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    Post by Nurarihyon 5th April 2013, 6:59 am

    Primary Magic: Demon Forthbring Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:

    This magic,like the name states,enables the user to link with the dead,or most referable,yokais.Yokais,by the way are ghosts or demons,as regarded by the Japanese Tradition.The linking,which works like a possession,would provide powers and abilities to the caster,depending on the linked yokai’s attribute or element.’Fear’ is used as the reference of the linking’s medium.The linking,for example a link with a fire-Feared yokai,changes the caster’s attack to flame-based.This turns the caster’s attacks,even melees,into the element the yokai is based on.Certain unique traits can also be attained by the linking,provided by the linked yokai.Besides said function,the magic also enables the caster to summon yokais/yokais that he/she had made contract with.The summoned yokai would then help by supporting means in battles,for a limited amount of time provided for each yokai.The time limit,however may vary from one yokai to another.

    Strengths:

    -this magic gives the caster unique traits such as immense strength,depending on the yokai.

    -this magic will be stronger in night time,but still affective in day time.

    -this magic can only work on the caster,making controlling or manipulating this magic impossible.

    Weaknesses:

    -this magic may still give disadvantages,such as decreasing the caster’s speed for immense strength.

    -this magic can only work when the both parties agrees for the linking.It may fail if one of them disagrees the linking.

    -sometimes,the yokai tend to take over the caster’s whole body to have fun in the battle,making it dangerous for a body to be used recklessly.

    -The magic only work one function per one yokai.For example,if the caster is linking with a fire yokai,he cannot summon the fire yokai to support him/her and vice versa.However,if the caster had made contract with more than one yokai/yokai,he/she could use it for advantage.For example,if the caster had linked with a fire yokai,he/she can summon another yokai in his/her contract list for support.

    Abilities/Powers:

    -it gives the caster the ability to use the special traits or ability that the yokai may provide by the linking.

    -this magic can add up the number of yokais that may link with the caster,depending on the rank.

    -this magic can give advantages in having the upper hand by the use of trump cards that the caster may plan himself.

    -the summoning ability granted by the magic makes teamed attack more efficient and easier.

    d-rank spells:

    c-rank spells:

    B-rank spells:

    A-rank spells:

    S-rank spells:


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    Post by TacticalFallacy 5th April 2013, 7:33 am

    Red Link:
    -Give an impression of your boosted strength and durability. What is the maximum weight you can carry? It can be a number or an object like a truck or tree. How much in terms of percentage are attacks, specifically D-rank, weakened? What is your maximum speed under the spell?
    -Gonna need a determining factor that determines the probability of a disagreement. This can be used via the normal 6-number dice, where if it hits certain numbers, the disagreement happens. Also put the post interval between such rolls during the magic's duration.
    -It's called a Fire spell. Does this mean that you are exposed the normal elemental weakness of fire when against water? Meaning, do water spells bypass your durability? Also, you might want to look into boosting your damage reduction against fire spells.

    Blue Link:
    -Please place specifics about the durability decrease under your weaknesses.
    -By ten attacks, are you referring to D-rank spells? Because unenhanced physical attacks can't break a barrier, no matter the rank.
    -are you able to use both links at once, or can you only use them one at a time?
    -Once again consider elemental weaknesses and strengths.

    Spirit blast:
    -"Break through d-ranked offensive spells". Not exactly. There is still a limit to how much breaking through you can do, so give me a minimum of opposing D-rank spells that can be used to counter this spell.
    -2 defensive D-rank spells should be enough to deal with this attack.
    -Gonna need an explosive radius.
    -Place elemental weaknesses. You cannot have just elemental strengths.

    Dead Shield:
    -Once again, we have elements in here. So think about them and their effect.


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    Post by Nurarihyon 5th April 2013, 8:36 am

    edited.bump.


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    Post by TacticalFallacy 6th April 2013, 8:18 pm

    Alright, looks much better. Everything seems good to go, so I will approve this.


