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    Zenith

    Esper
    Esper

    Player 
    Lineage : Zenith
    Position : None
    Posts : 62
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,250

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    Post by Esper 6th November 2021, 8:56 pm

    Zenith G6AOkfx

    Lineage Name: Zenith
    Wielder: Esper
    Purchase Proof: Post n°50

    Description
    Zenith is for those who are as adaptable to evolution as they come, with their bodies natural magic having an affinity for transformation magic. As such the user is able to ascend/evolve/transcend their condition, powers and abilities to the highest level allowing them to obtain unparalleled might, becoming a force. The user gains access to the ultimate level of power that is capable of transcending the boundaries of their own species. Most importantly, Zenith can be obtained by those who possess full mastery of their own powers or ones with the utmost potential.
    Plot:

    Abilities:

    Zodiac Take-Over
    Zodiac Take-Overs are stronger versions that upgrade Transcendent Take-Over spells, making them even more potent. These Take-Over forms are the hardest to master and control, but offer more powerful transformations to their users, constituting the highest form of Take-Over spells. A Zodiac Take-Over upgrades and replaces a Transcendent Take-Over, therefore it follows the rules that it may only be applied to a single spell within a magic. (9 Effects).

    • Zodiac Take-Over spells can either possess 1 additional active or passive ability equal to the rank of the Take-Over spell.

    • Zodiac Take-Over spells, instead of using the damage values for "Immaculate" summons, use the damage values for "Zodiac" summons corresponding to their rank.

    • Zodiac Take-Over spells are quite durable and display superior adaptation and survivability. When a Zodiac Take-Over is active the user gains a 3x user ranked advanced shield that cannot be pierced by piercing effects that regenerates every post. This caps at S+ Rank and lasts for user rank advanced duration up to S+.


    Atavism of Wealth (1 Effect)
    The user's Jewel rewards from jobs are increased by 100%.


    Last edited by Esper on 12th November 2021, 3:20 pm; edited 5 times in total
    Esper
    Esper

    Player 
    Lineage : Zenith
    Position : None
    Posts : 62
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,250

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    Post by Esper 6th November 2021, 9:05 pm

    So balancing a Lineage is completely foreign to me, so I left myself 2 Effect Points to play with. Here is my thought process.

    Zodiac Take-Over spells can either possess 1 additional active or passive ability equal to the rank of the Take-Over spell. Additional Spell Slot but could be normal or advanced. Trade off is it only works within a Take-Over spell vs being any kind of spell.

    Zodiac Take-Over spells, instead of using the damage values for "Immaculate" summons, use the damage values for "Zodiac" summons corresponding to their rank. Increases Melee Damage but only for the Melee Damage of a Take-Over vs a all-around buff to Melee Damage as a trade off.

    One additional advanced spell slot equal to users rank, max H+. This spell slot must only be used on a Partial or Full Take-Over spell. The restriction is that may only be used on a Take=Over vs any type of spell.

    The user gains a 2x user ranked passive buff to their Spell Durability. The users Shield spells cannot be negated or pierced by piercing effects. The counter to negation and piercing effects I have no idea how to balance so I just sunk 2 Effect points into it.
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Zenith Empty Re: Zenith

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 11th November 2021, 10:32 am

    Hello Esper, Nero here to grade your lineage. You will be able to find all of my edits in this color in your grading below:

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    Esper
    Esper

    Player 
    Lineage : Zenith
    Position : None
    Posts : 62
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,250

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    Post by Esper 11th November 2021, 5:56 pm

    Update:

    Zodiac Take-Over - I tried to explain it better. Basically it replaces the one single transcendent spell you get per magic. A transcendent spell gives you 1 additional spell and raises the damage to immaculate (2 step increase). This gives you same. So you're essentially getting 2 additional spells within the Take-Over and another 2 step increase to melee damage when in the form. However it replaces so you wouldn't have both a transcendent and a zodiac, you'd just have a single zodiac spell. At best this effects 3 spells total if you have 3 magics.

    Transformation Ascendancy - Upgraded to 2 effects.

    Superior Adaptation - This one I wasn't sure on. I saw something similar in another lineage but didn't want to just copy it so I tried to create something new and unique. I completely see I botched it haha. I do 100% see your point that it would be too powerful if it affected all your spells. I changed it to be a lot less powerful and moved it under Zodiac Take-Over so that the protection only works when that Take-Over spell is active, and now the Zodiac Take-Over costs 2x MP/TP.
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th November 2021, 2:11 pm

    More edits, same color

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    Esper
    Esper

    Player 
    Lineage : Zenith
    Position : None
    Posts : 62
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 2,250

    Zenith Empty Re: Zenith

    Post by Esper 12th November 2021, 3:13 pm

    Updated
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

    Zenith Empty Re: Zenith

    Post by Shen Kadokawa 12th November 2021, 3:21 pm

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