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    Ronrex
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    Post by Ronrex 4th April 2014, 4:15 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This form of dragon slayer magic is different than past fire dragon slayer magics. While being a Scorching/red flame. Its changes depending on what kind of  feeling Age is experiencing color change dose nothing to the flames just for show. Age's flame color is solely dependent on his feeling setting if age is riotously raged Blue flames, When age is just calm he has his regular Red flames, when age is greedy for his money Orange flames, if age is scared ,like that will ever happen, Yellow flames, when age is running on pure willpower noting else Green flames, When age is sympathetic or merciful his flames go Indigo flames.

    The main way he uses it is to engulf his body in flames of 10 meters around his body this type of magic is for offensive use only. Its mostly a fist fighting magic but does have some range. He is able to absorb fire by consuming it as well. He does however suffer from motion sickness.
    Strengths:
       *High Output-This kind of magic has a high damage output this magic is used for offensive use only.
       *Burn- If Age keeps contact with opponents skin for more than 2 post will cause the enemy to be burned, is not applicable to B rank mages.
       *Omnomnom-Eating fire boosts his magical reserves.
    Weaknesses:
       *Motion-Motion sickness comes with the job.
       *Water-Do I really need to explain this?
       *Flame Meals- Age can not eat dark or light flames only regular flames because they are from demon and god slayers.
       *Quick Burning- Effects from being burned have a quick reaction of 2 post meaning burn effect only last 2 post long.
    Abilities/Powers:

    Dragon Slayer senses: The users five senses are heightened to those of a dragon which is an increase of 25%, sight, hearing, taste and touch are all affected, however the strongest of these senses for Age is that of smell, if focused a dragon slayer can literally sniff out an opponent's hiding spot as if they were some kind of blood hound. (passive)

    Fire Recovery: Age can regain magical by consuming Fire magic in any form, be it has restrictions like age can not eat light/dark flames because they are from demon and god slayers. In accordance with the dragon slayer chart. (active)

    Dragon Force: Age can now access Dragon Force, the most powerful state of the dragon slayer, which he can attain by either eating 25% of his element or eat fire for 5 posts in a row.

    During this transformation his elemental strength which is flame so age has an elemental resistances of 30%, however his elemental weakness water become 20% more effective. His body takes on all the aspects of the fire dragon.

    and all spells can be cast free of charge. However this form only lasts for 7 posts as with the rules, and once it is used Age is drained of all but 5% of his magic power.

    Burn Skin when Age is in battle his blood comes to a boil which in terns makes his skin scolding hot so when anyone uses a physical attack on Age the one who came in contact with Age's skin is now burned. Burn plus when Age attacks an opponent who is burned with fire magic Age's attacks dose 15% more damage.


    D Rank Spells:

    C Rank Spells:


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    Post by Gemma 5th May 2014, 11:22 am

    I'm very sorry but I fear I have to reject this magic in it's entirety. It's an interesting concept to say the least, the gem aspect could be an interesting standalone magic, but you are first and foremost a dragon slayer. We encourage and appreciate little twists on slayer magic so they are not all the same with varying element but this current concept is changing too much of the original magic and I'm afraid we can't validate such a complex, drastic difference to the Fire Dragon Slayer base.

    I'll need to see this dragon slayer magic reworked to be able to grade/approve of it, I'm sorry, I do know it's a bit of a hassle but we just can't have something with such big modifications. Do feel free however to PM me for any questions, info etc regarding this and I'll definitely help out/make things clearer if needed.


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    Post by Gemma 6th May 2014, 12:17 pm

    Much better! There are still some things that need to be tweaked, I made my notes in teal so just bump this thread when you are done editing, and feel free to contact me if you need any more information or help~

    Ronrex wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This form of dragon slayer magic is different than past fire dragon slayer magics. While being a Scorching/red flame. Its diversity changes depending on what kind of intensity Age wants to use. Age's flame intensity is also dependent on his rage setting if age is furious blue scorching flames age is mad/annoyed red flames. [You forgot to update this part with your change in magic]

