Zenith

Esper wrote:

Lineage Name: Zenith
Wielder: Esper
Purchase Proof: Post n°50

Description
Zenith is for those who are as adaptable to evolution as they come, with their bodies natural magic having an affinity for transformation magic. As such the user is able to ascend/evolve/transcend their condition, powers and abilities to the highest level allowing them to obtain unparalleled might, becoming a force. The user gains access to the ultimate level of power that is capable of transcending the boundaries of their own species. Most importantly, Zenith can be obtained by those who possess full mastery of their own powers or ones with the utmost potential.

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Abilities:

Zodiac Take-Over
Zodiac Take-Overs are stronger versions that upgrade transcendent Partial or Full Take-Over spells. These Take-Over forms are the hardest to master and control, but offer more powerful transformations to their users, constituting the highest form of Take-Over spells (2 Effects). (This ability, as a whole, is not very well defined at all. Would a single Take-Over spell per magic have access to these new types of spell? Would the user be able to transform all of their Take-Over spells into these "Zodiac" Take-Overs? What are the conditions for transforming a Take-Over spell into a "Zodiac" Take-Ove? Is there any applicable drawback to this ability I must ask you to clarify this ability more and, in accordance with your clarification, will impose additional edits on this ability)

• Zodiac Take-Over spells can either possess 1 additional active or passive ability equal to the rank of the Take-Over spell.
  
  
• Zodiac Take-Over spells, instead of using the damage values for "Immaculate" summons, use the damage values for "Zodiac" summons corresponding to their rank.
  

Transformation Ascendancy (1 Effect) (This is actually 2 effects)
One additional advanced spell slot equal to users rank, max H+. This spell slot must only be used on a Partial or Full Take-Over spell.

Atavism of Wealth (1 Effect)
The user's Jewel rewards from jobs are increased by 100%.

Superior Adaptation (4 Effects)
The user gains a 2x user ranked passive buff to their Spell Durability. The users Shield spells cannot be negated or pierced by piercing effects. (You cannot make yourself immune to Negation effects. Further, this ability would transform all of your characters' shields into anti-piercing shields, which effectively triples the available base Spell Durability values at your disposal. These two effects as described in this ability are simply too strong to be allowed, and I must therefore ask you to remove them in their entirety)

Esper wrote:

Lineage Name: Zenith
Wielder: Esper
Purchase Proof: Post n°50

Description
Zenith is for those who are as adaptable to evolution as they come, with their bodies natural magic having an affinity for transformation magic. As such the user is able to ascend/evolve/transcend their condition, powers and abilities to the highest level allowing them to obtain unparalleled might, becoming a force. The user gains access to the ultimate level of power that is capable of transcending the boundaries of their own species. Most importantly, Zenith can be obtained by those who possess full mastery of their own powers or ones with the utmost potential.

Plot:

Abilities:

Zodiac Take-Over
Zodiac Take-Overs are stronger versions that upgrade Transcendent Take-Over spells, making them even more potent. These Take-Over forms are the hardest to master and control, but offer more powerful transformations to their users, constituting the highest form of Take-Over spells. A Zodiac Take-Over upgrades and replaces a Transcendent Take-Over, therefore it follows the rules that it may only be applied to a single spell within a magic. The MP/TP cost of a Zodiac Take-Over spell is doubled. (7 Effects). (Take-Overs themselves, unless containing passive abilities, do not actually possess an MP cost, which means this isn't actually much of a downside at all. If you wish for this to count as a downside, please additionally state that the base MP cost of any ability associated with such a Take-Over is doubled, as well. As you could add a Take-Over like this to every single one of your magics, this effect alone will cost you 3 effect slots)

• Zodiac Take-Over spells can either possess 1 additional active or passive ability equal to the rank of the Take-Over spell.
  
  
• Zodiac Take-Over spells, instead of using the damage values for "Immaculate" summons, use the damage values for "Zodiac" summons corresponding to their rank.
  
  
• Zodiac Take-Over spells are quite durable and display superior adaptation and survivability. When a Zodiac Take-Over is active the user gains a 3x user ranked advanced shield that cannot be negated or pierced by piercing effects that regenerates every post. (As I said before, you cannot be immune to negation, no matter in what form this effect is integrated into your lineage. As such, I must ask you to remove that effect entirely. Further still, an anti-piercing shield of 3 times the usual base durability is extremely strong as well, and while I am willing to pass that, I must ask you to a) assuming that this ranks with the user up to H rank, additionally clarify that this shield caps at regular H rank durability and duration max and b) increase the effect count for that shield to 6 if kept using the edits I proposed. Taking into account the previous effect count, that would bring the total effect cost of this ability up to 9, bringing your total in this lineage up to 12. I must ask you to change this lineage accordingly so that the maximum of 10 effect slots is not exceeded, e.g. by lowering the durability of the shield this ability contains)
  

Transformation Ascendancy (2 Effects)
One additional advanced spell slot equal to users rank, max H+.

Atavism of Wealth (1 Effect)
The user's Jewel rewards from jobs are increased by 100%.

Esper wrote:

Lineage Name: Zenith
Wielder: Esper
Purchase Proof: Post n°50

Description
Zenith is for those who are as adaptable to evolution as they come, with their bodies natural magic having an affinity for transformation magic. As such the user is able to ascend/evolve/transcend their condition, powers and abilities to the highest level allowing them to obtain unparalleled might, becoming a force. The user gains access to the ultimate level of power that is capable of transcending the boundaries of their own species. Most importantly, Zenith can be obtained by those who possess full mastery of their own powers or ones with the utmost potential.

Plot:

Abilities:

Zodiac Take-Over
Zodiac Take-Overs are stronger versions that upgrade Transcendent Take-Over spells, making them even more potent. These Take-Over forms are the hardest to master and control, but offer more powerful transformations to their users, constituting the highest form of Take-Over spells. A Zodiac Take-Over upgrades and replaces a Transcendent Take-Over, therefore it follows the rules that it may only be applied to a single spell within a magic. (9 Effects).

• Zodiac Take-Over spells can either possess 1 additional active or passive ability equal to the rank of the Take-Over spell.
  
  
• Zodiac Take-Over spells, instead of using the damage values for "Immaculate" summons, use the damage values for "Zodiac" summons corresponding to their rank.
  
  
• Zodiac Take-Over spells are quite durable and display superior adaptation and survivability. When a Zodiac Take-Over is active the user gains a 3x user ranked advanced shield that cannot be pierced by piercing effects that regenerates every post. This caps at S+ Rank and lasts for user rank advanced duration up to S+.
  

Atavism of Wealth (1 Effect)
The user's Jewel rewards from jobs are increased by 100%.