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    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic

    Yas Gaggii
    Yas Gaggii

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    Lineage : Strength of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 41
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Mentor : Gray Fullbuster
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice-Make Magic(Elemental Body)
    Second Skill: Book Magic(Holder)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Yas Gaggii 8th December 2013, 6:35 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Ice-Make Magic(caster)

    Secondary Magic: Book Magic(not currently but later on(Holder))

    Caster or Holder: Caster(secondary is Holder)

    Description:
    Yas uses Ice-Make Magic, it's a form of Ice Magic, not very strong, but very useful, and can become as strong as some of the most powerful spells out there if trained right and used properly. it's probably the most common Ice Magic Wizards use. Yas normally uses Static Ice-Make Magic, it creates inanimate objects, for the caster to use, in this case, Yas to use. He also uses a few Dynamic Ice-Make spells. He has 4 spells, and two are used for strategies. His form of Ice-Make is strong, but still only a D-rank. Yas really is not very strong, can barely pick up 150 lbs, so he makes up for it in other attributes.

    Strengths:
    -His Ice-Make has a freezing effect.
    -Great defensive magic.
    - Resistant to ice magic and the cold.

    Weaknesses:
    -Weak to Fire/Fire Magic.
    -can shatter if hit hard enough; Weak to Bludgeon damage.
    -one of the weakest magics for a beginner.
    -can't use very well in hot conditions(deserts); The durability of a spell is much weaker and the range of the spell is cut in half. Even the damage of a spell is cut down to 1/3 of its original strength.

    Abilities/Powers:
    -resistant to cold weather. It doesn't affect him.
    -VERY fast and agile, making him noticed to be faster than average people and react quicker than them.
    -the cold gives him power and strength, it enhances his magic my 10%; So in a cold environment, such as the mountains, ice caves, so on, his magic power is enhanced.

    Name: Ice-Make Blast
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make

    Description:
    Ice-Make's most basic, yet one of its most useful capabilities, it creates a small piece of ice, about the size of a snow ball, and blasts it at the opponent, harming them. 80 mph speed, 30 meter range.(D-Rank damage) duration 1 post; cool down 2.
    Strengths:
    -Has the ability to cut threw a block of wood.
    -can be used in long range
    -many different ways to use this spell.

    Weaknesses:
    -Small blasts
    -can be deflected with a hand if the opponent is quick enough
    -weak blasts, so they aren't very effective
    - once you begin the spell you can't cancel it.

    Name: Ice-make Sword
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make

    Description:Yas creates a sword out of ice for melee combat. The sword is very durable, being capable of cutting and parrying other weapons as if it were made of metal. 5 posts; cool down 6 posts(it can shatter because of its power and rank)
    Strengths:
    -It's a useful weapon.
    - it's strong enough to withstand a weak sword.
    -cold enough it burns and freezes your opponent simultaneously.

    Weaknesses:
    -weak to fire
    -Heavy, even though it's small and doesn't do that much damage.
    -easily shattered with strong metal.
    - useless against long distance magic.

    Name: Ice-Make Dummy
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make/Distraction

    Description: Yas creates a copy of himself made out of ice. The copy is perfectly identical to him, being revealed as made of ice only after a close, careful inspection, and thus coming in useful to avoid enemy attacks or to create a distraction for Yas to attack on his own.duration up to 10 posts; cool down 2 posts+1 per post active.  Range 30 meters(till the magic range is lost)
    Strengths:
    -helpful for escaping.
    -used for sneak attacks.
    -can also be used when you need to be two places at once.

    Weaknesses:
    -easily told as a dummy if observed from a few meters away.
    -weak ice, a few simple hits could shatter the dummy.
    -pale color, can cause the opponent to go over to observe the figure and see it's a fake.
    -cannot get out of range or the ice weakens even more and loses all color.

    Name: Ice-Make Wings
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice/ Defensive
    Cool-down:
    Description:
    Yas forms wings ,made of ice on his back that gives him the ability to fly. it can be used as defense if needed. duration 5 posts; cool down 10 posts. Speed 20 mph(how fast he can fly) An altitude of 30 meters.
    Strengths:
    -He can escape easier.
    -travel is much more simple.
    -speed is enhanced.

