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    Mystic Eye of Corruption

    TopHatPenguin
    TopHatPenguin

    Player 
    Lineage : Kohl's Plague
    Position : None
    Posts : 14
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 23
    Experience : 218

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mystic Eye of Corruption
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Mystic Eye of Corruption Empty Mystic Eye of Corruption

    Post by TopHatPenguin 11th March 2022, 7:55 pm

    Mystic Eye of Corruption Allen-10

    Magic Name: Mystic Eye of Corruption
    Magic Type: Primary Curse/ Auxiliary Mystic Eyes
    Description: Garts was not born with this magic, it was instead forced upon him by a group of hooded figures when he was but a child. He does not know what the eye was, or why the group had replaced his eye with it, but it had a terrible effect on his magical ability. The eye began to consume his own magical energy, supplanting it with its own, the process causing Garts great amounts of pain as his own magic was consumed and replaced with this malicious energy. At first he was able to use magic in the slightest, but as time went on he learned how to harness the cursed magic that the eye had given him. Since the eye had supplanted Gart's own magic with its own, it means that the removal of the eye would cause all the cursed mana within Gart's body to turn on him, potentially killing him. Thankfully, the eye is very possessive of its current host, and restores itself back to healthy condition if damage is inflicted upon it, making physical removal of the eye difficult, but not impossible.
    Of course, those were not the only affects the eye had on Garts. When he slept the eye whispered to him, trying to convince him to let it handle things, that things will get better if he were to give it control. These whispers plague him each night, but he has learned how to tune them out, barely. The magic that the eye holds is a corruptive one, one that seeks only to consume and grow, to devour until only itself is left. This is reflected by its spells, which can cause detrimental effects on those hit by them. 


    Unique Abilities:
    • Curse Sense (Unlocked at D-rank): The user is able to sense curses that are close them, but cannot determine how strong the curse is, or its effects. The range at which the user can sense these curses increases with their rank, capping at S-rank.
    • Possessive Curse (Unlocked at B-rank): The curse within the eye does not like to play nice with other magic. This causes magic of lower rank than the user, that poisons or weakens the user to be less effective. This also causes healing and supportive magic that is a lower rank than the user to be less effective as well.
    • Mana Corruption (Unlocked at S-rank): The user's mana is strong enough at this point, that it can weaken offensive and defensive spells that are of lower rank than the user to become weakened when they come into contact. The user's mana invades the spell and weakens it, even if it's for a brief moment, and the longer the user is in contact with the spell, the weaker it gets.





    Spells
    D-Rank:
    D+ Rank:

    Name: Malevolent Eye
    Rank: D
    Description: When this eye is activated the user's sclera becomes pitch black, and causes the pupil to disappear entirely. What remains are two red circles, with one red circle within a larger one. Looking into this eye causes feelings of discomfort and unease to those that do so.

    Malevolent Eye Spells
    Malicious Illusions:

    Mana Absorption:

    Whispers of Madness:

    Name: Corrupting Eye
    Rank: D
    Description: When this eye is activated the user's pupil disappears, and what remains are two red circles, with one red circle within a larger one. Looking into this eye causes feelings of discomfort and unease to those that do so.
    Corrupting Eye Spells

    Cursed Bullet:

    Cursed Sword:

    Invasive Curse:


    Last edited by TopHatPenguin on 12th March 2022, 10:53 am; edited 1 time in total
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Mystic Eye of Corruption Empty Re: Mystic Eye of Corruption

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th March 2022, 10:16 am

    Heya Penguin, Nero here to grade your magic. Generally looking good, although I must ask you to, for the time being, at least, remove one spell from this magic, as the unbound eye spell is not an additional spell slot you receive, but rather consumes a spell slot from your magic to create, meaning that ergo you have too many spells.

    Other than that, you will find all of my edits in this color here.

    Give me a bump once they have been done and I will review your magic once more.

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    TopHatPenguin
    TopHatPenguin

    Player 
    Lineage : Kohl's Plague
    Position : None
    Posts : 14
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 23
    Experience : 218

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Mystic Eye of Corruption
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Mystic Eye of Corruption Empty Re: Mystic Eye of Corruption

    Post by TopHatPenguin 12th March 2022, 10:54 am

    I believe I have made the necessary edits.
    Bump-e-rino straight to you.
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Mystic Eye of Corruption Empty Re: Mystic Eye of Corruption

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th March 2022, 10:58 am

    Mystic Eye of Corruption HNhUsGf

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