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    Hellfyre Magic

    Jin Daniels
    Jin Daniels

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    Bump Hellfyre Magic

    Post by Jin Daniels 10th March 2018, 7:17 am

    Magic

    Magic Name: HellFyre Magic
    Magic Type: Lost magic, Auxiliary Benefit
    Description:A cursed and dark fire used by the demons locked in hell. By accident he had ingested the blood of an escaped demon who came to wreak havoc on the world above, Jin has now been granted access to this cursed and deadly fire magic. By using this type of magic Jin's regular fire magic now has a black tinge surrounding the flames along with a strong smell of sulfur.
    Strengths:

    • Due to it being demonic hellfire, it does considerably more damage than regular fire.


    • magic and has ill consequences should it be eaten by a slayer.


    • Burns hotter than regular fire and takes longer to extinguish.


    • It is easier to manipulate than regular fire.


    • Allows user a small resistance to regular fire magic.



    Weaknesses:

    • The user is at a disadvantage when in populated areas due to how destructive the flames are.



    • Makes the user more quick-tempered the longer the magic is used.


    • Due to how dark nature of the magic, it has an adverse effect on the user's psyche making them more open to destructive thoughts and actions.


    • While the flames are easy to manipulate and shape, they are harder to control and are even capable of becoming semi-sentient if the user does not have the will power to keep the flames under control.


    • Harder to cast than regular fire magic despite being more easy to manipulate after being cast.


    Unique Abilities:


    [*]Ability:Demon's touch: The flames generated from Jin are now demonic flames which makes them incredibly hot to humans. Anyone burned by the flames will have lasting damage dealt that cannot be healed by potions and need to be healed by spells above its rank. Otherwise, the damage is there for a maximum of 1 post.
    [*]Ability:
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    Spells:

    Signature spell:


    D rank:

    C rank:
    Locked:
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    Last edited by Jin Daniels on 22nd January 2019, 5:52 am; edited 2 times in total
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


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    Guild : Fairy Tail
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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Bump Re: Hellfyre Magic

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 21st January 2019, 10:34 am

    Hey there, I'm Nessa and I'll be grading your magic today. Firstly, before I can do edits, I noticed your template follows the OLD template for magic applications. Since there have been a lot of changes and additional requirements added to spells, I will need you to update this. The newest templates can be found here, and I recommend you go through the Magic and Spell Rules for a refresh and to see what changes have been made to them.


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    Jin Daniels
    Jin Daniels

    Player 
    Lineage : Feeling Empty
    Position : None
    Posts : 15
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 0

    Bump Re: Hellfyre Magic

    Post by Jin Daniels 25th January 2019, 5:57 am

    Bump
    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Bump Re: Hellfyre Magic

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 25th January 2019, 6:35 am

    Hey again, okay so all my edits will be made in this colour, once you've made the changes, bump the thread again and I'll take a lookie. ^^


    Edit:: Okay so first of all, Strengths and Weaknesses are no longer required in magic, please remove those from all the spells.  Also Cooldowns are no longer a thing, please delete from all spells.

    Next I just want to address the layout of your magic, as a D Rank, you start of with 3 normal spells and 1 advance spell. From the looks of it, your advance spell is missing. I can also see you've put two spells in D Rank and one in C, aswell as a signature C Rank. Although making your magic up to a higher rank is perfectly fine, I just want to let you know, that you cannot use the C Rank spell until you've hit that rank. Also if you were making it to C Rank you actually get another 3 normal spells and one more advanced spell. However if you're just created what you're permitted to use at D rank, than I recommend you make them all D Rank spells, note you do not get a Signature spell until you are C Rank.

    Because of this I have graded the UA, but left the spells until I know what format your actually using.  


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Bump Re: Hellfyre Magic

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 27th July 2019, 9:49 am

    Archived due to player inactivity.


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