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    Jojo's Magic Field

    Jojo Kaguya
    Jojo Kaguya

    Player 
    Lineage : Shinokishi: The Death Knight
    Position : None
    Posts : 47
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Bone Magic
    Second Skill: n/a
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Jojo Kaguya 12th March 2014, 1:09 am

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Bone Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: The magic known as ‘bone magic’ is arcane in its nature that very few have ever come close to attempting to use the dangerous arts. Jojo on the other hand has used its arts in forms quite unknown in the regions of the known world. The art known as ‘bone magic’ is utilized in advancing the materials inside the bones and casting it out of the human body, but can only be utilized on one’s self. This art inhibits abilities to knowingly strengthen the bone properties of the user but then bringing it out in weapon form similar to blades or small knives, but the extension of the weaponry is a whip. Following this, the skill has limitations but those limitations come with hefty prices as well. The magic completely degrades the human brain as time passes, and as more time passes, the further the mental struggle to separate reality and fiction comes to fruition.

    Jojo uses the magic to create swords; to be exact it is only two swords. One is a kodachi and the other is a wakizachi. Both are materialized out from her hands, directly from where the metacarpals connect with the ulna. The weaponry is as fine as a new cutting edge, and is made up of the finest materialized minerals. However, aside from these two fine blades, she also creates something quite similar to throwing starts out of her very calves. Now, to keep from any holes or torn muscle content from befalling her, she has trained her body extensively to willingly separate all the sinews and skin without spilling blood yet allowing herself to bring such weaponry out of her body. This skillful manner designates her to capably using this skill for the best manner.
    Strengths:

    • Hand to hand: Due to the increased bone capacity, this skills allows for harder blunt attacks where needed.
    • Precision: Since this skill requires a high alertness to the human body during the training, the user is capable of knowing all proper points of the human body such as pressure points, vitals, and the like.
    • Speed of Foot: The speed that enlists this skill allows Jojo to push forwards and delightfully be as agile as needed with the reaction time necessary but lessoning her bone capacity to increase the speed.
    • Cannibalistic Nature: With the consumption of human flesh and blood (cannibalistic acts), or even demonic in nature, the consumption of this will only allow the animal side to be more apparent in frenzy, yet does not diminish the intellect itself. Per turn of consumption is another turn of sating the beast inside before intellect destruction.

    Weaknesses:

    • Animal Instinct: With extended use of this skill, the mind of the user reverts back on the more animal side of living for the need to feed, survive, and kill surpasses logic and reason. This will require a further four posts after activation before intellect is cut down to fifty percent, after this every post will decrease it by half again and again.
    • Utilize Surroundings: The bone displacement takes time, and to pass from a light capacity to a heavy capacity requires Jojo to go back into normal capacity first. This change is swift but still can only be done so many times during a situation. One full change of light to heavy or heavy to light per post is the max.
    • Intellect: To regain intellect, the user must rest for two posts to gain back what was initially lost in intellect, but it will take one more posts to reclaim memories of that time of lessened intellect. In total, three posts, the final one results in mass confusion and symptoms of shock as the body shakes without warning, and depending on the amount of memory recovered, one or more posts worth after half memory gone, will result in the body going into convulsions along the floor during that one memory recovery post.
    • Weighing Yourself Down: During the heavy bone capacity, the user’s speed is readable, and though it may still be fast enough to react, the attacks are readable as well as movements to easily be counter attacked at will.
    • Cannibalistic Recourse: When undertaking the cannibal route, the one feasting must continually consume humanoid flesh or else the intellect deletion will occur at much faster rates. Immediately the turn after eating the being will lose said intellect unless more raw humanoid meat is consumed, sating the intellect for just that turn. Once gone, the intellect will disappear immediately if sated beyond three turns, resorting to pure beast with zero intellect.

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Jojo can raise her bone capacity to twice that of the average human's to keep her bones from breaking under normal pressures. This allows for the bones to harden to the capability of withstanding twice the normal brunt attacks, and even allows for a blocking of a single cutting edge of an average, non magic endowed weapon. In turn this also means she can lower it to the maximum of one-fourth her bone capacity.
    • Another ability of this magic is the well done endowment of the bone weapons. Able to resist against four hits of equal rank, two of the rank higher and one of the rank higher than that. In example, a D-class mage would be capable of withstanding four D-rank hits, two C-rank hits, or one B-rank hit before shattering. Anything higher than that will completely shatter the endowed bone instantaneously.