    The main way he uses it is to engulf his body in flames. It does take large amounts of concentration to control both flames at once. Its mostly a fist fighting magic but does have some range. He is able to absorb fire by consuming it as well. He does however suffer from motion sickness.
    Strengths:
       *High Output-This kind of magic has a high damage output.
       *Indifferent-The ability of two or more different types of fire. [Indifferent actually means not different- also you just need to change/update this with your change in magic]
       *Omnomnom-Eating fire boosts his magic.
    Weaknesses:
       *Motion-Motion sickness comes with the job.
       *Low speed-The temperature differences hinder the users movement.
       *Water-Do I really need to explain this?
    [You need one more weakness to this list- basically, always one more weakness than strength to balance it out]
    Abilities/Powers:

    Dragon Slayer senses: The users five senses are heightened to those of a dragons, sight, hearing, taste and touch are all affected, however the strongest of these senses for Age is that of smell, if focused a dragon slayer can literally sniff out an opponent's hiding spot as if they were some kind of blood hound. (passive)

    Burn Skin: The user has a 50% passive buff to their skin when punched or hit with non magical attacks. This makes the fire dragon burn people, however this buff can only be applied to physical attacks. In accordance with his rank. (passive) [I'm a bit confused regarding to this- what do you mean buff to skin? You need to explain develop this and it's effects more. Also, 50% is too big of a passive buff for a D rank]

    Fire Recovery: Age can regain magical and physical health by consuming Fire magic in any form, be it has restictions like age can not eat light/dark flames. In accordance with the dragon slayer chart. (active)

    Dragon Force: Age can now access Dragon Force, the most powerful state of the dragon slayer, which he can attain by either eating an A-H rank fire spell, an unlimited source of magical energy, or by eating 25% of age's element fire. It is a state reserved for only the most dire of situations.

    During this transformation his elemental strengths become elemental immunities, [You cannot be immune to an element, you can however be more resistant than usual but you can't nullify completely and element] however his elemental weakness become complete vulnerabilities. His body takes on all the aspects of the fire dragon.

    His passive 50% buff of his burn skin becomes a 75% buff to physical attacks, and a 25% buff to all elemental and non elemental attacks that he is neither strong nor weak against. in accordance to the users rank. [This goes along with the need to define a bit better what you call burn skin, and toning down a bit those augmentations which are too high for D rank]

    and all spells can be cast free of charge. However this form only lasts for 7 posts as with the rules, and once it is used Age is drained of all but 5% of his magic power.


    D Rank Spells:


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    Post by Ronrex 6th May 2014, 1:29 pm

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    Post by Gemma 6th May 2014, 11:01 pm

    Sorry for the wait~ It's much better, there's still some tweaking -mostly precising- to do and new things i picked up on but it's pretty good. Bump when done!

    Ronrex wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This form of dragon slayer magic is different than past fire dragon slayer magics. While being a Scorching/red flame. Its changes depending on what kind of rage/anger Age is feeling but color change dose nothing to the flames just for show [I'm going to let you do that- a bit of creativity is always nice. Just try to stick to "natural" fire colors such a red/orange/yellow/blue.]. Age's flame is also dependent on his rage setting if age is furious blue flames no anger age just has his regular red flames.

    The main way he uses it is to engulf his body in flames. It does take large amounts of concentration to control both flames [Missed this earlier- needs to be updated] at once. Its mostly a fist fighting magic but does have some range. He is able to absorb fire by consuming it as well. He does however suffer from motion sickness.
    Strengths:
       *High Output-This kind of magic has a high damage output.
       *Burn- If extended periods of time touching skin person who was touched is burned.
       *Omnomnom-Eating fire boosts his magic.
    Weaknesses:
       *Motion-Motion sickness comes with the job.
       *Low speed-The temperature differences hinder the users movement. [By how much? 10%?]
       *Water-Do I really need to explain this?
      *Flame Meals- Age can not eat dark or light flames only regular flames.
    Abilities/Powers:

    Dragon Slayer senses: The users five senses are heightened to those of a dragons, sight, hearing, taste and touch are all affected, however the strongest of these senses for Age is that of smell, if focused a dragon slayer can literally sniff out an opponent's hiding spot as if they were some kind of blood hound. (passive)

    Burn Skin: The user has a 10% passive buff to Age's skin when punched or hit with physical attacks. The person who touches the fire dragons skin gets burned, however this buff can only be applied to physical attacks. In accordance with his rank. (passive) [You can't really have that as an passive- imagine having normal social interactions if you burn people. That and I feel bad for his bed sheets. It would make sense to have that when he's in combat with some kind of flames active though]

    Fire Recovery: Age can regain magical and physical health by consuming Fire magic in any form, be it has restictions like age can not eat light/dark flames. In accordance with the dragon slayer chart. (active)

    Dragon Force: Age can now access Dragon Force, the most powerful state of the dragon slayer, which he can attain by either eating an A-H rank fire spell, [At D rank you can only absorb fire from spells that are D rank+ one rank up, so C. Keep in mind that you can eat the element but still get hit by the attack] an unlimited source of magical energy, or by eating 25% of age's element fire. It is a state reserved for only the most dire of situations.

