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    Reflection Magic

    Arsene Mayura
    Arsene Mayura

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    First Skill: Reflection
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Arsene Mayura 18th January 2019, 12:22 pm

    Magic

    Magic Name: Reflection Magic
    Magic Type: Solitary Caster
    Description: Arsene isn't sure whether the magic itself was gifted to him, or it was simply awoken inside him. After an encounter with a being trapped inside a mirror, Arsene was pulled inside. After that encounter, he developed a magic based around reflections. Creating copies, mimicking others, Arsene's powers all range around reflecting others. He's able to conjure copies of both people and items, as well as mirror their magical attacks. Most of these are fragile illusions; that shatter like a mirror when broken. Arsene lives on the other side of the mirror, and is able to bring his side over to the rest.

    As for how he uses it, Arsene knows that his gift isn't suited for combat. It lacks both firepower and the ability to do to anything really. Instead, he uses it for sabotage and trickery. His goal is to avoid direct conflict as much as possible; there's very little gain for him to be found in getting beaten over and over, after all. That isn't to say he'll go down without a fight; sometimes the simple numerical advantage of his copies is enough, or a clever use of his opponents spells against them. He'd much rather infiltrate and escape without even being known of though. Cloaking himself to sneak inside, masquerading as a person and framing them, stealing information before escaping. Always a reflection in the water, never really there.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability (D Rank): Reflections; Copying the appearances of others, Arsene is able to cloak himself in the illusion of another person. He has to have seen the person with his eyes directly at one point, but once he has, he can copy that appearance from then on. The appearance must be an exact copy, including everything from height to clothing and any wounds. The appearance is merely an illusion; he may copy someone else's height, but it doesn't change his physical form. He may however, stretch the dimensions of his reflection within a few feet to match his needs. Anything he interacts with that doesn't match his illusion will simply appear to float in mid air; example, a small child lifting someone off a shelf seemingly floating above their head. This effect doesn't copy any smells or scents on himself as well, it is purely visual. He may also copy the voice of someone or something he has heard before. (This needs player permission to use their created content.)
    • Ability (B Rank): Sight From the Other Side; Arsene is gifted with a different view of the world compared to most people; like staring through the back side of a two way mirror, he can see things that others cannot. This grants him a resistance to visual and image based illusions. For the most part, he can always see through them and distinguish what something really is. If he cannot for any reason, he is at least aware of what is appearing is an illusion. This will drain him of MP equal to the illusions cost.


    Spells:

    Signature Spells:

    D Rank:

    C Rank:

    B Rank:

    Advanced Spells:


    Last edited by Arsene Mayura on 19th January 2019, 11:15 am; edited 7 times in total
    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    Reflection Magic Empty Re: Reflection Magic

    Post by MarkusEldridge 18th January 2019, 8:09 pm

    Hello there! We have talked a little bit in Discord, but just to be formal I am Markus, and I will be grading your magic this time around. All of my edits will be in this color.

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    Arsene Mayura
    Arsene Mayura

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    Lineage : Gingerbread Man
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    Age : 26
    Mentor : Artenis Dagger
    Experience : 1,693.75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Reflection
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Arsene Mayura 18th January 2019, 10:23 pm

    Changes made to reflect the edits. Removed Stage Hands and Direct's Vision, and moved spells between ranks. Let me know if there's any other changes to be addressed.


