Wiz (Akire's Shapeshifting Pet) (Done)

Name: Winzark Vas Zenar VI
Nickname: Wiz
Age: Unknown
Type: Combat
Species: Liquid Dragon
Measurements: Height: 1ft Weight: 10lbs Width: 5in

Physical Description: Wiz is a small dragon, about the size of parrot. His body is made of green goo/water liquid that always seems to be shifting. He can shift into a variety of forms, no matter the change in texture, usage or mass. Most of the time he stays in the form of a solid slime dragon. Wiz, can change into something akin to a humanoid dragon, he makes use of that shape for a better combat advantage.
Personality: Wiz tends to be quiet and hides behind Akire when he meets new people. Later playing pranks and acting like a fool once they warm up to them.
History: Wiz came from the same corporation that had done experiments don Akire. They had tried to create the perfect parasite. One that could change shape to infect the host then control them through altering their DNA. Like a forced Take Over. But when the parasite didn't work, they scrapped the project and tossed out the vials. These broke on the way to disinfection, the bacteria formed into an blob that then escaped. After Akire broke out of the facility he found the blob, (who had shifted into a wolf), and raised him. Currently they are traveling together.

Spells

Name: Form Shift (weapon/armor)
Description: Wiz reconstructs his body into a solid melee weapon or piece of armor. Currently Wiz can transform into weapons that resemble medieval armor and weaponry with a fantasy twist. His more preferred weapons are the longsword, duel battle axes and claymore. In armor form he turns into heavy steel plates that can cover either arm, leg, chest or head. this armor is rather bulky and makes whatever it is covering hard to move, though it does provide excellent  protection.
Rank: D
Strengths:
-A good, solid weapon.
-Armor form covers a small area.
-Increase melee damage or reduces damage
Weakness:
-Risks losing original form
-Controlled by Wiz's Emotions
-limited time in form
-Any damage done to Wiz while in weapon form or amor form does damage Wiz himself. Though the damage taken in armor form is lessened than that in weapon form, were it is slightly increased.
Weapons measurements
longsword weight: 3lbs length: 4 ft width: 1.5in
claymore weight: 6lbs length: 5ft width: 5 in
battle axe weight: 1lb length: 2ft width: N/A

Name: Form Shift (Organic)
Description: wiz changes into a form of organic matter. Organic matter in this context is limited only to other animals or plant life, IE a tiger or a tree. He takes on a few of the aspects of what he has changed into but not quite as good as the original. Being a parasite, Wiz can merge with Akire to create a form of dragon Take Over. In this form, Akire and Wiz fuse and he takes on aspects of a dragon. Including scaled forearms and forelegs, claws on his feet and hands. His eyes become slitted much like an animals, he grows horns and gains wings. Unfortunately he doesn't gain the muscles needed to flap them so all he can do is retract and extend them, and he can glide with them.
Rank: D
Strength:
-Combat power increased for wiz (and Akire if combined)
-increased healing for wiz (and Akire if combined)
-takes on dragonic aspects such as claws, tail, horns, wings, etc
Weakness:
-Risks losing original form
-Controlled by Wiz's Emotions
-limited time in form
-Any damage sustained while in an organic form become permanent. Damage taken while fused with Akire can a chance to weaken the link. slowly destroying Akire's nerve endings over time.
-the limits for his organic shapeshifting are that it cant be more than 5x hie weight, 4x his height and 6x his width.

Natural Ability: Psychic Link
Rank: D
Description: Wiz and Akire can talk directly into each other minds. This is handy for summoning and communication over vast distances. Him and Akire also communicate this way.

Modifications and requests are in purple.

BloodCakedFlame wrote:Name: Winzark Vas Zenar VI
Nickname: Wiz
Age: Appears to be 14
Type: Combat
Species: preferred form is that of a human with little dragon horns.
This is not a species. Preferred does not say what the creature is. What IS the creature; the appearance goes down below. What is the Species of this creature? Humans cannot be had as pets.

Physical Description: Wiz is a lean 14 year old boy with blue eyes and white, scruffy hair. He wears tight fitting shirts and blue jeans with holes from the travels with Akire. His most notable feature are the small pair of horns protruding from his head.
Personality: Wiz tends to be quiet and hides behind Akire when he meets new people. Later playing pranks and acting like a fool once they warm up to them.
Make sure this is NOT A HUMAN -not yelling, enphisizing- Humans cannot be a pet.

