Fortress Tri-Shield

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Fortress Barrier (S) - The item starts combat with 3 Fortress Charges. Each of the 3 shields can spend a charge to create a barrier with their shape that lasts up to 3 posts and can block one spell of up to user rank (S rank max) from one direction. The user can choose to spend all 3 charges at the same time, creating a large spherical barrier that lasts up to 10 posts Please reduce to 5 posts maximum., and blocks up to 3 spells of up to user rank (S rank max) from all directions. The user can spend mana equal to a spell of their rank to restore 3 charges up to a max of 10.
  

  Fortress Barrier effect with one shield:

• Retaliation (S) - Once per turn, for each Fortress charge this item is currently holding, melee attacks against the user cause the attacker to take 12HP of damage (max 120). After each time this ability causes damage, it loses a fortress charge. This ability is not allowed. Abilities that automatically causes damage when an opponent attacks you are considered auto-hitting, and against site rules. If you could change it, that'd be great, thanks!
  
• Dynamo Core (S) - The core within the larger center shield is capable of storing mana by absorbing 50% of the mana of a spell used against the user, once every turn, up to the max MP of the user. This mana can only be used to gain Fortress Charges. This ability is a bit overpowered as well. Could you please lower this to 10% of each spell or change the ability?
  
• Natural Endurance (S) - While equipping this item, the user receives 30% physical damage resistance and 30% magical damage resistance. Please lower these values so the total amount of buff is no higher than 45%.
  
• Shield Maneuvering (A) - The 3 shields can float around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is limited to a 5 meter area that is permanently centered on its user, but in exchange, they can move at a total speed equal to their user speed. Each shield can also carry up to one person worth of weight without burdening its user.
  

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Fortress Barrier (S) - The item starts combat with 3 Fortress Charges. Each of the 3 shields can spend a charge to create a barrier with their shape that lasts up to 3 posts and can block one spell of up to user rank (S rank max) from one direction. The user can choose to spend all 3 charges at the same time, creating a large spherical barrier that lasts up to 5 posts, and blocks up to 3 spells of up to user rank (S rank max) from all directions. The user can spend mana depending on their rank to restore 3 charges up to a max of 10.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

  Fortress Barrier effect with one shield:

• Retaliation (S) - Once per turn, after a small charge, the user may fire a 50cm wide beam from the core of the center shield of a rank equal to the user. The beam is a single target type spell, with a 1 post duration, has +50% speed, -50% range and causes the target to take damage, based on user rank, for each Fortress Charge this item is currently holding (max at 10 charges). At the end of the duration, a Fortress Charge is spent.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

• Dynamo Core (S) - The core within the larger center shield is capable of storing mana from the area around it by absorbing 10% of the mana of a spell used against or by the user, once every turn, up to the max MP of the user. This mana can only be used to gain Fortress Charges.
  
• Natural Endurance (S) - While equipping this item, the user receives physical damage resistance and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

• Shield Maneuvering (A) - The 3 shields can float around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is limited to a 5 meter area that is permanently centered on its user, but in exchange, they can move at a total speed equal to their user speed. Each shield can also carry up to one person worth of weight without burdening its user.
  

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Fortress Barrier (S) - The item starts combat with 3 Fortress Charges. Each of the 3 shields can spend a charge to create a barrier with their shape that lasts up to 3 posts and can block one spell of up to user rank (S rank max) from one direction. The user can choose to spend all 3 charges at the same time, creating a large spherical barrier that lasts up to 5 posts, and blocks up to 3 spells of up to user rank (S rank max) from all directions. The user can spend mana depending on their rank to restore 3 charges up to a max of 10.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

  Fortress Barrier effect with one shield:

• Retaliation (S) - Once per turn, after a small charge, the user may fire a 50cm wide beam from the core of the center shield of a rank equal to the user. The beam is a single target type spell, with a 1 post duration, has +50% speed, -50% range and causes the target to take damage based on user rank. At the end of the duration, a Fortress Charge is spent.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

• Dynamo Core (S) - The core within the larger center shield is capable of storing mana from the area around it by absorbing 10% of the mana of a spell used against or by the user, once every turn, up to the max MP of the user. This mana can only be used to gain Fortress Charges.
  
• Natural Endurance (S) - While equipping this item, the user receives physical damage resistance and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

• Shield Maneuvering (A) - The 3 shields can float around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is limited to a 5 meter area that is permanently centered on its user, but in exchange, they can move at a total speed equal to their user speed. Each shield can also carry up to one person worth of weight without burdening its user.
  

