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    Wen Yan

    Lyretich
    Lyretich

    Main Account- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Seductor's Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 111
    Guild : Meliora Vitae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Teresa Sinclair
    Experience : 7,712

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: The Bond Book
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Wen Yan

    Post by Lyretich 10th October 2020, 9:37 am


    Wen Yan 1WOHevC
    Wen Yan Ag3ubX6

    Grade: Weak
    Type: Combat Pet [Bond]
    Proof of Acquisition: ~
    Description:
    Wen Yan is a type of dragon-human like creature. The lower part of it is that of a dragon – partially covered in red scales, with four limbs and a tail, while the upper part resembles that of a human – two arms, a head with two adorable red horns and fluffy ears, big, honey-colored eyes, and soft brown hair. The adorable creature loves to wear a winter like a jacket. The precise reason for that being: “It keeps me warm”. The creature usually moves like a dragon, that is by floating next to its owner. Wen Yan is a fire attribute creature, because of that most of its offensive skills is that of the fire element.

    Wen Yan is a friendly creature, with carefree and curious nature. The creature loves to explore, converse, and enjoy some good time. One would say that the dragon-human hybrid is a perfect example of an extroverted personality. Talkative, friendly, passionate, and quick-tempered in nature. Small in body, but big in character, but better not to mention that to Wen Yan.

    Normal Abilities:
    Fire Ball:
    xxxxxxRank: User Rank (Up to C) 
    xxxxxxCategory: Offensive
    xxxxxxType: Single Target
    xxxxxxDamage: 40HP
    xxxxxxRange: 60 Meters
    xxxxxxSpeed: 60 MPS
    xxxxxxDuration: 1
    xxxxxxDescription: Wen Yan straches out both of her hands, gathering the energy of the Fire Element in front of them. Molding it into a Fire Ball, which is later released in the desired direction, hitting its target on the impact.                       
    Fire Breath:
    xxxxxxRank: D
    xxxxxxCategory: Offensive
    xxxxxxType: Single Target  
    xxxxxxDamage: 40HP
    xxxxxxRange: 60 Meters
    xxxxxxSpeed: 60 MPS
    xxxxxxDuration: 1
    xxxxxxDescription: The creature sucks in the ethernano that is in the air, converting it into the Fire Element inside its stomach, which is later released thru its mouth onto the target in a stream of fire.

    Bond Magic Abilities:
    Semi-Immortal:
    xxxxxxRank: D 
    xxxxxxType: Auxilary, Passive 
    xxxxxxDescription: Dragons are known for their long life, as such Wen Yan has inherited their longlivity. Passively increases HP by 40%.    
    Fire Immunity:
    xxxxxxRank: D
    xxxxxxType: Auxilary, Passive 
    xxxxxxDescription: Wen Yan is a Fire attribute dragon-human like creature, as such Fire has less impact on it. Passively increases Fire Magic Resistance by 40%.


    Last edited by Lyretich on 13th October 2020, 8:13 am; edited 3 times in total


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    Wen Yan OjvbKYa
    Golden Lacrima - until 31.10.21
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Wen Yan

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 13th October 2020, 7:31 am

    Heya Liretich, Joh here to grade this Combat Pet. Honestly, gotta say that, generally, this is looking pretty good. The only thing that I must ask you to correct is that the active abilities the Bond Pet possesses (i.e. "Fire Ball" and "Fire Breath") should be reworked to follow the regular spell template (meaning that they must also include Category, Damage, Range, Speed, Duration, etc.). Once that is done simply give this thread a bump and I will review this app once more~

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    Lyretich
    Lyretich

    Main Account- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Seductor's Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 111
    Guild : Meliora Vitae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Teresa Sinclair
    Experience : 7,712

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: The Bond Book
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Wen Yan

    Post by Lyretich 13th October 2020, 7:49 am

    Bump~


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    Wen Yan OjvbKYa
    Golden Lacrima - until 31.10.21
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Wen Yan

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 13th October 2020, 8:00 am

    Just two quick clarifications in this color and you're good to go

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    Lyretich
    Lyretich

    Main Account- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Seductor's Touch
    Position : None
    Posts : 111
    Guild : Meliora Vitae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Teresa Sinclair
    Experience : 7,712

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: The Bond Book
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Completed Re: Wen Yan

    Post by Lyretich 13th October 2020, 8:13 am

    Bump, Bump~


    _____________________________________________________________________________________

    Wen Yan OjvbKYa
    Golden Lacrima - until 31.10.21
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Completed Re: Wen Yan

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 13th October 2020, 8:30 am

    Wen Yan FbVA7uB

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