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    Gaia's Fury

    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 8th February 2020, 10:35 am

    Gaia's Fury

    Gaia's Fury Y0G9jtB

    Magic type:
    Summoning Solitary

    Description:
    The realm of Gaia is an unexplored realm which can be found on a different plane to our own, it is quite similar to the Celestial Realm in the way that there are various beings that can be summoned to Earthland which are known as elementals. It is shrouded in just as much mystery as the Celestial in the way that no one has ever successfully found it. No one knows who first discovered how to summon the elementals, but thanks to that person it is now possible to summon them using special stones engraved with ancient runes. There is a stone to represent each race that can be found on Gaia, from the Flame Spirits of the Lava Fields to the Merfolk of the deep oceans.

    Unique Abilities:

    Father's Might
    Miyu was lucky enough for her father to old the same magic as she does, and thanks to that she was able to learn more about the magic then she would on her own. He taught her that sending your magic through a gemstone would strengthen an elemental in a variety of ways. It will heal a spirit for 25% of their health while increasing their damage by 20%. The Elemental must be within 30 meters of Miyu to be effected while the speed of this ability is 20 mps. This power increase will last for 1 round of posts. Due to the difficulty of the technique, Miyu is only able to use it once per battle.

    Lineage

    Name: Master of the Other World
    Description: In all magic there are prodigies and masters, those who from an early age are destined to be a natural talent in a particular magic or skill. For the Master of the Other World, this mastery comes in the form of summoning; they seem to see lines where others would not and are able to make contracts with their summons of choice which are lasting, and more binding than those made by a normal wizard. When these masters choose to show their power, they seem to be able to better control, and better understand their summons. For some, this is due to a deeper understanding, and even friendship, for others it is their will which allows them to overpower that of the summons.


    • Ability: The user gains the ability to actively maintain one additional Summon spell on top of the active Summon slots they already have. If the user does not possess a magic that is at least of an Auxiliary Summoning type, the active summon cap is raised from one slot to two slots instead.


    • Usage Passive.


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    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 8th February 2020, 2:00 pm

    Signature Spells and Passives
    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 8th February 2020, 2:54 pm

    D and C Rank Spells

    Ifrit:

    Baldur:

    Sedna:


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    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 9th February 2020, 5:39 am

    B and A Rank Spells
    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 9th February 2020, 5:40 am

    S and H Rank Spells
    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 9th February 2020, 5:43 am

    Advanced Spells


    Orisha:


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    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

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    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 9th February 2020, 8:05 am

    Heya Miyu, Joh here to grade this magic today. Generally looking pretty good, though a few clarifications need to be addressed. You will find all my edits and comments in your magic in this color. If you have any question or need any clarification yourself post in this thread and I will get back to you as soon as possible. When the requested edits have been made simply give me a bump and I will give this magic another look-over. With that out of the way let's jump right into it.

    As it stands I also have 3 overarching comments that address a few things I've observed that aren't really edits, but I would like to suggest nonetheless, as it means you can potentially make your magic stronger:

    • Firstly, you may add a Unique Ability to your magic. To find out more about Unique Abilities see this section of the Magic and Spell Rules.
    • Your summons all only have a single ability, which is fine, but every summon gets 2 abilities, meaning you can add another active or passive ability to each one of your summons should you so desire.
    • You can add a D+ Advanced summon to this magic as well if you so desire.


    Spoiler:


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    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 9th February 2020, 9:42 am

    All suggestions have been made!
    Thanks for letting me know about the abilities and extra summon. I didn't realise that they were available at D rank!
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 9th February 2020, 11:07 am

    Some more edits in the same color. Also, please make sure to take another look at the last edits that have been suggested, as it appears you skipped over them. Simply give me a bump when everything has been addressed

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    Miyu Strasalli
    Miyu Strasalli

    Player 
    Lineage : Master of the Other World
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Silver Wolf
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

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    Post by Miyu Strasalli 9th February 2020, 11:44 am

    So sorry about that! I completely missed the quote.
    All of the requested edits have been made.
    Shen Kadokawa
    Shen Kadokawa

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- Alignment Shift- Mythical VIP Status- Demon VIP Status- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Mythical- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Guild Master- Custom Slayer- God Slayer- Demon Slayer- Legal Guild Ace- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- Eevee- EXP Grinder- Jewel Grinder- Job Creator- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Idolize- Unknown Powerhouse- Unknown Legend- The Completionist- Guild Creator- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Loyal to the Bone- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Fan Art Contest Participant- Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 6- Veteran Level 5- Veteran Level 4- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Join A Faction!- Tertiary Magic- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 3rd Place Event/Contest Winner- Christmas Event Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Advertisement Achievement Badge- Tournament Participation Badge- Cookie Achievement- Cupcake Achievement- Rainbow Hero- Summer Special Tier 4- Summer Special Tier 3- Summer Special Tier 2- Summer Special Tier 1- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- 1 Year Anniversary- Player-
    Lineage : Assassin's Shadow
    Position : None
    Faction : The Rune Knights
    Posts : 11951
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 505
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 27
    Experience : 3,283,767

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Infinite Arcana
    Second Skill: Vox Universum
    Third Skill: Disciple of War

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    Post by Shen Kadokawa 9th February 2020, 11:49 am

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    Spoiler:


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