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    Kotetsu Gensou

    Kotetsu Gensou
    Kotetsu Gensou

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    Post by Kotetsu Gensou 5th May 2014, 2:33 pm

    Name: Kotetsu Gensou (Mistaken Child of Illusions)
    Gender: Male
    Age: 19
    Birthday: Dec 11
    Sexuality: Straight
    Special Characteristics:avatar, he also has a scar running from his right hand up his arm in a spiral motion and goes through his right eye and ends at the eyebrow.

    Personality: Outside of battle: He is a quiet and mysterious person when around strangers, yet can be aggressive towards them if they show hostility or aggression in general. Reason for this is because as a young boy living with his family, they seemed to be constantly at war with surrounding families. So while growing up he was taught to be aware of strangers and to never trust them until they have shown their true side. One day he didn't listen to his families advice and allowed a few strangers inside the walls of his families home, which turned out badly. The strangers massacred his whole family except for him and fits parents. Once his father learned of what Kotetsu had done, he punished him by carving a spiral wound around his right arm all the way to the top of his eye, so that he would never forget the lesson His parents tried to teach him and the disgrace he broughtbrought to the family by almost allowing them to be exterminated. Yet while around his friends kotetsu seems like a totally new person. He can seem upbeat, playful, friendly, and very protective once he claims you as a friend.
    Inside of battle: Kotetsu is a very calm and level headed fighter. He likes to be strategical and use his speed to his advantage. He is not someone who likes brute force, mainly because he thinks it's a poor and pitiful way to fight. Kotetsu likes to be a fluid and elegant fighter, as in he uses an attack or ability in succession to another to seem as if they go together. When he was growing up his father trained him constantly and every single day, for most of the day, his father trained him to become a weapon master.He so far is a very good swordsman and good at using staves, poles, and even lances. He is still far from becoming a weapon master or for that a master of any weapon.As in fighting with a team he is decent. If he knows his allies abilities then he will try to use them to his advantage. Also Kotetsu isn't the best leader or even yet follower. He is more in the middle, meaning if needed to be he can lead a team but not perfectly, and he can be a follower or member of a team. He listens to and follows orders almost always but then there are sometimes where if he thinks it is a bad idea or a better plan can made or used, then he will do so. Also Kotetsu is the type of person to never give in during battle, usually in order to beat him, he will need to be knocked unconscious or killed. Also the reason for wanting to be a weapon master is because his family are known for it also in his eyes they are the deadliest warriors because they can and are so versatile. Ajay he lives the uniqueness of each weapon, from how it is used to the balance of each weapon.
    Likes:

    • Weapons(He is training to be a weapon master. )
    • Training/Sparring(Stated in one before, but he likes training mainly because it makes him stronger and keeps him on his toes)
    • Friends (after a rough life of loneliness, Kotetsu knows friends aren't hinderances yet a strength

    Dislikes:

    • Shear Arrogance(he hates it when someone is way over confident and think s they are better than everyone)
    • Threatening of Friends (It speaks for itself)
    • Failure (hates when he fails, dislikes when others fail)




    Motivations:

    • To become stronger ( So he will be able to protect his friends)
    • His scar( It is a reminder of his disgrace to the family and that he must restore his honor)
    • Personal Goal (He has a personal goal of becoming a weapon master

    Fears:

    • Failure(He dislikes this in general, so he can tend to be competitive)
    • Dying(this one is somewhat complicated. He is not afraid of death itself, but of leaving his friends behind to grieve. In his eyes it is failure to die)
    • Losing Friends(He is afraid of losing friend because in his eyes it is failure of being strong enough to protect them


    General Appearance


    Height: 5'11
    Weight: 145
    Hair: long jet black hair
    Eyes: red with a warper mangekyou design
    Spoiler:
    Skin Tone: light skin
    Appearance: Avatar. Kotetsu has long flowing black hair, he wears baggy black tattered pants and for his upper body. It is wrapped in bandages except for his left arm, also he usually wears a matching black tattered robe.

    Guild/Council

    Guild: Blue Pegasus
    Tattoo: Right side of the neck
    Rank D Rank


    Last edited by Kotetsu Gensou on 5th May 2014, 5:13 pm; edited 4 times in total
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    Post by Guest 5th May 2014, 4:17 pm

    Hey Kotetsu, I'm Legacy and I'll be working with you on your application.

    So far most of the form looks good, but there are a couple of things that need working on a little before I can approve it. Firstly and most importantly, your personality must be at least 500 words. At the moment you are quite a way below that. Try to go a bit more in-depth in why Kotetsu is the way he is. Why is he so aggressive to strangers? Why does he appear to have two very different sides to him? You mentioned he disgraced his family, so perhaps mention how that disgrace has affected him personally.

    The only other real issue is a minor one, and that is with your rank. The lowest rank is D rank, so if you just replace 'lowest' with 'D', that resolves that issue.

    All the best and if you have any questions, feel free to ask via PM or request help on the chatbox. Most of the time the people there are more than happy to help out and give advice =]
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    Post by Kotetsu Gensou 5th May 2014, 4:57 pm

    Editdd and fix
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    Post by Guest 5th May 2014, 5:05 pm

    Your personality is looking better now, but it is still 41 words short. You've mentioned that he wishes to be a weapons master and that he enjoys training. What is it about training that he enjoys so much? Is it that he's in his own company and so feels at ease, or does he simply enjoy the feel of the weapons in his hands as he trains? Just a little more now and it can be approved =]
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    Post by Kotetsu Gensou 5th May 2014, 5:14 pm

    OK now fixed. Sorry for it not being good. Was in a rush
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    Post by Guest 5th May 2014, 5:15 pm

    No problem, good work on getting the 500 words done =]

    Approved.

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