    Weaknesses:
    -size, cannot slip through small spaces.
    -can only withstand one hit, if the wing is hit twice, it could easily shatter(D Rank, the rest of the ranks would shatter it in one hit than)
    -only last an 5 posts before the magic wears off
    -easily noticed when fighting on the ground.


    Last edited by Yas Gaggii on 9th December 2013, 7:14 pm; edited 22 times in total
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    Post by Eris 8th December 2013, 7:02 pm

    Please use the template...  the full template.  Just because you cut it out doesn't mean you don't have to add weaknesses .-.


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    Yas Gaggii
    Yas Gaggii

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 41
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Mentor : Gray Fullbuster
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice-Make Magic(Elemental Body)
    Second Skill: Book Magic(Holder)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Yas Gaggii 8th December 2013, 7:12 pm

    that's all that was on the template when i copy and pasted...hold on, so weaknesses to the spells right?
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    Post by Eris 8th December 2013, 7:30 pm

    Yes.  

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    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic NvVyM98

    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic CkggyrF

    Deception | Despair | Domination
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    Yas Gaggii
    Yas Gaggii

    Player 
    Lineage : Strength of Hercules
    Position : None
    Posts : 41
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Mentor : Gray Fullbuster
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ice-Make Magic(Elemental Body)
    Second Skill: Book Magic(Holder)
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Yas Gaggii 8th December 2013, 7:32 pm

    k, i was wondering why there wasn't weaknesses on the spells when i was doing it in the first place, makes sense now that i just didnt see the weaknesses part :p
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    First Skill: Sunset Eclipse - The Sandstorm GS
    Second Skill: Titan Eclipse • Devil Pact
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Eris 9th December 2013, 9:16 am

    Yas Gaggii wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Ice-Make Magic(caster)

    Secondary Magic: Book Magic(not currently but later on(Holder))

    Caster or Holder: Caster(secondary is Holder)

    Description:
    Yas uses Ice-Make Magic, it's a form of Ice Magic, not very strong, but very useful, and can become as strong as some of the most powerful spells out there if trained right and used properly. it's probably the most common Ice Magic Wizards use. Yas normally uses Static Ice-Make Magic, it creates inanimate objects, for the caster to use, in this case, Yas to use. He also uses a few Dynamic Ice-Make spells. He has 4 spells, and two are used for strategies. His form of Ice-Make is strong, but still only a D-rank. Yas really is not very strong, can barely pick up 150 lbs, so he makes up for it in other attributes.

    Strengths:
    -His Ice-Make has a freezing effect.
    -helpful for an escape.  This is weird for a magic strength.   Sounds like something for an individual spell's strength.  Replace.
    - Resistant to ice magic and the cold.   His ice magic is resistant to ice magic?  *shrug* reasonable, lol.  

    Weaknesses:
    -Weak to Fire/Fire Magic.
    -can shatter if hit hard enough.  "Weak to bludgeoning damage"  Which would include stone boulders,  wooden hammers,  or metal cannon balls for example. 
    -sometimes useless in certain situations.  All magic is useless in certain situations.  Replace.
    -can't use very well in hot conditions(deserts)  This is a good weakness.  But lacks detail.   Say that damage, ranges, and durability of the spells are halved in hot conditions such as deserts,  near volcanos,  or in flaming environments.

    Abilities/Powers:
    -resistant to cold "He is resistant to cold weather.  Able to, for example,  make snow angels while in the buff".
    -VERY fast and agile, but that makes up for his strength.  "Enhanced speed and dexterity,  making him run noticeably faster than the average man and react quicker than normal."
    -the cold gives him power and strength, it enhances his magic my 10% "Cold environments empower his ice magic by 10%,  such as in glacial areas,  snowy plains,  or so on".

    Name: Ice-Make Blast
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make

    Description:
    Ice-Make's most basic, yet one of its most useful capabilities, it creates a small piece of ice, about the size of a snow ball, and blasts it at the opponent, harming them. 80 mph speed, 30 meter range.(D-Rank damage) duration 1 post; cooldown 2 posts.
    Strengths:
    -Has the ability to cut threw a block of wood.
    -can be used in long range
    -many different ways to use this spell.