    During this transformation his elemental strengths has an elemental resistances of 50%, however his elemental weakness become 40% more effective. His body takes on all the aspects of the fire dragon. [Precise the elements in question. Apart from that the percentages look good]

    His passive 10% chance of being burned by burn skin becomes a 20% chance to physical attacks.

    and all spells can be cast free of charge. However this form only lasts for 7 posts as with the rules, and once it is used Age is drained of all but 5% of his magic power.


    D Rank Spells:


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    Post by Gemma 7th May 2014, 11:36 pm

    Please go over all my notes thoroughly. Currently, what is blocking your app are things I have already pointed out to you- it's not normal and just delaying you in the long run and I'm not going to go down that route. Please message me if you don't understand my notes so we can work on it together. Bump this when you are done with your edits.

    Ronrex wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This form of dragon slayer magic is different than past fire dragon slayer magics. While being a Scorching/red flame. Its changes depending on what kind of rage/anger Age is feeling but color change dose nothing to the flames just for show. Age's flame is also dependent on his rage setting if age is furious blue flames no anger age just has his regular red flames.

    The main way he uses it is to engulf his body in flames. Its mostly a fist fighting magic but does have some range. He is able to absorb fire by consuming it as well. He does however suffer from motion sickness.
    Strengths:
       *High Output-This kind of magic has a high damage output.
       *Burn- If extended periods of time touching skin person who was touched is burned.
       *Omnomnom-Eating fire boosts his magic.
    Weaknesses:
       *Motion-Motion sickness comes with the job.
       *Water-Do I really need to explain this?
       *Flame Meals- Age can not eat dark or light flames only regular flames.
      *Burn Heal- If burned you can heal it by simply keep the burned area soaked in water for 2 post. [Water does not heal burns, I've pointed this out before]
    Abilities/Powers:

    Dragon Slayer senses: The users five senses are heightened to those of a dragons, sight, hearing, taste and touch are all affected, however the strongest of these senses for Age is that of smell, if focused a dragon slayer can literally sniff out an opponent's hiding spot as if they were some kind of blood hound. (passive)

    Burn Skin: The user has a 10% passive buff to Age's skin when in combat or hit with physical attacks. The person who attacks the fire dragons gets burned, however this buff can only be applied to physical attacks. In accordance with his rank. (passive)

    Fire Recovery: Age can regain magical and physical health by consuming Fire magic in any form, be it has restictions like age can not eat light/dark flames. In accordance with the dragon slayer chart. (active)

    Dragon Force: Age can now access Dragon Force, the most powerful state of the dragon slayer, which he can attain by either eating fire spell from equal rank or one rank up, an unlimited source of magical energy, or by eating 25% of age's element fire. It is a state reserved for only the most dire of situations.

    During this transformation his elemental strength which is flame so age has an elemental resistances of 50%, however his elemental weakness water become 40% more effective. His body takes on all the aspects of the fire dragon.

    His passive 10% chance of being burned by burn skin becomes a 20% chance to physical attacks.

    and all spells can be cast free of charge. However this form only lasts for 7 posts as with the rules, and once it is used Age is drained of all but 5% of his magic power.


    D Rank Spells:
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    Post by Ronrex 8th May 2014, 12:37 pm

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    Post by Nykyrian 9th May 2014, 4:38 am

    Ronrex wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Fire Dragon Slayer
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: This form of dragon slayer magic is different than past fire dragon slayer magics. While being a Scorching/red flame. Its changes depending on what kind of rage/anger Age is feeling but color change dose nothing to the flames just for show. Age's flame is also dependent on his rage setting if age is furious blue flames no anger age just has his regular red flames.Can you describe what colors go to which emotion, and i hope this doesn't give you any special abilities, cause that would not be okay. Please think about details when doing a description, such as what it looks like, magic circles, incantations?

