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    Brink's magic

    Brink
    Brink

    VIP- God Slayer- Player 
    Lineage : Zeus's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 235
    Guild : Fairy tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: God Slayer Magic (Thunder)
    Second Skill: None
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Brink 28th June 2013, 2:56 am

    Brink's magic Zeus-the-god-of-olympia-coloring-page

    Primary Magic: Thunder God Slayer

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Passive abilities:
    God Force
    Enhanced speed
    Lightning Reflexes
    Immense Strength
    Immense Durability
    Immense Magic power output
    Heightened Sense of smell and awareness
    Can eat any from of mixed lightning, lightning magic, or Electricity

    Description: Thunder God Slayer is the Lost Magic taught to Brink by the lightning  god Zeus.

    Strengths: Brink has outstanding speed that can only be matched by someone teleporting seeing he moves almost literally completely in flashes. His relaxes are almost next to know and combined with his hearing he can almost dodge or at least hear any attack coming his way and projectile weapons like arrows or even bullets don't have an effect on him with his enhanced senses. He is always alert and he is swift to move into action at a break neck speed which makes him a force to reckon with seeing as the faster someone goes the bigger an impact they can create. Also seeing as he uses lightning he can easily take out a water mage up to one rank above him seeing as his attacks against water magic or combined with water are doubled. Also he is extremely strong against earth magic seeing as his lightning strikes at an enormous power and would simply shatter a spell equal or lower than his current rank. So earth shields are mostly pointless against him. While he is a god slayer he has a base advantage over light magic seeing as his was meant to kill a god one of the holiest beings in existence.

    Weaknesses: Brink has a great weakness to wind seeing as wind can redirect lightning or just push it away. Wind magic of a higher rank will cause his magic to go crazy. However, a skilled wind user could redirect his lightning to hit one of his teammates in the area or try sending it back at him. So any wind user going against him has a great advantage and usually while win unless Brink can get some help from his surrounding area or other wizards.

    Abilities/Powers:
    .Electron sonar- Sends out a wave of electric pulses to sense objects such as animals and people and everyone has a different electron level so you can tell them apart. Can be used at different levels, as Brink gets stronger. This takes no magic power because it is simply using an electronic pulse that flies out. It is like radar that goes out three times over the post giving you time to find a location of an object or person. He can see these dots by closing his eyes and focusing making a general map of the area. This can see electrons in a person helping him identify people from long distances if they are friendly or enemy with friendly being blue and enemies being red.  
    D= 2 miles (cool down 1 post)
    C= 5 miles (cool down 2 post)
    B= 10 miles (cool down 3 post)
    A= 20 miles (cool down 4 post)
    S= 50 miles (cool down 6 post)

    Shunpo-Can move at a high speed with using steps it is like a flash movement for a distance because of the lightning running through his body he seemingly vanishes and then reappears. This happens after he unleashes a small circle of lightning under his feet boosting his speed. This is a technique he can only use three times per fight as in steps for example a five-step combo, a one-step combo and a three-step combo then I could not use it for the rest of the thread or battle. The cool down is based on how many steps I use so if I use two then it is a two post cool down. (Max 10 step combo) can be stopped by wind or water magic of same rank as Brink or higher.

    description of Shunpo :

    D rank spells:

    C Rank Spells:


    Last edited by Brink on 10th August 2013, 2:20 pm; edited 23 times in total
    NightDrivenEn7
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 1st July 2013, 10:32 am

    You need 2 more general weaknesses in your description section of the magic. The fact you put 2 down when you could easily say "This magic is ineffective against Slayers who can eat lightning."

    Make sure you also have 1 more weakness than strengths in all of your magic app.


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    Brink
    Brink

    VIP- God Slayer- Player 
    Lineage : Zeus's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 235
    Guild : Fairy tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: God Slayer Magic (Thunder)
    Second Skill: None
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Brink 2nd July 2013, 10:10 am

    bump


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    Total EXP: 377.5
    Toward B rank: 225/750
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    Age : 32
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    Second Skill:
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    Post by NightDrivenEn7 2nd July 2013, 10:25 am

    remove percentages sense we do not use them due to no system to run them off of; use verbal describers. Make sure your weaknesses are in list format too.

    You need to describe how your offensive spells do against defensive spells, and how your defensive spells do against offensive spells; you need a limiter and those will also go in your weaknesses.

    Lightning Dragon is a higher ranked spell than what you are currently able to use in a period sense; due to you have no control as a D rank. Remove it and replace it with something else.

    Lightning wall is too large for a D rank spell, a small single person barrier of lightning cast by you from your hands is more of your rank.


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    "True Strength shall be shown, and the corruption of magic shall be broken."