    Spell Template

    Wicked Flight:

    Twin Sword Dance:


    Last edited by Jojo Kaguya on 13th March 2014, 11:46 pm; edited 3 times in total
    Grizzly
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Barrier Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Grizzly 13th March 2014, 12:38 pm

    Hey Jojo! Sorry it took so long, but here I am ^^

    I firstly want to say that you did a great creative job on making the magic, but there's one significant thing wrong with it. (dun dun DUUUUUUUN)

    You depowered yourself xD Limited yourself and gave yourself HEAVY weaknesses. You overbalanced in a way. Didn't know people like you exist, but they do.

    So yeah, I don't know if you consciously did that and want to lift your weaknesses and quite harsh drawbacks in the frame of character development or if you're just that type of humble person.

    Either way it's cool! I just want to show you the possibilities you still have ^^

    Jojo Kaguya wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Bone Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description: The magic known as ‘bone magic’ is arcane in its nature that very few have ever come close to attempting to use the dangerous arts. Jojo on the other hand has used its arts in forms quite unknown in the regions of the known world. The art known as ‘bone magic’ is utilized in advancing the materials inside the bones and casting it out of the human body, but can only be utilized on one’s self. This art inhibits abilities to knowingly strengthen the bone properties of the user but then bringing it out in weapon form similar to blades or small knives, but the extension of the weaponry is a whip. Following this, the skill has limitations but those limitations come with hefty prices as well. The magic completely degrades the human brain as time passes, and as more time passes, the further the mental struggle to separate reality and fiction comes to fruition.

    Jojo uses the magic to create swords; to be exact it is only two swords. One is a kodachi and the other is a wakizachi. Both are materialized out from her hands, directly from where the metacarpals connect with the ulna. The weaponry is as fine as a new cutting edge, and is made up of the finest materialized minerals. However, aside from these two fine blades, she also creates something quite similar to throwing starts out of her very calves. Now, to keep from any holes or torn muscle content from befalling her, she has trained her body extensively to willingly separate all the sinews and skin without spilling blood yet allowing herself to bring such weaponry out of her body. This skillful manner designates her to capably using this skill for the best manner.
    Strengths:

    • Hand to hand: Due to the increased bone capacity, this skills allows for harder blunt attacks where needed.
    • Precision: Since this skill requires a high alertness to the human body during the training, the user is capable of knowing all proper points of the human body such as pressure points, vitals, and the like.
    • Speed of Foot: The speed that enlists this skill allows Jojo to push forwards and delightfully be as agile as needed with the reaction time necessary but lessoning her bone capacity to increase the speed.
    • Cannibalistic Nature: With the consumption of human flesh, human blood, or even demonic in nature, the consumption of this will only allow the animal side to be more apparent in frenzy, yet does not diminish the intellect itself. Per turn of consumption is another turn of sating teh beast inside before intellect destruction. <<< So kinda vampire-y? As in they drink blood to stay sane and nurtured, and you eat flesh? Just for my own clarification.

    Weaknesses:

    • Animal Instinct: With extended use of this skill, the mind of the user reverts back on the more animal side of living for the need to feed, survive, and kill surpasses logic and reason. This will require a further four posts after activation before intellect is cut down to fifty percent, after this every post will decrease it by half again and again.
    • Utilize Surroundings: The bone displacement takes time, and to pass from a light capacity to a heavy capacity requires Jojo to go back into normal capacity first. This normalcy will take one post to get to followed by the next post going into the following density from there, in total a two post process. <<< You would be easily allowed to switch between bone capacities once per post. Unless you want to do that within character development. Either way it's A-Ok and switching only once per post would still count as weakness.
    • Intellect: To regain intellect, the user must rest for four posts to gain back what was initially lost in intellect, but it will take two more posts to reclaim memories of that time of lessened intellect. In total, six posts, the final two resulting in mass confusion and symptoms of shock as the body shakes without warning, and depending on the amount of memory recovered, three or more posts worth after half memory gone, will result in the body going into convulsions along the floor during those two posts. <<< What a weakness o-o Seriously, you don't need to do the two posts reconvalescence to regain intellect and can cut the time you need to actually regain intellect back in half. Just saying, the weakness would still be pretty feasible imo. Usually people just write "enters genocide mode when using magic for too long", but you took this to a pretty sensible level. I'm impressed and stand in awe! Wouldn't have thought someone'd do it xD
    • Weighing Yourself Down: During the heavy bone capacity, the user’s speed is readable, and though it may still be fast enough to react, the attacks are readable as well as movements to easily be counter attacked at will.
    • Cannibalistic Recourse: When undertaking the cannibal route, the one feasting must continually consume flesh or else the intellect deletion will occur at much faster rates. Immediately the turn after eating the being will lose said intellect unless more raw humanoid meat is consumed, sating the intellect for just that turn. Once gone, the intellect will disappear immediately if sated beyond three turns, resorting to pure beast with zero intellect. <<< Meat as in human flesh or meat as in the general nourishment? Either way it'd be ok.

