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    Amos' Conciliator

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    Emory Aldwyn

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    Lineage : Amos' Conciliator
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 134
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 25
    Dungeon Tokens : 0

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    Post by Emory Aldwyn 27th April 2020, 1:23 pm

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    Lineage Name: Amos' Conciliator
    Wielder: Nohres Xaclamir
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    Serenity is not freedom from the storm, but peace amid the storm
    -Unknown Conciliator of Amos.

    Description:
    Tranquility; Repose; Rest; For many, a fundamental misunderstanding of tranquility is formed from a belief that it is wasted time. For many, if life is not spent working for something, improving something, then it is time wasted. But for there to be rest, one need know toil; so it was in the time before time. Before Creation was formed, there was ________. To most mortals, ________ is incomprehensible. To most, ________ and Nothing are the same. But for Nothing to exist, Something must have existed or continues to exist to contextualize Nothing. But ________ was before time, before Creation, and from that age came the Absolute Divines.

    Of the Absolute Divines, there exist ten. Once reality was made, they were equals; different from each other yet equally powerful. However, before Creation was made, there was one who stood before ________. Their name is not known to history, to any save the Divines and they do not speak that name. It was through their action that reality was created and given shape. This act, giving form to something within _______, took an unfathomable amount of power. In the wake of reality's birth, there was Amos, the Absolute Divine of Repose.

    In the wake of the birth of reality, Amos saw it as His duty to spread tranquility throughout this new Creation. And so He looked upon reality and saw that it was formless; Creation existed, but it held no meaning, no purpose. And so Amos toiled, forging the stars in the night sky and the planets under their light. It was after His toils that Earthland came to be. He looked upon this new world and was pleased with the results of His efforts. Other Divines toiled and soon mortal life began to take root on Earthland.

    These mortals spread, each passing on the gift of life to the next. And Amos was pleased. These mortals gave the Absolute Divines what they needed to keep reality together, to keep _______ at bay; their Belief, their Worship, their Dedication, their very Souls were a gift to repay a gift unbidden. The peace and rest they found in their lives amidst the struggles and tribulations, in particular, were as music to Amos' ears. Yet as time passed, the struggles and trials of mortals seemed to grow more numerous, more all-consuming. Their lives grew bleak and filled with all-consuming toil. It was more than Amos could bear to witness. He could not intervene directly in the affairs of mortals, but there was a solution; to guide and empower a mortal whose life creed was unknowingly written as a direct dedication to Amos.

    And so this person was chosen as His vassal, to be empowered by a spark of His Absolute Divinity and to travel the world. This person would become known as Amos' Conciliator.

    Abilities:

    • The Price of Leisure: Rest is not done without a cost; the price of leisure is often the works and toils of days past. Yet the Conciliator is ordained to facilitate rest wherever they go.+100% Jewel rewards from jobs for the Conciliator. On jobs with other people, the Conciliator may elect to reduce their Jewel bonus by 25% to grant another person +25% to their Jewel rewards. This can reduce the Conciliator to a +0% bonus. No one person may benefit from this effect more than once.


    • Bastion of Tranquility:  Within the realm of Mount Seren'ii, the Absolute Divine of Repose rules from his chosen place, the Bastion of Tranquility. Here He enlightens those He chooses, showing them the myriad of ways their life would improve if they would give themselves the chance to rest.

      The Conciliator gains five (5) normal spell slots for a single magic and two (2) additional signature spells that cap at S rank. All normal spells are subject to normal spell slot maximums and all spells are required to be graded as per normal spell rules.

    • Library of Repose: The dust left over from the works and toils of mortals is gathered in a grand mausoleum within the Bastion of Tranquility, as a place for their life works to rest so that their souls may finally enjoy repose in the afterlife. The Conciliator has access to this knowledge and, as such, is capable of expanding upon their abilities.

      This grants the Conciliator with five (5) lineage advanced spell slots for a single magic (which follow an independent spell maximum from the regular one up to S and must be distributed according to regular advanced spell maximums, 2 B+, 2 A+, 1 S+) as well as one (1) advanced spell that increases in rank as the user does, ranking up to H+, to be used on a single magic. These spells have to be made and reviewed like any other spell and follow the same rules and guidelines. But this empowering, pushing a mortal past their limits, does not come without a price. That spark of Divinity burns so strongly, they count as both Divine and Mortal for purposes of damage calculations and take an increased 50% spell damage from all forms of God Slayer magic.


    • Conciliator's Promise: The Conciliator, by design, must face a great many hardships to bring the promise of rest and serenity to Earthland. They cannot falter in this pursuit and must have an inexhaustible well to draw on for this task. The Conciliator enjoys an increase in their base Magic power, by +50%. However, the ceaseless nature of this task wears on the spirit. Any and all Healing effects that target the Conciliator, regardless of caster, have their base Healing reduced by 25%.

    • The Eye of Serenity: Amos sees the toils of mortals, all the ways in which they struggle and are left without rest, and knows what they could do to make their burdens easier to bear. His knowledge and experience, imparted to His Conciliator, make the toils of the word easier to bear. The Conciliator's base Damage Resistance is increased by 50%. However, their base Spell and Technique Speed and Range are reduced by 25% each.

    • The Bow of Amos: Marked by Amos, His chosen vassal bears a mark of His authority. Somewhere on the Conciliator's body is a tattoo of a sacred relic, the Bow of Amos; this marks them as His Conciliator. This grants them an active Requip slot beyond the normal limit.


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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
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    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 11th May 2020, 6:20 am

    Hey there, Nessa here to grade this~ Edits are in this colour. Bump the thread when it's ready for review and I'll take a look.

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    Emory Aldwyn

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    Lineage : Amos' Conciliator
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 134
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 25
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    Post by Emory Aldwyn 11th May 2020, 8:05 am

    Thanks Nessa! Changes made, per your outline and Discord.


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    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
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    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 11th May 2020, 9:46 am

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 25th August 2020, 7:46 am

    Archived due to player inactivity

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    Post by Ray Jyx 9th January 2021, 11:19 pm

    Unlocked and moved per user’s request.


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    Shen Kadokawa
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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
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    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 10th January 2021, 10:06 am

    Heya Nohres, Joh here to grade your lineage. Looking good so far, with only a few edits and clarifications in this color. Give me a bump once all edits have been made and I will review this application once more. If you have any questions, feel free to ask in this thread.

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    Emory Aldwyn

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    Lineage : Amos' Conciliator
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    Posts : 134
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    Cosmic Coins : 25
    Dungeon Tokens : 0

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    Post by Emory Aldwyn 10th January 2021, 10:48 pm

    Editted.


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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
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    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 14th January 2021, 3:05 pm

    One small edit, same color

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    Lineage : Amos' Conciliator
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 134
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 25
    Dungeon Tokens : 0

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    Post by Emory Aldwyn 14th January 2021, 7:16 pm

    Editted.


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    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 15th January 2021, 2:43 pm

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    Post by Guest 19th September 2022, 3:35 am

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    Post by Guest 22nd September 2022, 6:09 am

    Hey there Nohres, Med here to grade this, you'll find my edits in blue.

    As an overall comment, you currently have 13 effects in this lineage where as the maximum you can have is 10. I'll place the amount beside each section as things stand.

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    Posts : 134
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    Post by Emory Aldwyn 22nd September 2022, 6:02 pm

    After speaking to Nero on Discord, edits have been.


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    Post by Guest 23rd September 2022, 4:48 am

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