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    Bahamut's Decay

    Ydris
    Ydris

    Player 
    Lineage : Spirit of Corruption
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 30
    Experience : 100

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Spirit of Corruption
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ydris 14th December 2018, 4:02 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Corruptions Decay.
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Corruption of Decay is a passed down branch of magic from the Lineage of the Spirit of Corruption. The person with the corruptive nature of this magic causes those within its effect radius to undergo the sensations of rotting away. People, animals, buildings, even spells will rot away if exposed for too long if they are not properly defended against the magic, or cannot overpower the effects.
    Unique Abilities: Decaying Presence: (Passive ) With his close contact with the Spirit of Corruption and that of decay, Subja is able to cast out a magic mantle that feeds off of the mana of people and that of other objects and people. As always things must come to an end and decay away into dust. Thus Subja means to decompose and take in the living particles and mana and make it his own while slowly aging the objects within a 10m radius of his body. If they are not granted his protection or the protection of healing magic this mantle feasts upon them over time sucking up 5% of their MP and HP in a combat zone, other then that others will feel physically weaker being close to Subja.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:
    Name: Strength of the Legion
    Rank: D
    Type: Buff
    Damage: None
    Range: Buff
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 3 Posts
    Downside: He returns to normal melee damage.
    Description: Connecting back to the sacrifices of the many who came before with the Spirit of Corruption, using the strength of those who signed over their lives to the spirit. Reaching back through the lineage he pulls upon the power of the people to arm him for combat upping his strength by 40%.

    Name: Corruptions Grasp
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: ----
    Description: Upon casting the spell the enemy who is hit by the Corruptions grasp will experience a lose the ability to move due to paralysis. With an outstretched hand, darkness shoots forth like a black hand looking to entomb them in its grasp. The paralysis effect comes into play upon feeling like ones life might end while cascaded in complete darkness.

    Name: Drawback
    Rank: D+
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 30 hp
    Range: 45meters
    Speed: 25m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: Any fighter who is also CQC will be brought into striking range.
    Description: With Ydris as the epicenter of this 45m perimeter, the man pulls his enemies and objects to himself. This skill can be used in motion to bring down fleeing foes like polar opposite ends of a magnet. For someone who fights with his hands mainly, this skill works to subdue long distance fighters who seek to run away.

    Name: Eye for an Eye
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 15m
    Speed: 15m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: This spell can not be used at 100% hp and must be done directly after taking damage.
    Description: Upon taking damage, due to the Decay mantle 10% of the spell damage is reduced away. Adding 10% to Eye for an Eye as a counter spell, the extra 10% is kicked back in a beam formation. When the spell is activated, from the enemies perspective their attack will make contact with Ydris. Upon the damage being taken the first thing they see will be a lone eye staring back followed by the returning beam of 10% of their damage and his own added assault.


    Last edited by Ydris on 19th December 2018, 3:54 pm; edited 3 times in total


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    Character Sheet
    Ydris
    Ydris

    Player 
    Lineage : Spirit of Corruption
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 30
    Experience : 100

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Spirit of Corruption
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ydris 18th December 2018, 4:07 pm

    Bump.


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    Yuu Blitzkrieg
    Yuu Blitzkrieg

    Crash!


    Crash!

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    Second Skill: TBD
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    Post by Yuu Blitzkrieg 19th December 2018, 3:15 pm

    Heyo! I'll be grading your magic. Any requested changes will be in this gorgeous red. Please bump the thread once you've made the changes.

    Ydris wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Corruptions Decay.
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Corruption of Decay is a passed down branch of magic from the Lineage of the Spirit of Corruption. The person with the corruptive nature of this magic causes those within its effect radius to undergo the sensations of rotting away. People, animals, buildings, even spells will rot away if exposed for too long if they are not properly defended against the magic, or cannot overpower the effects.
    Unique Abilities: Decaying Presence: (Passive ) With his close contact with the Spirit of Corruption and that of decay, Subja is able to cast out a magic mantle that feeds off of the mana of people and that of other objects and people. As always things must come to an end and decay away into dust. Thus Subja means to decompose and take in the living particles and mana and make it his own while slowly aging the objects within a 10m radius of his body. If they are not granted his protection or the protection of healing magic this mantle feasts upon them over time sucking up 5% of their MP and HP in a combat zone, other then that others will feel physically weaker being close to Subja.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:
    Name: Strength of the Legion
    Rank: D
    Type: Buff
    Damage: None
    Range: Buff
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 3 Posts
    Downside: He returns to normal melee damage.
    Description: Connecting back to the sacrifices of the many who came before with the Spirit of Corruption, using the strength of those who signed over their lives to the spirit. Reaching back through the lineage he pulls upon the power of the people to arm him for combat upping his strength by 40%.