Spells

Name: Form Shift
Description: Wiz can shape shift into a variety of forms. Including organic and in organic matter.
Rank: D
Strengths:
-Versatile
-Can shift into weapons for fighting
-Can combine into Akire (because of his history) to create a lethal combination
Weakness:
-Risks losing original form
-Controlled by Wiz's Emotions
-when combined with Akire; takes a toll on both of their staminas
-can only shift a maximum of 10 small shifts or 3 large scale shifts before requiring food.
This needs to be changed; due to its too wide of a variety and your lack of appropriate description of what it exactly changes into. I suggest you break this spell down to each and every genre of transformation Wiz can turn into; and go about setting up the strengths and weaknesses from there.

Natural Ability: Psychic Link
Rank: D
Description: Wiz and Akire can talk directly into each other minds. This is handy for summoning and communication over vast distances.
Make sure your creature species is that of appropriate capabilities for this spell.

Also make sure your BBcoding is done properly.[/color]

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BloodCakedFlame wrote:Name: Winzark Vas Zenar VI
Nickname: Wiz
Age: Unknown
Type: Combat
Species: Liquid Dragon

Physical Description: Wiz is a small dragon, about the size of parrot. His body is made of green goo/water liquid that always seems to be shifting. He can shift into a variety of forms, no matter the change in texture, usage or mass. Most of the time he stays in the form of a solid slime dragon. Wiz, can change into something akin to a humanoid dragon, he makes use of that shape for a better combat advantage.

Personality: Wiz tends to be quiet and hides behind Akire when he meets new people. Later playing pranks and acting like a fool once they warm up to them.
History: Wiz came from the same corporation that had done experiments don Akire. They had tried to create the perfect parasite. One that could change shape to infect the host then control them through altering their DNA. Like a forced Take Over. But when the parasite didn't work, they scrapped the project and tossed out the vials. These broke on the way to disinfection, the bacteria formed into an blob that then escaped. After Akire broke out of the facility he found the blob, (who had shifted into a wolf), and raised him. Currently they are traveling together.

Spells

Name: Form Shift (weapon/armor)
Description: Wiz reconstructs his body into a solid melee weapon. Please be as DESCRIPTIVE as possible here. You state weapon and armor, but only make note of the weapon here. This needs to be updated and detailed. Give of some examples or prefered weapons your character has Wiz turn into; and which ones are varied upon emotions. There are MANY types of weapons out there; so this is too vague.
Rank: D
Strengths:
-A good, solid weapon.
-Armor form covers a small area. (IE a full arm or the chest.)
-Increase melee damage or reduces damage
Weakness:
-Risks losing original form
-Controlled by Wiz's Emotions
-limited time in form
-Any damage done to Wiz while in weapon form or amor form does damage Wiz himself. Though the damage taken in armor form is lessened than that in weapon form, were it is slightly increased.

Name: Form Shift (Organic)
Description: wiz changes into a form of organic matter. This can be used to merge with Akire to create a form of dragon take over. This needs to be more descriptive, explain this combination.
Rank: D
Strength:
-Combat power increased for wiz (and Akire if combined)
-increased healing for wiz (and Akire if combined)
-takes on dragonic aspects such as claws, tail, horns, wings, etc
Weakness:
-Risks losing original form
-Controlled by Wiz's Emotions
-limited time in form
-Any damage sustained while in an organic form become permanent. Damage taken while fused with Akire can a chance to weaken the link. slowly destroying Akire's nerve endings over time.

Natural Ability: Psychic Link
Rank: D
Description: Wiz and Akire can talk directly into each other minds. This is handy for summoning and communication over vast distances. Him and Akire also communicate this way.

I still see NO BBCoding, make sure when you go to edit next; that the check box that states "Disable BBCoding" is unchecked. If it is Unchecked, then please add in the appropriate template's BBCoding.

Thanks for the feedback. I didn't think that making a pet like this would be difficult. But problem hopefully solved.

One more thing:

Add measurements for your let's shifting abilities, especially the first spell. Make these changes, and you will most likely be approved

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Approved