    Abilities/Powers:

    • Jojo can raise her bone capacity to twice that of the average human's to keep her bones from breaking under normal pressures. This allows for the bones to harden to the capability of withstanding twice the normal brunt attacks, and even allows for a blocking of a single cutting edge of an average, non magic endowed weapon. In turn this also means she can lower it to the maximum of one-fourth her bone capacity.
    • Another ability of this magic is the well done endowment of the bone weapons. Able to resist against four hits of equal rank, two of the rank higher and one of the rank higher than that. In example, a D-class mage would be capable of withstanding four D-rank hits, two C-rank hits, or one B-rank hit before shattering. Anything higher than that will completely shatter the endowed bone instantaneously.


    Spell Template

    Wicked Flight:

    Twin Sword Dance:

    Since you already clarified your situation with the two additional spells, I'll totes approve. But here's a suggestion for additional spells.

    The same way your first spell works, just with extreme defense. You would harden your bones and push them towards your skin from the inside that your body gets insanely hard in the process, being able to take twice D Rank damage. The weakness would be that there would be a small time gap before you've finalized the bone hardening meaning fast enough spells can obstruct the full potential of this spell. If they are fast enough, you could only take one D Rank damage. The second weakness'd be that you can barely move and are almost completely static.

    Just an idea. I have tons of other ideas for a magic like this because I absolutely LOVE the ability you're working with.

    Anyway, that'd be all for now ^^ Gimme a bump when you're ready ~


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    Jojo Kaguya
    Jojo Kaguya

    Player 
    Lineage : Shinokishi: The Death Knight
    Position : None
    Posts : 47
    Guild : Tartarus
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 31
    Mentor : N/A
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Bone Magic
    Second Skill: n/a
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Jojo Kaguya 13th March 2014, 4:56 pm

    First I wanna say I am unique, and actually never thought I was depowering myself. Thank you for catching that because it goes to show that not all staff of all sites are the same LOL. Now on to the list of corrections.
    • Strength - Cannibalistic Nature: I edited the wording of the first sentence and a parenthetical notation to say "Cannibalistic acts" meaning it has to be flesh and blood of humanoid species for consumption.
    • Weakness - Utilize Surroundings: Alright, I plugged it in to be full shift once per post.
    • Weakness - Intellect: I've always RP'd in pretty plot heavy areas instead of just fight after fight so maybe that is where that comes from. I decreased everything by half and for the three's section I rounded down.
    • Weakness - Cannibalistic Recourse: Added in the word humanoid, as it has to be at least demon or human for Jojo to consume it in this weakness.
    • Twin Sword Dance Weakness #5: Added in the word "potentially"


    Thanks for the help, and yeah I would definitely love the ideas you'd share, and as for that armor idea I think of spider kidomaru from naruto with that in terms of the sticky web armor. That armor itself would not be plausable with the direction of Jojo though since she is about transition of fast and slow for attack and defense. The armor would be good, but only as a last resort in terms I'd probably use it later on as a B or A rank magic for its fullest potential.

    And with that "BUMP"


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    Planeswalker

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    First Skill: Barrier Magic
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Grizzly 13th March 2014, 11:56 pm

    Approved!

    2 D Rank spells still in order but unused as of now.


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