Sinclair Zelpha

b]Name:[/b] :Sinclair Zelpha
Gender: :Male
Age: :16
Birthday: :February 17
Sexuality::Straight
Special Characteristics: :No

Personality:
-Sinclair is a world domination fanatic inside and outside the battle field. Outside the battle field he is usually calm and quiet keeping to himself so he won't talk to people he refer as "boring". Sinclair can usually be seen sitting alone in the corner of where ever he is at. If Sinclair is surrounded or even around a person to begin with. It would be someone he would want to be around if not he would go tell them off. There are only a hand full of people that Sinclair would consider worthy of being his friends or team-mates.Whenever he gets mad at a person he shows his sadist side of himself and starts to collect dominance over them as if it was a instinct. When he is outside the battle about to go find a target or someone to play with he will be collecting information about them to see if they will be easy to break or hard to break. But if Sinclair is meeting someone who he knows can easily beat him in a fight, Sinclair would try his best to avoid fighting that person, so Sinclair wouldn't be forced to completely admit defeat. Sinclair often listens to what his superiors say without giving back talk. When Sinclair is in charge of them one day he will make sure they pay for it, or at least that's what Sinclair thinks. Sinclair personality in some ways are very rude,arrogant but there are some features that Sinclair's friends very admirable: like his non-stop wish to dominant the world, or his personality that makes him get stronger ever time he gets defeated, or even his ability to find people who would are "interesting" to Sinclair. Sinclair usually address people as "interesting" when he takes a certain interest in their magic,personality,or just their perceptive of the world they live in.
-Sinclair is extremely sadistic on the battle field wanting to savor every moment of his enemies cries of pain and begging him to let them go. Every time he hears their voice scream in pain, he wonders what will it sound like when he completes his goal of world domination. Sinclair often leads people around and bend them to his will. Sinclair tends not to follow people who he doesn't want to follow, so he goes his own way from time to time. In the battle field when Sinclair is defeated by a stronger enemy he tends to go into hiding for a bit while he trains and coops with his defeat. When Sinclair comes out he tries to defeat the same enemy with multiple escape routes along the way. He tries the same process over and over. Until he finally kills his enemy. Sinclair has been known to hold grudges unless it's vital to his goal, he won't forget who defeats him where and how until he defeats them again. So making enemies with Sinclair is ultimately a bad choice, making "allies" with Sinclair is good choice, and fighting Sinclair is ultimately the worst choice you can make.

Likes:
-Domination:Sinclair loves to be on top of everyone. expect he knows his limitations and who not to fight so he can expect a out come in his favor.
-Fighting: In Sinclair's mind he thinks the more fights he is in the stronger he will get. So Sinclair fights for the sole reason that sometime in the future he believes he is invincible.
-Interesting People:Another reason why Sinclair likes to travel and not be bound to one place is for the sole reason of finding interesting people. The more interesting people he finds that's another potential "comrade" or so Sinclair thinks.

Dislikes:
-Being Dominated: He completely hates it when someone wins against him in a fight. Nothing will stop him from getting stronger and stronger until he pushes that obstacle in his way down. Then he would make sure that "obstacle" would never dare confront him again.
-Something Goes Wrong: When something goes wrong in his plans that wasn't supposed to happen Sinclair tries not to let it get to him. But if it ruins to whole plan he would be madly upset and try to "remove" the thing that ruined his plans.
-Being Surrounded: Sinclair hates being surrounded by people as he would refer to as "boring". If he was going to hang around anyone it would be the people who he thinks are interesting.

Motivations:
-World Domination:He wants the world to be under his complete control. So Sinclair can mold it to the shape he wants to at his very call.
-To Become Stronger: Sinclair wants to becomes so strong to the point where people will already acknowledge their defeat as if he so much as gets in a fighting stance. So he can do whatever he wishes with them as in a sign of complete domination.
-Complete Control:He wishes to control everyone, and everything. That is why he wants to rule the world so he has complete control, complete dominance.

Fears:
-Death: As such as everyone even Sinclair fears death, because in Sinclair's thoughts it's "if I die, I will never be able to succeed in world domination."
-Someone else dominating the world: Sinclair would fear this more then death itself. Because Sinclair since he was a child was fixated on dominating the world and for someone else to take his most joyous dream from him would be devastating to him.
-Becoming powerless:To Sinclair power is life itself. With power he can reshape the world. With power he can control anyone. With power he can do anything to anyone. So if Sinclair was to ever become powerless he would most likely become mentally unstable.

General Appearance


Height:: 6 Feet, 1 inches
Weight:: 170 Pounds
Hair: : Blonde hair shaggy hair that goes to his shoulders.
Eyes: : Sky blue.
Skin Tone: :Light skin tone
Appearance: :Sinclair has blonde shaggy hair that goes to his neck. Sinclair typically wears a black high collared cloak, with black rubber boots. Sinclair has a light skin tone, a fairly toned,slender body. With blue eye, he usually has a rope tied to his weapon "Art Of Manipulation" that he carries over his shoulder with one hand.

Guild/Council :Guild-less

Guild:
Tattoo:
Rank:: Sinclair Is A D Rank Mage.

Hey there, I am Frederick and will be looking over your app.

There are just a few things that need to be done before I can approve this, first of all it's your personality. We maintain a word count of 500 words, and your is only around 430. So you just need a few more sentences.

And secondly you need to clean up your app a bit, like:
Height: (How tall is your character): 6 Feet, 1 inches
Weight: (How much does your character way): 170 Pounds
Hair: (What color is the hair and how is it designed): Blonde hair shaggy hair that goes to his shoulders.

You see the words I turned bold, well those things need to be deleted and just replace it with your height and weight, instead of writing it behind it.
For the rest your app looks fine

Updated!

approved