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Fortress Barrier (S) - The item starts combat with 3 Fortress Charges. Each of the 3 shields can spend a charge to create a barrier with their shape that lasts up to 3 posts and can block one spell of up to user rank (S rank max) from one direction. The user can choose to spend all 3 charges at the same time, creating a large spherical barrier that lasts up to 5 posts, and blocks up to 3 spells of up to user rank (S rank max) from all directions. The user can spend mana depending on their rank to restore 3 charges up to a max of 10.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

  Fortress Barrier effect with one shield:

• Retaliation (S) - Once per turn, after a small charge, the user may fire a 50cm wide beam from the core of the center shield of a rank equal to the user. The beam is a single target type spell, with a 1 post duration, has +50% speed, -50% range and causes the target to take damage based on user rank. At the end of the duration, a Fortress Charge is spent.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

• Dynamo Core (S) - The core within the larger center shield is capable of storing mana from the area around it by absorbing 10% of the mana of a spell used against or by the user, once every turn, up to the max MP of the user. This mana can only be used to gain Fortress Charges.
  
• Natural Endurance (S) - While equipping this item, the user receives physical damage resistance and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank.
  

  User Rank Scaling:

• Shield Maneuvering (A) - The 3 shields can float around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is limited to a 5 meter area that is permanently centered on its user, but in exchange, they can move at a total speed equal to their user speed. Each shield can also carry up to one person worth of weight without burdening its user.
  

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact Armor
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Dynamo Core
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The core within the larger center shield is capable absorbing the mana around the user to heal itself, recovering 5% max durability per post, and the user gains User Rank Spell Durability. From Rank A and up, this item can store Spell Cores. [May you clarify what a 'Spell Core' is please? Also, Equipment can't regen HP/Durability, so that will need to be removed please.]
  

  Spell Durability and Spell Core Scaling:

• Fortress Barrier
  Rank: S
  Category: Defensive
  Type: Burst
  Spell Durability: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Range: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Duration: User rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - This item can create a spheric defensive barrier, that can grow up to User Rank Burst (up to S), that protects everyone within it. The user can negate one offensive ability (of the user rank, up to S) that hits the barrier before it damages it, by paying the MP cost of the negated ability, only once for the duration and only once per post. From Rank A and up, this item can absorb the negated ability storing it as a Spell Core. [Please see previous note about 'Spell Core'.]
  
  
• Retaliation
  Rank: S
  Category: Offensive
  Type: Burst
  Damage: User Rank Melee Damage (Up to S)
  Range: 50% User Rank Single Target (Up to S)
  Speed: 150% User Rank Single Target (Up to S)
  Duration: Single Target User Rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Downside: In exchange for a +50% increase in speed, this spell has -50% range.
  Description: - Once per turn, after a small charge, the user may fire a 50cm concentrated beam from the core of the center shield of a rank equal to the user. The beam causes the target to suffer a speed debuff for the duration. From Rank A and up, when casting this ability the user can spend a stored Spell Core by paying the MP of the stored spell to cast a copy of it at the same target. [Please see previous comment about 'Spell Core'.]
  

  User Rank Scaling:

  
  
• Shield Endurance
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The 3 shield sections can float seperatly around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is permanently locked on its user, they move at user speed when the user moves, but move at burst speed when changing positions relatively to the user. While equipping this item, the user receives physical and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank. At rank A and up, the shield can also carry additional weight without burdening its user.
  

  Physical & Magical Damage Resistance and Carry Rank Scaling:

• Siege Maneuvering
  Rank: A
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to A)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to A)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The user gains Spell Speed and can use the shield as a hoverboard to fly around at user speed. At rank A and up, while outside combat, user can fly at up to User Rank Single Target (Up to A) speed. [Please include that this ability buffs speed to go with your scaling.]
  

  Spell Speed Scaling:

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact Armor
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Dynamo Core
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The core within the larger center shield is capable absorbing the mana around the user to heal its user, recovering 5% max HP per post, and the user gains User Rank Spell Durability. From Rank A and up, this item can store Spell Cores. Spell Cores are made from mana absorbed by the shield that store the information of the ability (Up to S Rank) it belonged to, allowing for that ability to be copied once by spending the Spell Core. [You can't absorb MP from spells and make them copy said spell. Copied spells must have Mana of that spells rank used to use the copied spell, and you may only copy one spell per round. Copying also cannot be passive. Passive spells and abilities only get one effect. Please fix accordingly.]
  