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    Post by SilverRose 5th July 2013, 5:11 pm

    Ok for ice calls limit to take d rank spells knock it down to 10 please and for that the rest looks good.

    For sight fear instead of three times normal could you put it at a percent

    For feathery call again please put that down to 10 for amount of d rank attacks it can take. Also I'm going to say no to the 8 c ranks. Please put that down to 3. It is still a D rank spell so we don't want to over power it ^^

    Other then that things look good. Bump when done.


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    Post by Nurarihyon 5th July 2013, 5:16 pm

    edited,bump.


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    Post by SilverRose 5th July 2013, 5:27 pm

    Approved now go kick ass! Magic looks cool I may spar with yea once. ^^


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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 6th July 2013, 9:57 am

    SilverRose wrote:Approved now go kick ass! Magic looks cool I may spar with yea once. ^^
    I have not recognized you as a mod, gtfo your opinion does not matter.


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    Post by Alye 6th July 2013, 11:56 am

    Night. SilverRose is a Moderator. What you said was quite rude, I will also say. I suggest apologizing. This magic is approved.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 20th July 2013, 9:39 am

    Nurarihyon wrote:Primary Magic: Fear Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:

    This magic,like the name states,enables the user to link with the dead,or most referable,yokais.Yokais,by the way are ghosts or demons,as regarded by the Japanese Tradition.The linking,which works like a possession,would provide powers and abilities to the caster,depending on the linked spirit’s attribute or element.’Fear’ is used as the reference of the linking’s medium.The linking,for example a link with a fire-Feared spirit,changes the caster’s attack to flame-based.This turns the caster’s attacks,even melees,into the element the spirit is based on.Certain unique traits can also be attained by the linking,provided by the linked spirit.Besides said function,the magic also enables the caster to summon spirits/yokais that he/she had made contract with.The summoned spirit would then help by supporting means in battles,for a limited amount of time provided for each spirit.The time limit,however may vary from one spirit to another.

    Strengths:

    -this magic gives the caster unique traits such as immense strength,depending on the spirit.

    -this magic will be stronger in night time,but still affective in day time.

    -this magic can only work on the caster,making controlling or manipulating this magic impossible.

    Weaknesses:

    -this magic may still give disadvantages,such as decreasing the caster’s speed for immense strength.

    -this magic can only work when the both parties agrees for the linking.It may fail if one of them disagrees the linking.

    -sometimes,the spirit tend to take over the caster’s whole body to have fun in the battle,making it dangerous for a body to be used recklessly.

    -The magic only work one function per one spirit.For example,if the caster is linking with a fire spirit,he cannot summon the fire spirit to support him/her and vice versa.However,if the caster had made contract with more than one spirit/yokai,he/she could use it for advantage.For example,if the caster had linked with a fire spirit,he/she can summon another spirit in his/her contract list for support.

    Abilities/Powers:

    -it gives the caster the ability to use the special traits or ability that the spirit may provide by the linking.

    -this magic can add up the number of spirits that may link with the caster,depending on the rank.

    -this magic can give advantages in having the upper hand by the use of trump cards that the caster may plan himself.

    -the summoning ability granted by the magic makes teamed attack more efficient and easier.

    d-rank spells:

    c-rank spells:

    Comments are in this colour. Please fix this. Also, go over it and check that it is all worded correctly as i saw a few sentences that are kinda weird.


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    Post by Nurarihyon 20th July 2013, 10:23 am

    edited bump.


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 4th August 2013, 9:16 am

    Nurarihyon wrote:Primary Magic: Fear Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:

    This magic,like the name states,enables the user to link with the dead,or most referable,yokais.Yokais,by the way are ghosts or demons,as regarded by the Japanese Tradition.The linking,which works like a possession,would provide powers and abilities to the caster,depending on the linked yokai’s attribute or element.’Fear’ is used as the reference of the linking’s medium.The linking,for example a link with a fire-Feared yokai,changes the caster’s attack to flame-based.This turns the caster’s attacks,even melees,into the element the yokai is based on.Certain unique traits can also be attained by the linking,provided by the linked yokai.Besides said function,the magic also enables the caster to summon yokais/yokais that he/she had made contract with.The summoned yokai would then help by supporting means in battles,for a limited amount of time provided for each yokai.The time limit,however may vary from one yokai to another.

