The "Devil" Shinigami

Name: The "Devil" Shinigami
Gender: Male
Age: 16
Birthday: 2/3
Sexuality: Straight
Special Characteristics: Red markings near the left eye

Personality:

Shinigami is a very warm-hearted person. He is a very intelligent person and very calm. Shinigami is an extremely calm person when it comes to combat. When every there's comrades around; protecting them is his first priority. However, Shinigami sees things in a different way than most people. He sees violence as a last resort and would save anyone’s life whether friends or enemy. This is because he had seen pain and sorrow through wars. Another thing is that he isn’t arrogant or egoistic anymore. In fact, he always complements his enemy’s power during battle. This is because after endless amount of wars, his father was injured with a very severe injury. The doctor said that the only way to heal his father was to sacrifice Shinigami’s magic. He disagreed at first, but after seeing his father getting worst, he reliantly agreed. He became thankful for his magic and sacrificed all of his magic power. Because of having no magic power, he uses staffs as a magic tool. Even though he is a kind-hearted man, he has shown to be a very emotionless man to show that he is not weak.



Likes: Magic as he thinks magic is very unique.
Dislikes: Perverted people because perverted people are disgusting.
Motivations: His friends and families because of the sacrifices they did in order to protect Shinigami.
Fears: Seeing anybody getting killed because the violence reminds him of all the endless killings he had seen.

General Appearance


Height: 185cm
Weight: 50kg
Hair: Messy Blue hair
Eyes: Brown eyes in general.
Skin Tone: Fare
Appearance:
He has very big muscles and a six pack. His face is very pale and has very messy blue hair that covers his left eye. He has dark brown eyes. Unlike normal people, he has an unusual sharper teeth. He wears very heavy clothing in which he wears a dark ripped t-shirt and wears a very loose fitting pants.He also wears a cape at the back of his t-shirt.

Guild/Council

Guild: Blue Pegasus
Tattoo: On the right shoulder
Rank: B-rank

Please just add a Day and a Month to your date of birth, as we have not established a timeline yet. This is a non-canon RP so the timeline might be completely different from the manga one.

Also remove the brackets. "(" ")" <- those guys.
I would like you to add more detail to his appearance, how is body is built, what his face looks like, etc.

He is not motivated by anything at all? Quite depressing.
Also, why is he afraid of ghosts?

I'm also sorry to inform you that we do not have a "Battle for Kyoto's province" in our History. The people in this RP are also living in a different world than the real life one. So your personality cannot be built around that. I suggest changing it with something more personal to your character that does not involve other characters. However, in this app you should not add your Character's History, there is a different section for that. So just give us your character's current personality and why he is the way he is. How he behaves in battle, socially and in a group as leader or follower.

Thanks for the reply. I've finished the editing so can you please check it? Thank you very much!

You're welcome. ^^

Also remove the brackets. "(" ")" <- those guys.

This is still not fixed.

(His friends and families because the sacrifices they )

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There are still some other minor errors when it comes to spelling and grammar, but I'm sure you can see them directly once you read over it.
Edit the things above and do another Spell Check to correct your other minor errors. After that it should be fine.

I have fixed the minor problems. Is it ok now?

Approved.