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    MarkusEldridge
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    Reflection Magic Empty Re: Reflection Magic

    Post by MarkusEldridge 18th January 2019, 11:54 pm

    Hello again! Markus here, same thing as before, all of my grading will be in This Color.
    So a few overarching notes, that need to be addressed, but I went ahead and graded everything with these in mind:

    • First, I would suggest looking at the tables here, it is reacuring that your Speeds/Ranges are high, generally set at single target for rank and not multi/burst/AoE. Also, a few damages or speeds can be increased to match tables, if you so desire.
    • If you do a downside, such as decrease damage, you can increase either speed or range of said spell by 25%
    • You have 3 Passives effects, at B-Rank magic you would have 9 normal spells, and are allowed to make 1/4th of those passive. Meaning I have to ask that you change or remove one of these.
    • A few of your spells are touched based, you can make those range Self/melee, and their speeds instant/maxed at table if effecting others


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    Magic Name: Reflection Magic
    Magic Type: Solitary Caster
    Description: Arsene isn't sure whether the magic itself was gifted to him, or it was simply awoken inside him. After an encounter with a being trapped inside a mirror, Arsene was pulled inside. After that encounter, he developed a magic based around reflections. Creating copies, mimicking others, Arsene's powers all range around reflecting others. He's able to conjure copies of both people and items, as well as mirror their magical attacks. Most of these are fragile illusions; that shatter like a mirror when broken. Arsene lives on the other side of the mirror, and is able to bring his side over to the rest.

    As for how he uses it, Arsene knows that his gift isn't suited for combat. It lacks both firepower and the ability to do to anything really. Instead, he uses it for sabotage and trickery. His goal is to avoid direct conflict as much as possible; there's very little gain for him to be found in getting beaten over and over, after all. That isn't to say he'll go down without a fight; sometimes the simple numerical advantage of his copies is enough, or a clever use of his opponents spells against them. He'd much rather infiltrate and escape without even being known of though. Cloaking himself to sneak inside, masquerading as a person and framing them, stealing information before escaping. Always a reflection in the water, never really there.
    Unique Abilities:

    • Ability (D Rank): Reflections; Copying the appearances of others, Arsene is able to cloak himself in the illusion of another person. He has to have seen the person with his eyes directly at one point, but once he has, he can copy that appearance from then on. The appearance must be an exact copy, including everything from height to clothing and any wounds. The appearance is merely an illusion; he may copy someone else's height, but it doesn't change his physical form. He may however, stretch the dimensions of his reflection within a few feet to match his needs. Anything he interacts with that doesn't match his illusion will simply appear to float in mid air; example, a small child lifting someone off a shelf seemingly floating above their head. This effect doesn't copy any smells or scents on himself as well, it is purely visual. (This needs player permission to use their created content.)
    • Ability (B Rank): Sight From the Other Side; Arsene is gifted with a different view of the world compared to most people; like staring through the back side of a two way mirror, he can see things that others cannot. This grants him a resistance to visual and image based illusions. For the most part, he can always see through them and distinguish what something really is. If he cannot for any reason, he is at least aware of what is appearing is an illusion. This will drain him of MP equal to the illusions cost.


    Spells:

    Signature Spells:

    D Rank:

    C Rank:

    B Rank:

    Advanced Spells:


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    Arsene Mayura
    Arsene Mayura

    VIP- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Player 
    Lineage : Gingerbread Man
    Position : None
    Posts : 286
    Guild : Hidden Blades
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Age : 26
    Mentor : Artenis Dagger
    Experience : 1,693.75

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Reflection
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Arsene Mayura 19th January 2019, 10:15 am

    Changes made to meet the asked edits. The passive was removed and added to Reflwctions, hopefully that is ok. A new spell added.


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    MarkusEldridge
    MarkusEldridge

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    First Skill: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Skill: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Skill: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

    Reflection Magic Empty Re: Reflection Magic

    Post by MarkusEldridge 19th January 2019, 10:56 am

    One more go, only a couple more items. As always my grading will be in This Color.

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    Arsene Mayura
    Arsene Mayura

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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Reflection
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Arsene Mayura 19th January 2019, 11:11 am

    Changes made to match edits


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    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Primordial Chaos Slayer
    Second Skill: Chaotic Darkness
    Third Skill: Chaos Soul - Primordial Warrior

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    Post by MarkusEldridge 19th January 2019, 11:26 am

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 25th May 2020, 6:32 am

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    Archived due to player inactivity~


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