either Strike at his opponent or used to make another technique or spell invisible.

    Weaknesses: Magic weakness is fire, because fire can melt the ice and reduce the damage.

    Abilities/Powers:
    -Capable of creating a wide array of weapons from their body
    -Increase their defensive power
    -Capable of rendering some physical assaults useless.
    -Can freeze water or anything except fire

    Rei's Spell Template

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    Post by Daichi 8th June 2012, 6:02 am

    I guess you're not yet done with this. Please put WIP in the title.


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    Post by Guest 9th June 2012, 6:16 am

    WIP??
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    Post by Daichi 9th June 2012, 7:19 am

    WIP = Work in Progress


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    Post by Guest 12th June 2012, 5:18 am

    check it..already change
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    Post by Daichi 12th June 2012, 5:35 am

    You can't have fire dragon slayer magic. We already have one, and also, you did not register for it. Sorry about this, but change your magic.


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    Post by Guest 13th June 2012, 12:10 am

    what you means "you did not register for it"??
    already change :sephiroth:
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    Post by Daichi 13th June 2012, 3:16 am

    No DS spots are available now. Sorry about the news, but you can't have any DS magic.


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    Post by Guest 13th June 2012, 3:36 am

    huh..it's ok..i will change but how about my magic??it's good or bad?
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    Post by Daichi 13th June 2012, 4:04 am

    It's not that bad, but it won't matter if you change it.


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    Post by Guest 13th June 2012, 4:35 am

    ok..maybe toninght or tomorrow..thank for your comment
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    Post by Guest 15th June 2012, 11:15 pm

    okey..done.i already finished.
    Since this has been sitting for 2 weeks, I will now BUMP for approval
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    Post by Daichi 16th June 2012, 12:52 am

    Two weeks? It was only three days.

    You can only have six D rank spells as a D rank. Change that and I'll go check this again.


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    Post by Guest 16th June 2012, 1:26 am

    okey..already change..time to waiting to approve
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    Post by Daichi 16th June 2012, 4:23 am

    Six D Rank spells.
    You can't have C and B ranks.


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    Post by Guest 16th June 2012, 6:18 am

    ok..done
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    Post by Daichi 16th June 2012, 7:48 am

    Let's start with the official review.

    A D rank spell can't vaporize someone (Raging Bolt). Reduce its damage by a lot. And how does it transmute lightning element to the user's body? I don't get it. It is used to attack, but it transmutes electricity to the user? That's kinda weird. Explain or remove it.

    You should explain your spells in terms of rank, like what types of defenses can block them and if they are deflected by spells. You should also state how much damage your other spells do using the words 'weak', 'moderate', and 'high'. And for evil spark, you can't have a lacrima as a lightning magic user. You should remove that part or revamp the spell.

    Your spells also state that they can absorb D rank spells. No, no, no. No. No D rank spells can absorb any spells, and I don't think lightning magic can. Remove those parts.

    For the Lightning Body, state how fast the user can move. Like how many miles per hour or meters per second. As a D rank spell, you can only have up to... 15 mps. Nothing higher, please. And also, how far can you travel in this state? Nothing higher than 20 m if you ask me. And as a D rank spells, it can be shattered by C rank spells and above, not just A ranks.

    Lightning Eruption, it can't just break rock, ice, blah blah blah. It's a D rank spell, not higher. D ranks aren't strong enough to do all of that.

    Evil Spark, how does it increase supportive power? Explain that. I don't get it.

    Sorry if this is a handful of work, but you really need to have a good magic app.


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    Post by Guest 16th June 2012, 7:56 am

    done..check again
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    Post by Daichi 16th June 2012, 8:00 am

    Done? Are you sure? NONE OF THESE ARE EDITED YET. C'MON!


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    Post by Guest 18th June 2012, 11:26 pm

    ok..already done.check again..
    thanks..my news magic
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    Post by Guest 20th June 2012, 2:24 am

    Bump..
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    Post by Guest 21st June 2012, 11:34 pm

    Edited
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    Post by King Zenshin 22nd June 2012, 1:06 am

    Bears dont have wool they have pelt, and only 6 D-rank spells, also, so not double or triple bump


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    Post by Guest 22nd June 2012, 1:28 am

    check again..already done.6 spells
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 23rd June 2012, 7:56 pm

    You asked me to review, and here is what I say.

    Your BBCode is off, I will not allow this app to be approved if the BBCoding is off. Turn it on.


    " Lighting element is also known to be strong and elements fast. " You changed to ice, get rid of this and add two more weaknesses.

    I want to see 3 strengths, 3 weaknesses (not involving cool down or duration) for each spell.

    How does your magic compare to those of similar, or higher ranked armor/shield spells from other mages? What about armor or shields made out of fire? What if another offensive spell is used against your own?

    Do any of your spells need a delay?

    What type of damage do your spells do? Piercing, blunt, slashing, etc.

    Bump when edited. And make sure you DO edit them.


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