    Weaknesses:
    -Small blasts
    -can be deflected with a hand if the opponent is quick enough
    -weak blasts, so they aren't very effective
    -can't be used if you are to far away, like, to far away to shoot a gun.  
    The last part is silly.  The entire part is redundant.  Of course if they're out of range they wont get hit .-.   Replace it.

    Name: Ice-make Sword
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make

    Description:Yas creates a sword out of ice for melee combat. The sword is very durable, being capable of cutting and parrying other weapons as if it were made of metal. 5 posts; cooldown 6 posts((it can shatter because of its power and rank)can summon up to 5 ice swords One summon per cast.)
    Strengths:
    -It's a useful weapon.
    -Great for battle.  Sounds like the same thing as "It's a useful weapon".  Replace.
    -cold enough it burns and freezes your opponent simultaneously.

    Weaknesses:
    -weak to fire
    -Heavy, even though it's small and doesn't do that much damage.
    -easily shattered with strong metal.
    -takes up 10% of magic energy to create the sword.  That's not a weakness,  that's normal.

    Name: Ice-Make Dummy
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make/Distraction

    Description: Yas creates a copy of himself made out of ice. The copy is perfectly identical to him, being revealed as made of ice only after a close, careful inspection, and thus coming in useful to avoid enemy attacks or to create a distraction for Yas to attack on his own.duration 10 posts; cooldown 15 posts. A duration of "Up to ten posts" and a cooldown of 2 posts + 1 post per post active" would be best. Range 30 meters(till the magic range is lost)

    Strengths:
    -helpful for escaping.
    -used for sneak attacks.
    -can also be used when you need to be two places at once.

    Weaknesses:
    -easily told as a dummy if observed up close  Yes,  because that's exactly what you mean by "Close careful inspection".   Make the dummy obvious to people with a least a sliver of sense within 5 meters for the average human perception.  
    -weak ice Explain.
    -pale color, can cause the opponent to go over to observe the figure and see it's a fake.
    -cannot get out of range or the ice weakens even more and loses all color.

    Name: Ice-Make Wings
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice/ Defensive
    Cool-down:
    Description:
    Yas forms wings ,made of ice on his back that gives him the ability to fly. it can be used as defense if needed. duration 5 posts; cooldown 10 posts. Speed 20 mph(how fast he can fly)  Ice wings shouldn't be able to fly very high.  Give an altitude of 30 meters.
    Strengths:
    -He can escape easier.
    -travel is much more simple.
    -speed is enhanced.

    Weaknesses:
    -size, cannot slip through small spaces.
    -can only withstand one hit, if the wing is hit twice, it could easily shatter(D Rank, the rest of the ranks would shatter it in one hit than) 
    -only last an 5 posts before the magic wears off
    -easily noticed when fighting on the ground.


    Blue are corrections I've made that are self-evident,  without a comment.
    Green are things to remove.
    Red are comments.


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    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic NvVyM98

    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic CkggyrF

    Deception | Despair | Domination
    H 1 S 7 A 7+1 B 8+1 C 9 D 11
    d a m n a t i o n
    Eris
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    Lich of hell

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    Lineage : Devil's Conquest
    Position : None
    Posts : 1471
    Guild : Grim Heresy [GM]
    Cosmic Coins : 5
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Sunset Eclipse - The Sandstorm GS
    Second Skill: Titan Eclipse • Devil Pact
    Third Skill:

    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic Empty Re: Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic

    Post by Eris 9th December 2013, 8:20 pm

    Yas Gaggii wrote:Magic

    Primary Magic: Ice-Make Magic(caster)

    Secondary Magic: Book Magic(not currently but later on(Holder))

    Caster or Holder: Caster(secondary is Holder)

    Description:
    Yas uses Ice-Make Magic, it's a form of Ice Magic, not very strong, but very useful, and can become as strong as some of the most powerful spells out there if trained right and used properly. it's probably the most common Ice Magic Wizards use. Yas normally uses Static Ice-Make Magic, it creates inanimate objects, for the caster to use, in this case, Yas to use. He also uses a few Dynamic Ice-Make spells. He has 4 spells, and two are used for strategies. His form of Ice-Make is strong, but still only a D-rank. Yas really is not very strong, can barely pick up 150 lbs, so he makes up for it in other attributes.

