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    Hellspawn

    Tobychu
    Tobychu

    Player 
    Lineage : Ancient Sealer
    Position : None
    Posts : 33
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 1,050

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Lazarus Wave
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Hellspawn Empty Hellspawn

    Post by Tobychu 2nd April 2023, 6:38 pm

    Name: Hellspawn
    Grade: Strong +
    Type: Weapon (Axe)
    Proof of Acquisition: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t39396p75-med-s-giveaway-shop#448596
    Description:

    "A wanderer. Stranded in the realms between with nothing to light his way, save for a single candle with a spark of hellfire. He wandered until he found comradery in a young woman who seduced him with dreams of love and companionship. . . A trickster, who stole his spark and left him with nothing but the abyss."

    Hellspawn Rsz-cf667941adf16c069a542f28b59141a4

    Abilities:

    Name: Flaming Form.
    Rank: B
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Naturally, the flaming axe Aku wields is capable of burning, searing, igniting and so on. It's blade is composed of inextinguishable, bright orange hell fire and the eerie black substance it was crafted from was forged in the molten pits for good measure. It burns anyone it touches besides the wielder, and being sliced by the weapon is more excruciating than it sounds. Though if one needs a wound cauterized or a candle lit, there is no better choice!

    Name: Flame Control.
    Rank: C+
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Wielding Hellspawn allows Aku to control fire, albeit it at a much more minor level than an actual fire wizard. With a swing or pointing of the blade he can fire off a searing stream of fire burning his opponents and surroundings, shoot out fire balls and even just 'play with fire'. Forming simple constructs like a smiley face or spelling out a word.
    Mythal Ragnos
    Mythal Ragnos

    Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Slayer- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Heir to Darkness
    Position : God of Sedulity
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 1067
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 50
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 36
    Mentor : Nessa Cordelia Lux (Former)
    Experience : 11,070,431

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Kami No Ken Sutairu O Taosu
    Second Skill: Kingdom Darkness Embodiment
    Third Skill: Soul Stone/Trickster's Illusions

    Hellspawn Empty Re: Hellspawn

    Post by Mythal Ragnos Yesterday at 10:34 am

    Tobychu wrote:Name: Hellspawn
    Grade: Strong +
    Type: Weapon (Axe)
    Proof of Acquisition: https://www.fairytail-rp.com/t39396p75-med-s-giveaway-shop#448596
    Description:

    "A wanderer. Stranded in the realms between with nothing to light his way, save for a single candle with a spark of hellfire. He wandered until he found comradery in a young woman who seduced him with dreams of love and companionship. . . A trickster, who stole his spark and left him with nothing but the abyss."

    Hellspawn Rsz-cf667941adf16c069a542f28b59141a4

    Abilities:

    Name: Flaming Form.
    Rank: B
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Naturally, the flaming axe Aku wields is capable of burning, searing, igniting and so on. It's blade is composed of inextinguishable, bright orange hell fire and the eerie black substance it was crafted from was forged in the molten pits for good measure. It burns anyone it touches besides the wielder, and being sliced by the weapon is more excruciating than it sounds. Though if one needs a wound cauterized or a candle lit, there is no better choice!

    Name: Flame Control.
    Rank: C+
    Duration: Passive
    Description: Wielding Hellspawn allows Aku to control fire, albeit it at a much more minor level than an actual fire wizard. With a swing or pointing of the blade he can fire off a searing stream of fire burning his opponents and surroundings, shoot out fire balls and even just 'play with fire'. Forming simple constructs like a smiley face or spelling out a word.

    So, looking this over, these abilities are... more like plot abilities? They don't really act or belong within the passive system that goes with equipment. Even if it was a statless weapon, we would still need a bare minimum description to what they do within the system.

    You can list plot abilities, which the first one really seems to be, as a separate tab. But we'd need an actual stat improvement for it to be considered passive. In addition, Flame Control is written more like an active ability, as you are actively using it to shoot fireballs, spray of fire and manipulate fire.

    I'd encourage you to look that over, as well as other previous equipment that have been approved, to get an idea of how equipment's active/passive abilities are described.


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