Angel!!!!!

Name: Angel Takaoka
Nickname: Taka, Angel
Gender: Female
Age: 23
Birthday: July 18
Sexuality: Les
Special Characteristics:often wears a pair of yellow glassed sunglasses.

Personality:
Friendly & calm:
Angel is a down on earth girl who is friendly against those she likes, but those who she dont like she just tries to avoid by all means, most thats men, shes always down to earth and easy to talk to, she likes talking with other people and having fun with them.

Short fuse when it comes to men:
Angel is annoyed by men and there stupid questions, and that most of them are perverts it annoyed here greatly, she prefer not being in teams with males for to long at a time, a job is fine  with her but several in a row with same guy would not work.

Loves female company:
Angel just feel the female aroma more calming then the male's one, its a sweet scent to her, that makes her relax easier, she also prefer listning to girls sweet voice over any male, and a girls touch is also more silky smooth, and same goes for there body, She all in all loves being around others of her own gender.

Kind & Caring:
Angel is a kind and caring person, who cares a lot for her "Friends", she loves cooking and hanging out with those she care about, She helps and aids her friends in battle if shes there, she do her best to make everyone come out of it alive without getting hurt herself.

Puts her Self before Friends:
She would never risk her life to save another person, she rather standby and watch that person die, and run away or fight the one who did it afterwards, She takes revenge of fallen comrades if it is possible, else she just let them rot.

Guild Master:
She respects the guild master, mostly cause they have large amount of money, and by helping them reach there goals she might get roch on the way there, she dont care much about the guild it self she just want money, She will always prefer a Female Guild master, but if needed she takes a Male one.

Guild Members:
Angel is good with her guild mates, just not much the males, she try to avoid them as much as possible. but if needed she will group up with males but they should not exspect her to warch if she hits them or not, cause she would not really care.

Enemy/Males:
Angel is not much of the talker towards those who are branded enemy of her guild, she rather punch first and ask later, same goes for males if they get in her way in a fight she wont mind sweeping them away also friend. but she will fight until she pass out or die, shes not fond of running away but its needed from time to time.

Not Afraid to Admit defeat:
Angel is not scared to stick the tail between her legs if needed, she rather run then end up dead someplace, She know when to run and when to fight, She might enjoy a good fight but still does not mean she wanna take the risk of dying before her time.


Likes:
Making Money: in this case its jewels bur still money, she loves the ideamof gettimg payed well and oftens spends large sums of money on things she dont need.

Peace: she just loves when there is peace around here, and people dont talk to much.

Water & Beaches: Angel loves the beach cause its close to the water and the water gives of a sudden type of calmness around it.

Dislikes:
Working for low payment: Angel dislike low payed jobs but alos know they are needed to get jobs with better payment

Noisy People: She realaly have something about people that just yells to get attention and nothing else those kind of people annoy her.

Charity: cause she no idea in helping othersmif they cant make it its xause they are to weak.

Motivations:
Money: Cause she just like the idea of having them with her.

Magic: Cause its awesome, and she enjoys magic.

Staying Alive: Cause who does really wanna die in the first place?
Fears:
Losing all her money!!!!: cause she just loves money and fears becoming poor.

All magic disappearing: She fearra that all magic will just disappear one day and never return again.

Death: the fear of death is in all, shes no different she dont want to die


General Appearance

Height: 175cm {5'9"}
Weight: 56Kg {123lbs}
Hair: Crimson, very long braided pony tail.
Eyes: Green
Skin Tone: Tanned
Appearance:


Wears a buisness suit in black and white colors , and a purple tie, she got hour glass figure and just looks awesoe.

Guild/Council

Guild: Fairy Tail
Tattoo:  Her hips right sidd, crimson color
Rank: D

finished

Your personality needs to be 182 words longer, so please tend to that.

How are Female Company and Playing with Magic actual motivations? A motivation is a goal in life which one strives to achieve with passion and fervour, thus consequently being motivated to move on and push towards attaining success with said goal. In that sense, I don't see how one can be motivated to move on for the sake of gaining a female company or mucking about with magic for the fun of it. Please either replace those motivations or better explain how they actually motivate Angel.

Lastly, I'd like you to read through your app again and fix the typos.

Please bump when all requested changes have been made.

Fixed, and cant fix gramma or stuff since there is no spellbook on tablets.

Approved.