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    Twelve Dragon's Bomb Blade (Dragon Blade)

    Krow
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    Post by Krow 17th September 2014, 2:12 am

    Twelve Dragon's Bomb Blade:

    Strengths:

    Weaknesses:

    Abilities:


    Last edited by Ari on 23rd September 2014, 6:31 pm; edited 7 times in total


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 19th September 2014, 12:21 pm

    Ari wrote:
    Twelve Dragon's Bomb Blade:

    Strengths:

    Weaknesses:

    Abilities:


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    Krow
    Krow

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    First Skill: Fire Dragon Slayer Magic
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    Post by Krow 19th September 2014, 12:33 pm

    BUMP!


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    Missions In Progress:
    Total Exp.: 562.5 Exp
    Rank Up Ratio: 562.5/750= 187.5 Exp Needed.
    Tuna
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    Post by Tuna 23rd September 2014, 5:53 am

    So literally everytime you swing this blade, you create a 20 meter wide twelvly timed chain explosion? That is entirely op. If this is supposed to be an offensive passive that creates explosions everytime you swing this blade, go for it. I have absolutely not problem with that. But don't exaggerate the explosions this much or I won't be able to approve it. Go for something more reasonable. Basically, if you swing it, you create a small outwards explosion that has a kinetic knockback effect as well as a burning effect if it hits the opponent directly.

    Now, something I could see here as this blade is called "Twelve Dragon's Bomb Blade" is that every TWELFTH strike, you are able to send out the massive explosion you applied in your first ability. That would be quite reasonable and be fitting to the name, and also give some sort of special flair to the weapon as it builds up on "heat" or "overdrive" or "dragon fire" or whatever you want to call the resource it needs to blast away heavily on every twelfth strike. As far as I'm concerned, a charging melee weapon has not been done and would be quite unique.

    As it stands however, I can not approve this.

    Also, is the second passive applicable in combat? Does this change of size happen fast enough to potentially do something during combat with it? If so, you need to put that in.


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    Krow
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    Post by Krow 23rd September 2014, 5:41 pm

    BUMP!


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    Total Exp.: 562.5 Exp
    Rank Up Ratio: 562.5/750= 187.5 Exp Needed.
    Tuna
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    Post by Tuna 23rd September 2014, 6:00 pm

    10x10 feet is still quite big. Make it small explosions until the twelfth one, which can hit as big as you had prior to changing. With small explosions I really mean small explosions. They can deal damage. But they should still be small. I'm thinking about 1 meter explosions on regular swings. Every twelfth can have like a 15 meter blast range.

    Also, your code is off. On the abilities. I'd recommend you fix it.


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    Krow
    Krow

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    Post by Krow 23rd September 2014, 6:32 pm

    BUMP.

    I have no idea why, but when I finished my previous edits it put in a lot of extra bold text coding. XD


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    Twelve Dragon's Bomb Blade (Dragon Blade) GbnUMK2


    Missions In Progress:
    Total Exp.: 562.5 Exp
    Rank Up Ratio: 562.5/750= 187.5 Exp Needed.
    Tuna
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    Post by Tuna 23rd September 2014, 6:42 pm

    Fine by me. Approved.


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