    Strengths:
    -His Ice-Make has a freezing effect.
    -Great defensive magic.
    - Resistant to ice magic and the cold.

    Weaknesses:
    -Weak to Fire/Fire Magic.
    -can shatter if hit hard enough; Weak to Bludgeon damage.
    -one of the weakest magics for a beginner.  This magic isn't weaker than any other starting magics.
    -can't use very well in hot conditions(deserts); The durability of a spell is much weaker and the range of the spell is cut in half. Even the damage of a spell is cut down to 1/3 of its original strength.

    Abilities/Powers:
    -resistant to cold weather. It doesn't affect him.
    -VERY fast and agile, making him noticed to be faster than average people and react quicker than them.
    -the cold gives him power and strength, it enhances his magic my 10%; So in a cold environment, such as the mountains, ice caves, so on, his magic power is enhanced.

    Name: Ice-Make Blast
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make

    Description:
    Ice-Make's most basic, yet one of its most useful capabilities, it creates a small piece of ice, about the size of a snow ball, and blasts it at the opponent, harming them. 80 mph speed, 30 meter range.(D-Rank damage) duration 1 post; cool down 2.
    Strengths:
    -Has the ability to cut threw a block of wood.
    -can be used in long range
    -many different ways to use this spell.

    Weaknesses:
    -Small blasts
    -can be deflected with a hand if the opponent is quick enough
    -weak blasts, so they aren't very effective
    - once you begin the spell you can't cancel it.

    Name: Ice-make Sword
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make

    Description:Yas creates a sword out of ice for melee combat. The sword is very durable, being capable of cutting and parrying other weapons as if it were made of metal. 5 posts; cool down 6 posts(it can shatter because of its power and rank)
    Strengths:
    -It's a useful weapon.
    - it's strong enough to withstand a weak sword.
    -cold enough it burns and freezes your opponent simultaneously.

    Weaknesses:
    -weak to fire
    -Heavy, even though it's small and doesn't do that much damage.
    -easily shattered with strong metal.
    - useless against long distance magic.

    Name: Ice-Make Dummy
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice-Make/Distraction

    Description: Yas creates a copy of himself made out of ice. The copy is perfectly identical to him, being revealed as made of ice only after a close, careful inspection, and thus coming in useful to avoid enemy attacks or to create a distraction for Yas to attack on his own.duration up to 10 posts; cool down 2 posts+1 per post active.  Range 30 meters(till the magic range is lost)
    Strengths:
    -helpful for escaping.
    -used for sneak attacks.
    -can also be used when you need to be two places at once.

    Weaknesses:
    -easily told as a dummy if observed from a few meters away.
    -weak ice, a few simple hits could shatter the dummy.
    -pale color, can cause the opponent to go over to observe the figure and see it's a fake.
    -cannot get out of range or the ice weakens even more and loses all color.

    Name: Ice-Make Wings
    Rank: D
    Type: Ice/ Defensive
    Cool-down:
    Description:
    Yas forms wings ,made of ice on his back that gives him the ability to fly. it can be used as defense if needed. duration 5 posts; cool down 10 posts. Speed 20 mph(how fast he can fly) An altitude of 30 meters.
    Strengths:
    -He can escape easier.
    -travel is much more simple.
    -speed is enhanced.

    Weaknesses:
    -size, cannot slip through small spaces.
    -can only withstand one hit, if the wing is hit twice, it could easily shatter(D Rank, the rest of the ranks would shatter it in one hit than)
    -only last an 5 posts before the magic wears off
    -easily noticed when fighting on the ground.




    The two small issues aren't really enough for me to merit making you wait any longer.


    Approved.


    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic PiGiFnO


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    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic NvVyM98

    Yas Gaggii's Ice Magic CkggyrF

    Deception | Despair | Domination
    H 1 S 7 A 7+1 B 8+1 C 9 D 11
    d a m n a t i o n

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