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    Requip: The Coward Hunter

    Riluo
    Riluo

    Player 
    Lineage : Shifty Stormchild
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip: The Coward Hunter
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Riluo 31st May 2020, 6:55 pm

    ♫ Requip: The Coward Hunter ♫

    Magic Name: Requip: The Coward Hunter
    Magic Type: Requip Solitary Benefit: Character can have up to 4 Requip spells active at once.
    Description: In the small village of Harper in the Fiore continent, there lies a clan of family that is adept at using Requip magic that ranges from wielding legendary equipments down to the most basic ones. There are many blacksmiths and artisans in the village so it is to be expected that acquisition of equipment and weapons to be used in a Requip is easy. There is an annual tradition in the village that they celebrate in order to pay homage to their deity, Gond the God of Crafts. During the tradition, each family will have to send their sons and daughters who just turned 18 that year and will be put against each other in a series of competition. The reward for the said competition is giving the title that comes with the Requip magic that corresponded to it. A six total of titles can be given to the winners of the competition and one of the lowest title was the Cowardice, which, was given to Riluo upon claiming the last place of the winners circle.

    The Coward Hunter Requip consists of series of weapons that can deal long-ranged attacks. This is called as "coward" due to most of the family in Harper believed that a person who is brave and strong carries a weapon that lets him fight the enemies at close-ranges. Also, the last holder of this title died young during jobs in their respective guilds and others simply too scared and withdrew the said title. This leads to the Cowardice title being looked down upon but people did not know the potential this Requip has. It is only in the right hands that the said magic can be used greatly and it rests upon Riluo's shoulders to bring out the best in it.
    Unique Abilities:
    Ability 1: As the magic is focused on dealing damages from afar, this grants the user with the enhanced distance of each of the spell's abilities giving a 40% increase in distance, if it requires to have a one.
    Ability 2: Unlocked at B-rank
    Ability 3: Unlocked at S-rank

    ♫ Spells ♫

    Coward's Hide:

    Hunter's Tranquility:

    Bow and Quiver of Gond - Advanced Spell:

    Coward's Flight:

    Spells Code:


    Last edited by Riluo on 4th June 2020, 5:52 pm; edited 2 times in total
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Posts : 11951
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    Cosmic Coins : 505
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    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 3rd June 2020, 1:25 pm

    Hello Riluo, Joh here to grade your magic. If you have any questions or need clarification on something, please post in this thread and I will get back to you. When you have made the requested edits, please simply give this thread a bump and I will review your magic once more. That said, you will be able to find all of my edits in this color

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    Riluo
    Riluo

    Player 
    Lineage : Shifty Stormchild
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip: The Coward Hunter
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Riluo 4th June 2020, 4:51 am

    Hi Johann! Thank you for taking the time to review my magic. Also a bump. I removed the downsides since I found it to be more detrimental to my magic itself. I hope everything is good.


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    Shen Kadokawa
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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 4th June 2020, 9:06 am

    Just a few more edits, same color

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    Riluo
    Riluo

    Player 
    Lineage : Shifty Stormchild
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Guild : Onyx Moon
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip: The Coward Hunter
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Riluo 4th June 2020, 4:44 pm

    Hi Joh. As per the range. I believe that my unique ability grants the distance on the range of each abilities of my requip spell to be increased by 40%. i hope this clears this up.


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    Shen Kadokawa
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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 4th June 2020, 4:52 pm

    Spells and abilities as written in magic are meant to reflect unmodified base values, regardless of whether the user has any passive or active increases or decreases. Calculations for any buffs, such as the buff to range you possess, are meant to be done in roleplay threads themselves and not in magic applications, which means that I must once again ask you to lower the ranges for your spells and abilities, as the values you specified for them are meant to reflect the base values of these spells and abilities, unmodified by any buff or debuff.


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    Riluo
    Riluo

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    Position : None
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    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Requip: The Coward Hunter
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Riluo 4th June 2020, 5:53 pm

    Okay sorry Johann. Here you go bumpy bump!


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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 5th June 2020, 1:55 am

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 25th August 2020, 6:44 am

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