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    Kornari Miirik

    Haraka Omaras
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    Post by Haraka Omaras 4th February 2018, 4:35 pm

    Magic

    First Magic: Kornari Miirik
    Second Magic: Ice Dragon Slayer(2nd Gen)
    Third Magic: Second Heart
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
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    Lineage: Death Fae Doctor
    Unique Abilities:

    Spells:
    Signature Spells:
    Advanced Spells:
    S Rank:
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    Post by Guest 6th February 2018, 8:15 pm

    Hello there Fishweave! I'm Izayuki, and will be grading your magic. c:

    This is a lovely magic so far-- I love the creativity behind it. ^o^ There are a few corrections needed to have it balanced for the roleplay, which I listed in this lovely color in the quote below.

    Once you have made the necessary edits, please bump this thread so I can come back and check! (: If you have any questions, do not hesitate to PM me.

    Thanks!


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    Post by Haraka Omaras 6th February 2018, 9:27 pm

    Thank you for helping me! This is my first character on this site and I'm not used to being in games that deals with so many numbers. I modified the spells, I hope they look better now and that some details became more clear^^


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    Post by Guest 7th February 2018, 10:28 am

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    Post by kittykool75 20th May 2018, 11:18 pm

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    Post by Guest 25th May 2018, 11:29 pm

    Just one fix here. Aquamarine's duration is one post higher than the cooldown, when it should be the other way around. Everything else looks good.
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    Post by Haraka Omaras 25th May 2018, 11:45 pm

    Thank you, that has now been fixed~


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    Post by Guest 26th May 2018, 8:01 pm

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 30th June 2018, 12:01 pm

    Unlocked & Moved at users request

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    Post by Lester Drynedi 3rd July 2018, 1:25 am

    Hey! lester here, bump when you're finished, feel free to ask any questions.
    Could you go through and make sure there are ranges and speed for all of them please, there

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    Post by Haraka Omaras 3rd July 2018, 5:08 am

    How does that look?


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    Post by Lester Drynedi 4th July 2018, 1:03 pm

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    Post by ivyleaf33 17th November 2018, 12:25 am

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    Unlocked and moved at user's request.


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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 6th December 2018, 8:01 pm

    Haraka Omaras wrote:Magic

    First Magic: Ulhar Relgim
    Second Magic: Ice Dragon Slayer(2nd Gen)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Spoiler:
     
    Lineage: Sea Dragon
    Unique Abilities:

    Spells:

    Okay for the first order of business if you could please adjust the spell template to:
    Spoiler:
    that would be great



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    Post by Haraka Omaras 6th December 2018, 8:48 pm

    Template has been adjusted.


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    Post by Kite Wilhelm 9th December 2018, 6:37 pm

    Haraka Omaras wrote:Magic

    First Magic: Ulhar Relgim
    Second Magic: Ice Dragon Slayer(2nd Gen)
    Caster or Holder: Caster
    Description:
    Spoiler:
     
    Lineage: Sea Dragon
    Unique Abilities:

    Spells:
    Kornari Miirik Approv22


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    Post by Saraphina 21st December 2019, 3:51 pm

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