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    Olido's Pet - Mango (Hell Raven)

    FireRaven
    FireRaven

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Posts : 29
    Guild : Raven Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
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    Mentor : Jose Porla's Dark Seal
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Dark Seal
    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by FireRaven 16th April 2012, 2:53 am

    Name: Mango
    Species: Hell Raven
    Type: Combat Pet
    Description:A raven that is covered with fire, one of the powerful birds in the bird species, nearly as strong as a phoenix. Mango rarely talks, he likes striking fear into people's heart. )
    Abilities:
    Name: Raven's Revenge (Pet's Skill)
    Rank: (D)
    Type: (N/A)
    Description: (The Hell Raven- Mango on Olido's shoulder flies up in to the sky, summons 100 over ravens and dive down towards the opponent. All the raven except Mango will explode giving the opponent no mercy.)
    Strengths: (The raven can travel in a swift speed, can dive and explode from any direction.)
    Weaknesses: (Will not work if there isn't raven in the sky, takes 1 minute of casting time.)

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    Last edited by FireRaven on 18th April 2012, 3:19 am; edited 2 times in total
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    Post by Seijin 18th April 2012, 3:14 am

    Here's some constructive criticism.

    Don't use "best" in your applications, instead change it to "powerful" or "strong."

    After you change that, I'll approve this application.
    FireRaven
    FireRaven

    1 Year Anniversary- Player 
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    Posts : 29
    Guild : Raven Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Jose Porla's Dark Seal
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
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    Second Skill: N/A
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    Post by FireRaven 18th April 2012, 3:19 am

    done =) thank you for checking it :)


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    Post by Shin Katari 18th April 2012, 7:38 am

    Approved


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