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    Rin's Starting Equipment Twilight Flash Armor (Done!)

    Rin Moriyama
    Rin Moriyama

    Goddess of Storms


    Goddess of Storms

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    Post by Rin Moriyama 7th February 2014, 5:00 pm

    Name: Twilight Flash Armor
    Rank: D
    Type: Armor
    Description:
    Twilight Flash Armor:
    Strengths:
    - Very light, can maneuver quite easily in this armor
    - Quite tough for being mostly cloth armor
    - Can withstand most weather conditions
    Weaknesses:
    - Quite flammable meaning its weak against fire magic
    - can be torn or ripped if it gets caught on something
    - has to be restored by repair magic if damaged
    Abilities:
    None Yet


    Last edited by TsukinoUsagiChan on 18th February 2014, 5:18 pm; edited 4 times in total


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    Post by Alye 7th February 2014, 5:20 pm

    TsukinoUsagiChan wrote:Name: Twilight Flash Armor
    Rank: D
    Type: Armor
    Description:
    Twilight Flash Armor:
    Strengths:
    - Very light, can maneuver quite easily in this armor
    - Quite tough for being mostly cloth armor
    - Can withstand most weather conditions
    Weaknesses:
    - Quite flammable meaning its weak against fire magic
    - can be torn or ripped if it gets caught on something
    - has to be restored by repair magic if damaged
    Abilities:
    - Allows user to teleport 20 meters (at d-rank)
    - Can travel through alternate spaces  and dimensions only at twilight

    Armor: I don't really think the teleportation has any reason to be there. The strengths and the abilities just do not match up to one another.
    Rin Moriyama
    Rin Moriyama

    Goddess of Storms


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    Post by Rin Moriyama 7th February 2014, 11:42 pm

    the reason i put in teleportation is because i really want the passive ability of teleportation and the only way to get it is with armor or a weapon. and seeing as its named the twilight flash armor, i thought it'd be ok, and also, i edited my weapon like u asked


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    Post by Alye 9th February 2014, 11:22 am

    Well, I guess I could allow the teleportation if you bump the range by 15 meters and give it a cooldown of like...three posts.
    Rin Moriyama
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    Post by Rin Moriyama 9th February 2014, 6:22 pm

    Bump, also, the teleportation. Doesn't need a cooldown if it's a passive ability, right?


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    Post by Alye 11th February 2014, 4:00 pm

    Teleportation is the ultimate form of evasion. If you want it, it needs a cooldown.
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    Post by Rin Moriyama 11th February 2014, 5:29 pm

    bump~! I added a 3 post cool down


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    Post by Grizzly 17th February 2014, 2:52 pm

    Ok... the main problem here is that you wrote D Rank on your STARTING weapon. Therefore I assume that this weapon is weak... so I'll have to treat it as that :c

    And the problem is that weak weapons don't get combat-related passives. And teleportation is an extremely convenient combat passive...

    I understand that you want to have teleportation (who doesn't xD), but you'll have to wait until you can employ REAL passives into your equipment.

    Additionally, teleportation is SUCH a convenient ability that it is not possible to have as a PASSIVE, because it requires a cooldown to be balanced. Which means you'll have to completely get rid of teleportation AND traveling through alternate dimensions n____n

    Sorry for the inconvenience, but rules are rules >.<


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    Rin Moriyama
    Rin Moriyama

    Goddess of Storms


    Goddess of Storms

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    Post by Rin Moriyama 9th March 2014, 6:10 am

    bump


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    Post by Grizzly 9th March 2014, 6:16 am

    Grand. Thanks ^^

    Approved.


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