    Strengths:

    -this magic gives the caster unique traits such as immense strength,depending on the yokai.

    -this magic will be stronger in night time,but still affective in day time.

    -this magic can only work on the caster,making controlling or manipulating this magic impossible.

    Weaknesses:

    -this magic may still give disadvantages,such as decreasing the caster’s speed for immense strength.

    -this magic can only work when the both parties agrees for the linking.It may fail if one of them disagrees the linking.

    -sometimes,the yokai tend to take over the caster’s whole body to have fun in the battle,making it dangerous for a body to be used recklessly.

    -The magic only work one function per one yokai.For example,if the caster is linking with a fire yokai,he cannot summon the fire yokai to support him/her and vice versa.However,if the caster had made contract with more than one yokai/yokai,he/she could use it for advantage.For example,if the caster had linked with a fire yokai,he/she can summon another yokai in his/her contract list for support.

    Abilities/Powers:

    -it gives the caster the ability to use the special traits or ability that the yokai may provide by the linking.

    -this magic can add up the number of yokais that may link with the caster,depending on the rank.

    -this magic can give advantages in having the upper hand by the use of trump cards that the caster may plan himself.

    -the summoning ability granted by the magic makes teamed attack more efficient and easier.

    d-rank spells:

    c-rank spells:

    B-rank spells:

    A-rank spells:

    S-rank spells:

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    Post by Nurarihyon 4th August 2013, 7:22 pm

    Edited bump!


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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 5th August 2013, 7:53 am

    ...I am conflicted by something. the name of your magic is "Fear Magic"....yet....you reference demon ghosts links in the main description?...I am...conflicted on this can you care to explain and or make the name more relavent and or the description more relevant if it has to be.


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    Post by Nurarihyon 5th August 2013, 4:00 pm

    aha for that, good sir NightDrivenEn7, is how i've got my ideas based on the anime Nurarihyon No Mago. But i don't want to talk about that anime nor how i get the idea, instead i will tell you how the name Fear Magic is related with the ghosts, demons, linking with them and such.

    First off, let us drive the thought of ghosts and demons instilling fears inside people and all those stuffs aside.By the name Fear, i refer to the name as the magic's metric unit. Such as how the anime Bleach has it's Reiatsu, and how Naruto has it's chakra stuffs. The magic's all about Fear, not the kind of fear which resides in human's little heart, but Fear as somekind of a metric unit for the energy i used to function this magic.

    i hope this explanation would clear the confusion between the magic's name and it's contents/references. thank you.


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    Post by ~ Lady of Midnight ~ 8th August 2013, 2:33 pm

    I agree with Night, the name of your magic is quite misleading. Your description states that summoning yokais has to do with Fear Magic. Change your description or the name of your magic.


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    Post by ~ Lady of Midnight ~ 8th August 2013, 2:34 pm

    ~ Approved ~


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    Post by Zeno 8th August 2013, 11:54 pm

    All righty then, my turn.
    I'll take this one Rank set of spells at a time. ( I know it's a tad tedious but it's also more thorough. )

    I understand that "Fear" sounds cool here, but it is quite confusing if you're going to use it like this. I'd use "Spirit" instead..

    Other than that, I'd like to say that I really like your concept and that it has plenty of potential and power so kudos there.

    You will need to find a way to balance this in a way that you can't have as many summons out as you want while being posessed by a certain yokai.

    Blue Fear: You'll need a duration and cooldown for this as well. The duration will determine how long the caster can use Tsurara and how long it will take after the duration is over to be able to use her again.

