Olido's Pet - Mango (Hell Raven)

Name: Mango
Species: Hell Raven
Type: Combat Pet
Description:A raven that is covered with fire, one of the powerful birds in the bird species, nearly as strong as a phoenix. Mango rarely talks, he likes striking fear into people's heart. )
Abilities:
Name: Raven's Revenge (Pet's Skill)
Rank: (D)
Type: (N/A)
Description: (The Hell Raven- Mango on Olido's shoulder flies up in to the sky, summons 100 over ravens and dive down towards the opponent. All the raven except Mango will explode giving the opponent no mercy.)
Strengths: (The raven can travel in a swift speed, can dive and explode from any direction.)
Weaknesses: (Will not work if there isn't raven in the sky, takes 1 minute of casting time.)

Here's some constructive criticism.

Don't use "best" in your applications, instead change it to "powerful" or "strong."

After you change that, I'll approve this application.

done =) thank you for checking it :)

Approved