    Current EXP: 150

    Informatio and Items:
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    Jobs:
    :


    Completed Missions:


    Theme:
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    Brink
    Brink

    VIP- God Slayer- Player 
    Lineage : Zeus's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 235
    Guild : Fairy tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: God Slayer Magic (Thunder)
    Second Skill: None
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Brink 2nd July 2013, 12:34 pm

    fixed


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    Total EXP: 377.5
    Toward B rank: 225/750
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    Post by Haru-senpai 2nd July 2013, 6:32 pm

    ~Looks fine now. You made the original changes I requested and the changes Nightdriven requested.

    ~Approved


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    Post by Haru-senpai 25th July 2013, 1:57 pm

    ~God Slayer spells have been Approved after working on them closely with other members, and a staff member (myself) in the CBOX. Well done.


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    Rosetta Crawford
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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 10th August 2013, 1:47 pm

    Brink wrote:
    Brink's magic Zeus-the-god-of-olympia-coloring-page

    Primary Magic: Thunder God Slayer

    Secondary Magic: N/A

    Caster or Holder: Caster

    Passive abilities:
    God Force
    Enhanced speed
    Lightning Reflexes
    Immense Strength
    Immense Durability
    Immense Magic power output
    Heightened Sense of smell and awareness
    Can eat any from of mixed lightning, lightning magic, or Electricity

    Description: Thunder God Slayer is the Lost Magic taught to Brink by the lightning  god Zeus.

    Strengths: Brink has outstanding speed that can only be matched by someone teleporting seeing he moves almost literally completely in flashes. His relaxes are almost next to know and combined with his hearing he can almost dodge or at least hear any attack coming his way and projectile weapons like arrows or even bullets don't have an effect on him with his enhanced senses. He is always alert and he is swift to move into action at a break neck speed which makes him a force to reckon with seeing as the faster someone goes the bigger an impact they can create. Also seeing as he uses lightning he can easily take out a water mage up to one rank above him seeing as his attacks against water magic or combined with water are doubled. Also he is extremely strong against earth magic seeing as his lightning strikes at an enormous power and would simply shatter a spell equal or lower than his current rank. So earth shields are mostly pointless against him. While he is a god slayer he has a base advantage over light magic seeing as his was meant to kill a god one of the holiest beings in existence.

    Weaknesses: Brink has a great weakness to wind seeing as wind can redirect lightning or just push it away. Wind magic of a higher rank will cause his magic to go crazy. However, a skilled wind user could redirect his lightning to hit one of his teammates in the area or try sending it back at him. So any wind user going against him has a great advantage and usually while win unless Brink can get some help from his surrounding area or other wizards.

    Abilities/Powers:
    .Electron sonar- Sends out a wave of electric pulses to sense objects such as animals and people and everyone has a different electron level so you can tell them apart. Can be used at different levels, as Brink gets stronger. This takes no magic power because it is simply using an electronic pulse that flies out. It is like radar that goes out three times over the post giving you time to find a location of an object or person. He can see these dots by closing his eyes and focusing making a general map of the area. This can see electrons in a person helping him identify people from long distances if they are friendly or enemy with friendly being blue and enemies being red.  
    D= 2 miles (cool down 1 post)
    C= 5 miles (cool down 2 post)
    B= 10 miles (cool down 3 post)
    A= 20 miles (cool down 4 post)
    S= 50 miles (cool down 6 post)

    Shunpo-Can move at a high speed with using steps it is like a flash movement for a distance because of the lightning running through his body he seemingly vanishes and then reappears. This happens after he unleashes a small circle of lightning under his feet boosting his speed. This is a technique he can only use three times per fight as in steps for example a five-step combo, a one-step combo and a three-step combo then I could not use it for the rest of the thread or battle. The cool down is based on how many steps I use so if I use two then it is a two post cool down. (Max 10 step combo) can be stopped by wind or water magic of same rank as Brink or higher.

    description of Shunpo :

    D rank spells:

    C Rank Spells:
    Comments in teal.


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    Brink's magic Zack_by_ravenart5-d8j23c0

    Brink's magic Zackrose_zpse9a22d85
    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)
    Brink
    Brink

    VIP- God Slayer- Player 
    Lineage : Zeus's Descent
    Position : None
    Posts : 235
    Guild : Fairy tail
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 28
    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: God Slayer Magic (Thunder)
    Second Skill: None
    Third Skill:

    Brink's magic Empty Re: Brink's magic

    Post by Brink 10th August 2013, 1:58 pm

    bump


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    Total EXP: 377.5
    Toward B rank: 225/750
    Brink's magic 2niw26w
    Brink's magic Brink3_by_gramcrackers-d6hcd9a
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    First Skill: Ten No Kichi
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Rosetta Crawford 10th August 2013, 2:30 pm

    Brink's magic GhqjI28


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    Current missions(4/6):  get the squid A, King of Fighters(S), Village Protection(A), Repair the House(D)

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