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    Shirinui
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    Post by Shirinui 9th June 2012, 2:41 pm

    Primary Magic: Fire Magic

    Secondary Magic: --

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Description: Fire magic is a form of magic that revolves around the element of fire, allowing the user to conjure, manipulate and even control the element for various purposes. The caster can also change it's "form" to be solid or even gas. Fire Magic also has alot of burn damage, as all attacks have a capability to set a burn on the target. If used on the skin, it causes a lot more damage when compared to when used on Armour. Fire's strength varies, but burns do much more the sronger the fire is.

    Strengths: Versatile and powerful if in right hands, it also causes alot of damage and a variety of attacks and strategies to weaken and overpower the opponent. It it extremely powerful to Ice, Grass and Metal/Iron.

    Weaknesses: Magic Power is used quite a lot if used in succession. Also weak to Water and Wind magic. Fire magic can also go overboard.

    Abilities/Powers:
    Fire Resistance, Lots of Power, Speed and amazing Hand-to-Hand Combat.

    D Rank Spells.
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    C Rank Spells.

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    B Rank Spells
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 19th June 2012, 9:26 pm

    Remove everything in parentheses.

    I do not care if it is self explanatory, that will not be tolerated here. Explain it so we know that YOU know absolutely everything about the magic, and do not attempt to go over board with it.

    More strengths, more weaknesses.

    Until you get the parentheses removed, it makes it too hard to read your spells so I will stop here for now until you have gotten everything so far done. Bump when edited.


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    Post by Shirinui 22nd June 2012, 8:37 am

    Bump


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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 22nd June 2012, 7:50 pm

    Are there any extra benefits to the spells like Fire Fist? Wouldn't it add a burning effect to the user's fist that upon contact with the enemy or target, would either cause a light burning or smoldering effect? Wouldn't it also make them hit a bit harder? Those are a few extra strengths that can be mentioned if you wish to include them. How long do your fire fists last? a duration is needed.

    Next, what type of damage do your spells do? Do they have piercing, blunt, slashing damage as well as additional burning? That is also a bit in your primary description that needs to be added, fire has a lot of burning damage that can burn targets despite armor if made direct contact against the skin. the stronger it is, the stronger the burn, that is how fire works.

    Are there any elements that fire has an advantage to? You name it's obvious weakness, but what if you use your spell against something Fire has the advantage against?

    Bump when edited, and ask if you need anything explained.


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    Post by Shirinui 23rd June 2012, 2:19 pm

    Bump


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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 23rd June 2012, 8:00 pm

    While using Flaming shield, are you able to use other spells during its duration?

    Other than that I do not see anything wrong and will ask another mod for a second opinion before approving.


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    Post by Shirinui 1st July 2012, 1:34 am

    Bump


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    Post by Alleria 1st July 2012, 3:18 am

    Um for the flame shield, can you put in how many rank c or d attacks it can take


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    Post by Shirinui 1st July 2012, 4:04 am

    Fixed it! Bump.


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    Post by Alleria 1st July 2012, 4:21 am

    flame shield again
    3 d rank damages is ok but 2 c rank damage is still too strong. can you make it one?


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    Post by Shirinui 1st July 2012, 4:24 am

    Bump!


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    Post by Emilia Hawke 1st July 2012, 4:35 am

    I'll be filling in for Night since he doesn't have internet, Alleria can be the second opinion.
    Smoke Screen: How long exactly does the smoke screen last for? Pretty important info there lolz.
    Blazing Blitz: PLEASE TELL ME YOU MEAN C RANK AND LOWER SHIELDS? You can't be THAT powerful with it man. B rank and higher shields ignored just doesn't make sense and if thats what you really meant, yeah WAY too OP that would have to be S rank to have that kind of power to ignore pretty much all shields.

    That's all I see left. Your spells are pretty straight forward so theres no need for too much description. Fix those problems, and if Alleria has no other objections after those things have been fixed, I approve.


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    Post by Shirinui 1st July 2012, 4:39 am

    That epic derp XD

    Fixed it XD. Bump.


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    Post by Emilia Hawke 1st July 2012, 4:49 am

    JOHN LORANIDIS SEAL OF APPROVAL!


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