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    Canon Of The Exiled Pages

    Necromancer Eon
    Necromancer Eon

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    Lineage : Elven Blood
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    Experience : 100

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    Canon Of The Exiled Pages Empty Canon Of The Exiled Pages

    Post by Necromancer Eon 13th November 2020, 10:01 am

    Magic
    Magic Name: Canon Of The Exiled Pages
    Magic Type: Requip, Solitary (Up to 4 Requip Spells can be active at once)
    Description:
    In part the result of the casters unique nature as a former book and how she came to be a mage, the Canon Of The Exiled Pages exists as the first of it's kind. The Canon Of The Exiled Pages copied the functions of Requip magics as it's method of use. It makes use of Requip Magic to slot in and insert pages from somewhere into itself, creating effects that alter the user or the Compendium itself. The effects of the book are extremely self centred and functions that directly affect something else without first affecting the user are extremely rare. The Canon Of The Exiled Pages manifests as a black leather bound book with many empty pages.

    Page uses The Canon Of The Exiled Pages in a very simple way, she calls on a page that fits her wants or needs into the book and the book does the rest. The book immediately absorbs the page, treating it as if it was always part of the book, and distributes the effects accordingly depending on the page inserted to it.

    Unique Abilities:

    • Aetherbound Tome: The Canon Of The Exiled Pages appears and disappears at the user's beck and call to the degree that Requiping a page onto the book becomes a flicker faster than a blink. The book itself acting as a protective buffer for the pages. When appearing or while manifested, The Canon Of The Exiled Pages can morph into any weapon with the following features:
      -Damage dealt by it is equal to the Normal Damage for Requips of the User's Rank (Up to S) + Number Of Requips Active.
      -If the weapon would have ranged capabilities, it's range is the Burst Max Range and projectile speed is the Burst Max Speed, both at User Rank (Up to S). The weapon generates its own projectiles.


    Last edited by Necromancer Eon on 18th November 2020, 6:55 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Necromancer Eon
    Necromancer Eon

    Player 
    Lineage : Elven Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 157
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 100

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
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    Post by Necromancer Eon 13th November 2020, 10:29 pm

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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 16th November 2020, 5:32 am

    Hello, Joh here to grade your magic. You will be able to find all of my edits in this color. As this magic seems to contain a few misconceptions, please reread our Magic Rules in order to ensure that you understand how our rules work and how our mechanics apply. Once every issue addressed in this magic has been fixed, give this thread a bump and I will review your magic once more.

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    Necromancer Eon
    Necromancer Eon

    Player 
    Lineage : Elven Blood
    Position : None
    Posts : 157
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 100

    Character Sheet
    First Skill:
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Necromancer Eon 18th November 2020, 8:18 pm

    bomp


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 21st November 2020, 3:50 am

    More edits, same color. Further, I realized that actually, since you only possess 3 normal spell slots, you may not use a passive spell in this magic, which means that I must also, as an overarching comment, ask you to rework your passive spell into an active spell until you are eligible for the use of passives in this magic.

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