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    Hell Pack

    Loreq
    Loreq

    Player 
    Lineage : Truth
    Position : None
    Posts : 16
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hell Pack
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Hell Pack Empty Hell Pack

    Post by Loreq 15th February 2021, 6:50 pm

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    Magic Name: Hell Pack
    Magic Type: Solitary Summoning
    Description: Hell Pack is a form of summoning magic that has it's origins in the depths of the celestial realm. All invocations require that the summoner has a shadow in which can act as a conduit for summoning the creatures that are part of the Hell Pack. The vast majority of celestial beings take the form of wolves with various abilities befitting their nature. While they often appear as intimidating, if not demonic, those contracted are actually quite friendly towards their summoner. The wolves will only form contracts with those who are considered trustworthy enough to be a part of their pack. This contract can be terminated by the Alpha of the Hell Pack should it find the summoner to be unfit.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Pack Boon: Having formed a contract with the Hell Pack, the summoner now has a direct line to the celestial realm. As a result, the summoner now regens 5% of their mana every post.


    Spells:
    D Rank:

    D+ Rank:


    Last edited by Loreq on 18th February 2021, 4:36 pm; edited 6 times in total
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Hell Pack Empty Re: Hell Pack

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 17th February 2021, 12:48 pm

    Heya Loreq, Joh here to grade your magic. As you may not be familiar with this process, please ask all of the questions you may have in this thread itself and I will do my best to answer them for you. Once all requested edits have been made, please give this thread a bump and I will review your magic once again. That said, you will be able to find all of my edits in this color here.

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    Loreq
    Loreq

    Player 
    Lineage : Truth
    Position : None
    Posts : 16
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hell Pack
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Hell Pack Empty Re: Hell Pack

    Post by Loreq 17th February 2021, 8:41 pm

    Thanks for taking the time to go through my application. Fixed everything that was called out and also fixed the D+ summons stats to follow the advanced summon table.


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Hell Pack Empty Re: Hell Pack

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 18th February 2021, 3:03 pm

    Just a few more edits to this magic and you will be good. Same color as before

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    Loreq
    Loreq

    Player 
    Lineage : Truth
    Position : None
    Posts : 16
    Guild : Rune Knights
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Hell Pack
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Hell Pack Empty Re: Hell Pack

    Post by Loreq 18th February 2021, 4:36 pm

    Everything should be good to go now ^^


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Hell Pack Empty Re: Hell Pack

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 18th February 2021, 4:41 pm

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