    The main way he uses it is to engulf his body in flames. Its mostly a fist fighting magic but does have some range. He is able to absorb fire by consuming it as well. He does however suffer from motion sickness.If it has range, that needs to be specified, at D rank i would say no more than 10 meters for any of your spells.
    Strengths:
       *High Output-This kind of magic has a high damage output.What do you mean by this? You are D rank, your damage does not go above that unless specified with lingering effects, such as burning?... Or are you trying to say this is not support magic and is used for offensive instead of defense?
       *Burn- If extended periods of time touching skin person who was touched is burned.This needs to be re-worded, i know what you are trying to say, but it is difficult to sort out, perhaps try saying " If flames touch an opponents body for an extended period of time, the opponent can get burned.
       *Omnomnom-Eating fire boosts his magic.It does not boost magic, it restores magical energy.
    Weaknesses:
       *Motion-Motion sickness comes with the job.
       *Water-Do I really need to explain this?
       *Flame Meals- Age can not eat dark or light flames only regular flames.explain why he can not eat these colored flames? Is it because they are from demon and god slayers? if so you need to put that.
       *Slow Burning- Effects from being burned have a delayed reaction of 1 post.What do you mean a delayed reaction of 1 post? Your fellow rper can not post at the same time you do, so of course they are burned after one post.. please think this through.
    Abilities/Powers:

    Dragon Slayer senses: The users five senses are heightened to those of a dragons, sight, hearing, taste and touch are all affected, however the strongest of these senses for Age is that of smell, if focused a dragon slayer can literally sniff out an opponent's hiding spot as if they were some kind of blood hound. (passive)Give me a percentage of how much more they are heightened compared to a regular human, at your rank i would say at most 25%

    Burn Skin: The user has a 10% passive buff to Age's skin when in combat or hit with physical attacks. The person who attacks the fire dragons gets burned, however this buff can only be applied to physical attacks. In accordance with his rank. (passive)Ummm what? I don't understand this at all. Unless you are in Dragon force, your defense capabilities per skin wise are the same as any other mage.

    Fire Recovery: Age can regain magical and physical health by consuming Fire magic in any form, be it has restictions like age can not eat light/dark flames. In accordance with the dragon slayer chart. (active)Eating their element only restores magical power, not health. https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t5786-magic-power-rules-information

    Dragon Force: Age can now access Dragon Force, the most powerful state of the dragon slayer, which he can attain by either eating fire spell from equal rank or one rank up, an unlimited source of magical energy, or by eating 25% of age's element fire. It is a state reserved for only the most dire of situations.The only way you can enter dragon force is if you eat 25% o your element of eat fire for 5 posts in a row. Nothing about eating a fire spell equal to rank or higher.https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t5786-magic-power-rules-information

    During this transformation his elemental strength which is flame so age has an elemental resistances of 50%, however his elemental weakness water become 40% more effective. His body takes on all the aspects of the fire dragon. Like Gemma said, even though it is your own element 50% resistance is too high for D rank, Even during Dragon force.

    His passive 10% chance of being burned by burn skin becomes a 20% chance to physical attacks.Okay i think this has something to do with a passive ability listed up there, but i still dont understand what this burn skin is...-.-

    and all spells can be cast free of charge. However this form only lasts for 7 posts as with the rules, and once it is used Age is drained of all but 5% of his magic power.


    D Rank Spells:

    All comments are made in THIS COLOR, I am going to say this now, you need to really think about details, and all measurements possible. Please make your corrections and ill look over it again when needed.

    Sorry Gemm, i was told this needed to be looked over by another mod -.-


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    Post by Nykyrian 11th May 2014, 3:14 pm

    Okay!!! This looks so much better, i will have to say this, that 5% burn effect for two posts is not applicable to B rank mages on all your spells, not just one, other than that it looks great, let me know when you are done and ill look it over again.


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    Post by Ronrex 11th May 2014, 4:27 pm

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    Post by Nykyrian 12th May 2014, 6:00 pm

    Okay, approved.


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    Post by Sir Leonard 4th June 2014, 1:52 am

    1. Make it clear the Fire Dragon's Roar is not applicable to B rank mages AND ABOVE.

    2. Crimson Wing's Power increase should be lowered. Let's say to 8%. What's the explanation why it can increase your physical strength?

    3. Fire Dragon's wing attack. Does have to be a minimum of two opponents for you to use this? Lower burn damage to 15%.


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    Post by Sir Leonard 4th June 2014, 3:15 am

    This is good to go. C Spells Approved~


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