    Name: Corruptions Grasp
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: ----
    Description:Upon casting the spell the enemy who is hit by the Corruptions grasp will experience a lose the ability to move due to paralysis.

    Name: Drawback
    Rank: D+
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 30 hp
    Range: 45meters
    Speed: 25m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: (An optional field, a downside applies to the spell specifically in order to attempt to increase the range or speed. You can only increase either range or speed for a spell, so only 1 true downside is needed, naturally, you could add more if you are inclined with no further effect.)
    Description: While distance is a great thing for any fighter, this Drawback pulls his enemies towards himself to cut off the distance fight.

    Name: Eye for an Eye
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 15m
    Speed: 15m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: has to take damage for spell to work.
    Description: Upon taking damage, due to the Decay mantle 10% of the spell damage is reduced away. Adding 10% to Eye for an Eye as a counter spell.

    The main problem I see here is that the descriptions for each spell aside from Strength of the Legion are pretty barebones. I'd like for you to expand upon them a bit so its easier to get a feel for how the spell actually looks and feels, instead of just purely the effect itself.


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    Ydris
    Ydris

    Player 
    Lineage : Spirit of Corruption
    Position : None
    Posts : 19
    Guild : Guildless
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 30
    Experience : 100

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Spirit of Corruption
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Ydris 19th December 2018, 3:54 pm

    Bump Senpai!!


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    Yuu Blitzkrieg
    Yuu Blitzkrieg

    Crash!


    Crash!

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    Position : ASS EATER!
    Posts : 553
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Crash
    Second Skill: TBD
    Third Skill: TBD

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    Post by Yuu Blitzkrieg 19th December 2018, 4:34 pm

    Ydris wrote:Magic

    Magic Name: Corruptions Decay.
    Magic Type: Caster
    Description: Corruption of Decay is a passed down branch of magic from the Lineage of the Spirit of Corruption. The person with the corruptive nature of this magic causes those within its effect radius to undergo the sensations of rotting away. People, animals, buildings, even spells will rot away if exposed for too long if they are not properly defended against the magic, or cannot overpower the effects.
    Unique Abilities: Decaying Presence: (Passive ) With his close contact with the Spirit of Corruption and that of decay, Subja is able to cast out a magic mantle that feeds off of the mana of people and that of other objects and people. As always things must come to an end and decay away into dust. Thus Subja means to decompose and take in the living particles and mana and make it his own while slowly aging the objects within a 10m radius of his body. If they are not granted his protection or the protection of healing magic this mantle feasts upon them over time sucking up 5% of their MP and HP in a combat zone, other then that others will feel physically weaker being close to Subja.

    • Ability:
    • Ability:
    • Ability:


    Spells:
    Name: Strength of the Legion
    Rank: D
    Type: Buff
    Damage: None
    Range: Buff
    Speed: N/A
    Duration: 3 Posts
    Downside: He returns to normal melee damage.
    Description: Connecting back to the sacrifices of the many who came before with the Spirit of Corruption, using the strength of those who signed over their lives to the spirit. Reaching back through the lineage he pulls upon the power of the people to arm him for combat upping his strength by 40%.

    Name: Corruptions Grasp
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 60m
    Speed: 60m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: ----
    Description: Upon casting the spell the enemy who is hit by the Corruptions grasp will experience a lose the ability to move due to paralysis. With an outstretched hand, darkness shoots forth like a black hand looking to entomb them in its grasp. The paralysis effect comes into play upon feeling like ones life might end while cascaded in complete darkness.

    Name: Drawback
    Rank: D+
    Type: Area of Effect
    Damage: 30 hp
    Range: 45meters
    Speed: 25m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: Any fighter who is also CQC will be brought into striking range.
    Description: With Ydris as the epicenter of this 45m perimeter, the man pulls his enemies and objects to himself. This skill can be used in motion to bring down fleeing foes like polar opposite ends of a magnet. For someone who fights with his hands mainly, this skill works to subdue long distance fighters who seek to run away.

    Name: Eye for an Eye
    Rank: D
    Type: Single Target
    Damage: 40hp
    Range: 15m
    Speed: 15m p/s
    Duration: 1 post
    Downside: This spell can not be used at 100% hp and must be done directly after taking damage.
    Description: Upon taking damage, due to the Decay mantle 10% of the spell damage is reduced away. Adding 10% to Eye for an Eye as a counter spell, the extra 10% is kicked back in a beam formation. When the spell is activated, from the enemies perspective their attack will make contact with Ydris. Upon the damage being taken the first thing they see will be a lone eye staring back followed by the returning beam of 10% of their damage and his own added assault.

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 24th May 2020, 3:51 am

    Spoiler:

    Archived due to player inactivity~


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