  Spell Durability and Spell Core Scaling:

• Fortress Barrier
  Rank: S
  Category: Defensive
  Type: Burst
  Spell Durability: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Range: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Duration: User rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - This item can create a spheric defensive barrier, that can grow up to User Rank Burst (up to S), that protects everyone within it. The user can negate one offensive ability (of the user rank, up to S) that hits the barrier before it damages it, by paying the MP cost of the negated ability, only once for the duration and only once per post. From Rank A and up, this item can absorb the negated ability storing it as a Spell Core. [If this Spell core does like your previous abilities one, please see previous comments about copy abilities.]
  
  
• Retaliation
  Rank: S
  Category: Offensive
  Type: Burst
  Damage: User Rank Melee Damage (Up to S)
  Range: 50% User Rank Single Target (Up to S)
  Speed: 150% User Rank Single Target (Up to S)
  Duration: Single Target User Rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Downside: In exchange for a +50% increase in speed, this spell has -50% range.
  Description: - Once per turn, after a small charge, the user may fire a 50cm concentrated beam from the core of the center shield of a rank equal to the user. The beam causes the target to suffer a speed debuff for the duration. From Rank A and up, when casting this ability the user can spend a stored Spell Core by paying the MP of the stored spell to cast a copy of it at the same target. [See previous comment about the Spell Cores.]
  

  User Rank Scaling:

  
  
• Shield Endurance
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The 3 shield sections can float seperatly around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is permanently locked on its user, they move at user speed when the user moves, but move at burst speed when changing positions relatively to the user. While equipping this item, the user receives physical and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank. At rank A and up, the shield can also carry additional weight without burdening its user. [Passive spells and abilities cannot involve mobility effects.]
  

  Physical & Magical Damage Resistance and Carry Rank Scaling:

• Siege Maneuvering
  Rank: A
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to A)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to A)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - While holding this item he user gains Spell Speed and can use the shield as a hoverboard to fly around at User Burst Rank Spell Speed (Up to A). At rank A and up, while outside combat, user can fly at up to User Rank Single-Target Spell Speed (Up to A). [See previous mobility comment.]
  

  Spell Speed Buff Scaling:

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact Armor
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Dynamo Core
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The core within the larger center shield is capable absorbing the mana around the user to heal its user, recovering 5% max HP per post, and the user gains User Rank Spell Durability. From Rank A and up, Dynamo core reduces the strength of Debuffs that aflict the user by half. [Apologies for missing this before, but you have one too many effects for this ability (HP Regen, buff, then a counter at A and up). B rank gets only one effect, and A and S get two. Only Active Auxiliary spells get an extra effect and passive abilities are limited to a single effect, no matter their rank, category, or the spell they are used in.]
  

  Spell Durability Scaling:

• Fortress Barrier
  Rank: S
  Category: Defensive
  Type: Burst
  Spell Durability: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Range: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Duration: User rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - This item can create a spheric defensive barrier, that can grow up to User Rank Burst (up to S), that protects everyone within it. The user can negate one offensive ability (of the user rank, up to S) that hits the barrier before it damages it, by paying the MP cost of the negated ability, only once for the duration and only once per post. From Rank A and up, user and allies within range when this ability is cast, gain a strength buff for the duration.
  

  Strength Buff Scaling:

• Retaliation
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Rank Burst Target (Up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst Target (Up to S)
  Duration: Single Target Burst Rank (Up to 7 Post) [Minor thing, but you can remove the ST and Burst here as they don't have their own duration if you wish ^^]
  Description: - Once for the duration, the user can Reflect one offensive ability that is within burst range, by paying twice the MP cost of the reflected ability. For the duration, the user can spend the MP cost of the reflected ability to cast a copy of it up to once per turn. From Rank A and up, the user gains a spell speed buff for the duration.
  

  Spell Speed Buff Scaling:

• Shield Endurance
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The 3 shield sections can float seperatly around the user and move according to his/her will. The shields movement is permanently locked on its user, they move at user speed when the user moves, but move at burst speed when changing positions relatively to the user. While equipping this item, the user receives physical and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank. At rank A and up, the shield can also carry additional weight without burdening its user. [Passive spells and abilities cannot involve mobility effects, and also are limited to a single effect, no matter their rank, category, or the spell they are used in. You have too many effects for this passive (Mobility, and buff).]
  

