Fairy Tail RP

Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.

• Patch Notes •                 • New User Guide •                • Guild Information •

    Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval]

    neferti
    neferti

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : None
    Position : None
    Posts : 20
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 30
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval] Empty Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval]

    Post by neferti 17th May 2012, 4:00 pm

    Primary Magic: Requip: The Assassin
    Secondary Magic:
    Caster or Holder: Holder
    Description: Requip: The Assassin allows Claus to utilize his different armors and weapons in order to fully complete his missions. The armors used are usually covered in some sort of armor for less or more protection. When he wishes to equip his armor, he shouts out "[Armor Name],Requip!" To take it off, he snaps and says the armor's name again.

    Strengths: Claus is able to quickly able to change his armors, making the flow of battle for him better.
    Weaknesses: Since he is slowly getting use to using his magical abilities, he often makes mistakes, which could cause his magic to rebound on him, often causing some sort of weird growth on his body.
    Abilities/Powers:
    • Increase defense (depending on the armor used)
    • Increase agility
    • Increase speed
    • Increase attack


    Name: Requip: Standard
    Rank: D
    Type: Armor
    Description: Quickly wrapping its way around the caster's original clothing, the Standard armor gives a 20% boost in agility and speed.
    An image of the armor:
    Spoiler:
    Strengths: An extra boost of stamina is given, followed by an extra boost of strength.
    Weaknesses: It has little to no armor around it, leaving the caster open for all attacks.
    Duration: 5 posts
    Cool down: 3 posts

    Name: Requip: Missalgias Armor
    Rank: D
    Type: Armor
    Description: Quickly wrapping its way around the caster's original clothing, the Missalgias Armor gives a 20% boost in defense, but a decrease in speed. This armor is useful when trying to go against tough opponents and certain spells; mainly C-rank spells.
    An image of the armor:
    Spoiler:
    Strengths: An extra boost of defense is given here.
    Weaknesses: This armor slows down the caster's land speed.

    Duration: 10 posts
    Cool down: 5 posts.

    Name: Requip: Hook Blade
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description: This spell allows the caster to change one of their weapons, giving them the ability to find a small chink in their opponent's armor, allowing them to either roll off their back, allowing them to continue past them, or send their opponent flying with a throw.
    Strengths: The caster can continue moving once performing the roll.
    Weaknesses: The caster leaves himself open after the throw for attack

    Duration: 1 posts
    Cool down: 1 posts.


    Name: Requip: Eagle Scope
    Rank: D
    Type: Support
    Description: The caster's eyesight is increased to an almost superhuman level. It allows the user to see at a greater distance then a human's.
    Strengths: Gives them a range of 360 degrees.
    Weaknesses: The caster is unable to move while using this spell.

    Duration: 2 posts
    Cool down: 4 posts.


    Last edited by neferti on 21st May 2012, 7:10 am; edited 1 time in total
    Daichi
    Daichi

    Dragon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Phoenix's Fire
    Position : None
    Posts : 519
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Mentor : Ryujin the Water Dragon
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval] Empty Re: Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval]

    Post by Daichi 21st May 2012, 6:55 am

    Your app is good. I just need you to use percentages for the boosts. D rank boosts should not exceed 20%. And also, seeing through things as a D rank spell sounds quite op. You might want to change it to enhancing vision helping the user see further than a human's, but not through items. And if possible, make your descriptions longer.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    KAGAMI DAICHI
    THEME SONGDRAGON FORCE THEME
    Daichi
    Daichi

    Dragon Slayer- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1 Year Anniversary- Player 
    Lineage : Phoenix's Fire
    Position : None
    Posts : 519
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Mentor : Ryujin the Water Dragon
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Water Dragon Slayer
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval] Empty Re: Claus van Heightz's Magic; Requip: The Assassin [Waiting for approval]

    Post by Daichi 21st May 2012, 7:14 am

    Alright, seems to be better. I'm going to approve this unless another mod sees a problem.


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    KAGAMI DAICHI
    THEME SONGDRAGON FORCE THEME

      Current date/time is 14th November 2024, 11:28 pm