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    Hikari Nisemono

    Sayuri Katsuya
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    Post by Sayuri Katsuya 17th June 2018, 3:52 pm

    Magic

    Primary Magic: Hikari Nisemono
    Explanation: I don't pretend to be an expert in Japanese, but I did pull from that language to name my character's magic. The word Hikari means light, and Nisemono means fake, which I used as a synonym of trick. In other words, the rough translation (that I'm using) means "Light Trick", although in English it would sound better to say "Trick of the Light."

    Secondary Magic: Tsuyoi Ken

    Magic Type: Caster (Solitary)

    Description: Hikari Nisemono (which hereon out will simply be referred to as "Hikari") is a type of illusion magic. It allows its user to create visual illusions. But in addition to this most common usage, it also allows the caster to create auditory (sound) and tactile (physical feelings) illusions as well. However, whatever effects are used, they affect the target mentally only- there are no real physical effects.

    Sayuri uses her Hikari magic both in and out of combat. Outside of combat, she usually uses it to help out others, be it through cheering them up when they're having a bad day. Small illusions are quite easy for her, although they hardly apply in combat. Inside of combat, her main use of her magic is to confuse and disorient her opponents. Because her magic has no physical effects, she relies entirely on her hand-to-hand and weapons skills in fights. However, she does use her magic to summon up illusions that will distract her opponents, giving her the upper hand, or to conceal her real location to avoid their attacks.

    Strengths:

    • Distraction- Hikari magic is very good at distracting opponents, causing them to lose focus on what they are doing. If used well, it can cause them to miss on their attacks, or give Sayuri an opening to make an attack of her own.
    • Concealment- This magic can allow Sayuri to temporarily hide her location from her opponent. Again, this can help her avoid attacks, or make her own attacks.
    • Precision Targeting- Sayuri has very good control as to who exactly her magic affects. Because of this, her magic usually will not affect her allies, unless she specifically wants it to.


    Weaknesses:

    • No Physical Effects- This is the most obvious drawback of Hikari magic. None of the spells do any real physical damage to their targets. As such, no matter how strong the user is, they will almost always have some other form of attack, magical or physical, to finish off their enemy.
    • Flying Blind- Another big drawback is that Sayuri cannot see, hear, or feel the illusions she creates. In order to maintain an illusions, she has to keep a mental image in her mind, but she cannot physically perceive her own illusions. As such, she simply has to assume that her illusion is working as intended, since she has no real way to tell. The only exception to this is pain magic, as she will sometimes feel at least some of the pain herself, as well as subjecting others to it.
    • Focus- Almost all of Sayuri's illusions require concentration to maintain. She has to keep the mental image of what she wants to happen fixed in her mind. If she is distracted and looses track of that image, her illusion will immediately disappear as well. This also means it can be hard for her to maintain more than one spell at a time.


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    Post by Lester Drynedi 22nd June 2018, 2:52 pm

    Hey hey Lester here! Ill be grading your magic for this round so feel free to ask any questions below! All comments are in this color and just reply to the thread with a bump when you've made changes.

    The advanced spells dont count towards basic spells so feel free to add another D rank spell

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    Post by Sayuri Katsuya 22nd June 2018, 3:57 pm

    Whew. I'll admit I was a little nervous since her magic is a little... Unorthodox. But anyway, I added what you asked to her third special ability and added a fourth spell, Okami.


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    Post by Sayuri Katsuya 24th June 2018, 7:37 am

    Whew. Alright, edits made to the original post, namely due to adding in spells/abilities because I am about to rank up to C-rank. Any edits made to this post are due to typos, because apparently I didn't proofread this one well enough before I posted it...

    • Minor edits made to first unique ability, Kireina (word choice, no actual change to the ability itself)
    • Added fourth unique ability- Irujon
    • Changed spell Katana from D-rank to User-ranked signature (minor ability edits due to rank change)
    • Changed spell Sosei from D+ rank to C+ rank (minor ability edits due to rank change)
    • Changed spell Okami from D-rank to C-rank (minor ability edits due to rank change)
    • Changed spell Kigu from D-rank to C-rank (minor ability edits due to rank change)
    • Added new spell Raito as D-rank signature
    • Added new spell Nejire as D+ rank
    • Added new spell Mahi Suru as C-rank
    • Added new spell Kurai as D-rank
    • Added new spell Shizukesa as D-rank
    • Added new spell Bari as D-rank


    Those were all the edits I made. Hopefully I didn't make any mistakes, but as always, I'm more than willing to change anything if you need me to!


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    Post by Lester Drynedi 24th June 2018, 10:23 pm

    Although the magic is unorthodox it isn't bad by any means!
    Most things are looking pretty good, could you go through and add speeds for all of the spells please, its not major!
    Feel free to ask me if you aren't sure on anything


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    Post by Sayuri Katsuya 25th June 2018, 4:33 pm

    Ack. I knew I was forgetting something! The speed got me. I gave it it's own slot in all of the templates to make sure I don't forget next time. And I made the suggested changes. Some of the advanced were close to the chart, and I don't mind them being a little... Under-powered. My character as a whole is under-powered, and it's totally intentional.


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    Post by Lester Drynedi 26th June 2018, 12:48 pm

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    Post by Eden Knox 4th August 2018, 7:49 pm

    Unlocked and moved at user's request!

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    Post by Guest 31st August 2018, 12:42 pm

    Hello Sayuri! Apologies again for the wait for your magic, and thank you for being patient with us!

    I love your execution of illusion magic a lot! There is only one UA edit needed, which I stated in this lovely color. ^o^
    Please edit and bump!


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    Post by Sayuri Katsuya 31st August 2018, 1:15 pm

    Thank you! I’m not entirely sure how a 50% resistance to illusion magic would work (it makes my head hurt thinking about it), so I just went ahead and added that that ability requires OOC permission. Hopefully that will work!


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