    Temporary Freeze: As an S Rank character, does this spell become more effective on higher ranked mages? Meaning that it does more damage than stated in the description?
    I do not understand how a freezing breath would boost durability. Percentages are also advised against since they are hard to determine exactly in certain situations. I'd assume that when destroying the shield you'd freeze it solid and then shatter it, correct?
    You'll have to be specific on how it affects fire users less than others.


    Ice call is a tad too powerful for being a D Rank spell. 6 posts is long and enduring 10 D Rank attacks is waaaay too strong for a summon of equal rank. Enduring 2 directly hit D Rank attacks is a more realistic. Fire attacks should be more effective too.

    Frost Maiden: You'll have to be specific on the powers and skills it grants.

    I believe the spoiler for Ice Staff is in the wrong place. The spell in itself looks all right.

    Tsurara shouldn't be the rank of the user, but her own rank. Otherwise it will just count as an S Rank spell and that won't work.

    Cooldowns have to be longer than or equal to the duration.


    Before I continue I'd like to point out that there's a limit to the amount of spells you can have of a specific rank unless you buy more spell slots. To start off, you can only have 5 D Rank spells and I'm counting quite a few more. Have you paid for them in the shop?


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    Post by Nurarihyon 10th August 2013, 1:11 am

    edited bumppp


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 12th August 2013, 7:45 am

    Before I go over this properly please ensure that any ranged spell has a maximum range and a speed. Also ranged abilities should state how big the attack is and what shape.


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    Post by Nurarihyon 12th August 2013, 9:58 pm

    mhm, all checked. ready!


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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 13th August 2013, 4:43 am

    Nurarihyon wrote:Primary Magic: Demon Forthbring Magic
    Secondary Magic: N/A
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:

    This magic,like the name states,enables the user to link with the dead,or most referable,yokais.Yokais,by the way are ghosts or demons,as regarded by the Japanese Tradition.The linking,which works like a possession,would provide powers and abilities to the caster,depending on the linked yokai’s attribute or element.’Fear’ is used as the reference of the linking’s medium.The linking,for example a link with a fire-Feared yokai,changes the caster’s attack to flame-based.This turns the caster’s attacks,even melees,into the element the yokai is based on.Certain unique traits can also be attained by the linking,provided by the linked yokai.Besides said function,the magic also enables the caster to summon yokais/yokais that he/she had made contract with.The summoned yokai would then help by supporting means in battles,for a limited amount of time provided for each yokai.The time limit,however may vary from one yokai to another.

    Strengths:

    -this magic gives the caster unique traits such as immense strength,depending on the yokai.

    -this magic will be stronger in night time,but still affective in day time.

    -this magic can only work on the caster,making controlling or manipulating this magic impossible.

    Weaknesses:

    -this magic may still give disadvantages,such as decreasing the caster’s speed for immense strength.

    -this magic can only work when the both parties agrees for the linking.It may fail if one of them disagrees the linking.

    -sometimes,the yokai tend to take over the caster’s whole body to have fun in the battle,making it dangerous for a body to be used recklessly.

    -The magic only work one function per one yokai.For example,if the caster is linking with a fire yokai,he cannot summon the fire yokai to support him/her and vice versa.However,if the caster had made contract with more than one yokai/yokai,he/she could use it for advantage.For example,if the caster had linked with a fire yokai,he/she can summon another yokai in his/her contract list for support.

    Abilities/Powers:

    -it gives the caster the ability to use the special traits or ability that the yokai may provide by the linking.

    -this magic can add up the number of yokais that may link with the caster,depending on the rank.

    -this magic can give advantages in having the upper hand by the use of trump cards that the caster may plan himself.

    -the summoning ability granted by the magic makes teamed attack more efficient and easier.

    d-rank spells:

    c-rank spells:

    B-rank spells:

    A-rank spells:

    S-rank spells:
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    Post by Nurarihyon 13th August 2013, 5:52 am

    edited!


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