  Physical & Magical Damage Resistance and Carry Rank Scaling:

• Siege Maneuvering
  Rank: A (Statless)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to A)
  Description: - The user can use the shield as a hoverboard to fly at great speeds and for long ranges. From rank A, the user can split the shield to carry two more people.
  

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact Armor
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Dynamo Core
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The core within the larger center shield is capable absorbing the mana around the user to give the user physical and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank. From Rank A and up, Dynamo core reduces the strength of Debuffs that aflict the user by half. [Passive abilities are limited to a single effect, no matter their rank, category, or the spell they are used in. You have two here (buff and counter). Please Remove one.]
  

  Physical & Magical Damage Resistance and Carry Rank Scaling:

  
  
  
• Fortress Barrier
  Rank: S
  Category: Defensive
  Type: Burst
  Spell Durability: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Range: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Duration: User rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - This item can create a spheric defensive barrier, that can grow up to User Rank Burst (up to S), that protects everyone within it. The user can negate one offensive ability (of the user rank, up to S) that hits the barrier before it damages it, by paying the MP cost of the negated ability, only once for the duration and only once per post. From Rank A and up, user and allies within range when this ability is cast, gain a strength buff for the duration.
  

  Strength Buff Scaling:

• Retaliation
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Rank Burst Target (Up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst Target (Up to S)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - Once for the duration, the user can Reflect one offensive ability that is within burst range, by paying twice the MP cost of the reflected ability. For the duration, the user can spend the MP cost of the reflected ability to cast a copy of it up to once per turn. From Rank A and up, the user gains a spell speed buff for the duration.
  

  Spell Speed Buff Scaling:

• Shield Endurance
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - The 3 shield sections can float seperatly around the user and move according to his/her will for the duration. The shields movement is permanently locked on its user, they move at user speed when the user moves, but move at burst speed when changing positions relatively to the user. For the duration the user gains Spell Durability buff. From rank A upward, the user is also healed for 5% of his/her max hp per post for the duration.
  

  Spell Durability Scaling:

• Siege Maneuvering
  Rank: A (Statless)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to A)
  Description: - The user can use the shield as a hoverboard to fly at great speeds and for long ranges. From rank A, the user can split the shield to carry two more people.
  

LibertyGear wrote:Name: Fortress Tri-Shield
Rank: Fusion 3x Artifact Armor
Type: Shield
Description:

Pics:

Abilities:

• Dynamo Core
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: Passive
  Description: - The core within the larger center shield is capable absorbing the mana around the user to give the user physical and magical damage resistance based on his/her rank.
  

  Physical & Magical Damage Resistance Rank Scaling:

  
  
  
• Fortress Barrier
  Rank: S
  Category: Defensive
  Type: Burst
  Spell Durability: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Range: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst (up to S)
  Duration: User rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - This item can create a spheric defensive barrier, that can grow up to User Rank Burst (up to S), that protects everyone within it. The user can negate one offensive ability (of the user rank, up to S) that hits the barrier before it damages it, by paying the MP cost of the negated ability, only once for the duration and only once per post. From Rank A and up, user and allies within range when this ability is cast, gain a strength buff for the duration.
  

  Strength Buff Scaling:

• Retaliation
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Rank Burst Target (Up to S)
  Speed: User Rank Burst Target (Up to S)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - Once for the duration, the user can Reflect one offensive ability that is within burst range, by paying twice the MP cost of the reflected ability. For the duration, the user can spend the MP cost of the reflected ability to cast a copy of it up to once per turn. From Rank A and up, the user gains a spell speed buff for the duration.
  

  Spell Speed Buff Scaling:

• Shield Endurance
  Rank: S
  Category: Auxiliary
  Type: Burst
  Range: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Speed: User Burst Rank (Up to S)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to 7 Post)
  Description: - The 3 shield sections can float seperatly around the user and move according to his/her will for the duration. The shields movement is permanently locked on its user, they move at user speed when the user moves, but move at burst speed when changing positions relatively to the user. For the duration the user gains Spell Durability buff. From rank A upward, the user is also healed for 5% of his/her max hp per post for the duration.
  

  Spell Durability Scaling:

• Siege Maneuvering
  Rank: A (Statless)
  Duration: User Rank (Up to A)
  Description: - The user can use the shield as a hoverboard to fly at great speeds and for long ranges. From rank A, the user can split the shield to carry two more people.