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    Orthrus (Ethereal +)

    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 11th September 2017, 2:12 pm

    Name:Orthrus ( Proof of Purchase )
    Rank: Ethereal +
    Species:Two headed Dog
    Type: combat pet
    Description:
    Appearance:
    Orthrus is a twin-headed canine with a tail that is a snake. That is close to nine feet long. The tail is the body of a king cobra. This tail can be used as a whip, or it can bite opponents. It is also capable of moving objects throwing them, or using them as weapons. His skin is covered in a series of bone- like coverings which resemble armor. This hound stands at 2 and a half meters tall and has the dimensions to support the size. This does mean that he is taller than Feitan, and most people. Feitan is even capable of riding him if he okay with a seriously uncomfortable ride.

    Personality: Orthrus is loyal to only Feitan, and will obey no one else. He will also not stand for anyone who stands in Feitan’s way. He will kill anyone who harms Feitan, but Feitan also worked his magic on him so that Orthrus would be the check for his madness. The right head is quick to react and quicker to violence. He will not be caught off guard ever. The left head is slow to respond but acts more like a lazy cat who only pounces when he must. However, he is the guard and will not allow Feitan to be attacked without response or some kind of action to try to defend him. The snake tail also has a mind of its own and it will only strike when it can do so without being harmed itself and acts as the dagger in a fight.

    Abilities:
    Ability 1:
    Ability 2:


    Last edited by FeitanKazeshini on 12th September 2017, 1:56 pm; edited 2 times in total


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    Post by kittykool75 11th September 2017, 6:41 pm

    Hello FeitanKazeshini, I'll be the one grading your pet, all edits will be made in this color. If you have any questions, ask here or pm me.

    FeitanKazeshini wrote:Name:Orthrus ( Proof of Purchase )
    Rank: Ethereal +
    Species:Two headed Dog
    Type: combat pet
    Description:
    Appearance:
    Orthrus is a twin-headed canine with a tail that is a snake. That is close to nine feet long. The tail is the body of a king cobra. This tail can be used as a whip, or it can bite opponents. It is also capable of moving objects throwing them, or using them as weapons. His skin is covered in a series of bone- like coverings which resemble armor. They even function as armor making it so Orthus takes 25% less damage from all physical attacks. Please get rid of this, you can't have an extra ability in your description. This hound stands at 2 and a half meters tall and has the dimensions to support the size. This does mean that he is taller than Feitan, and most people. Feitan is even capable of riding him if he okay with a seriously uncomfortable ride.

    Personality: Orthrus is loyal to only Feitan, and will obey no one else. He will also not stand for anyone who stands in Feitan’s way. He will kill anyone who harms Feitan, but Feitan also worked his magic on him so that Orthrus would be the check for his madness. The right head is quick to react and quicker to violence. He will not be caught off guard ever. The left head is slow to respond, but acts more like a lazy cat who only pounces when he must. However, he is the guard and will not allow Feitan to be attacked without response, or some kind of act to try to defend him. The snake tail also has a mind of its own and it will only strike when it can do so without being harmed itself, and acts as the dagger in a fight.

    Abilities:
    Ability 1:
    Ability 2:


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    "You've got me shaking from the way you're talking
    My heart is breaking but there's no use crying
    "


    Orthrus (Ethereal +) 1LMjHkp
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    FeitanKazeshini
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    Guild : Errings Rising
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    Mentor : Hisoka
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    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 12th September 2017, 3:58 am

    Edits made


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    First Skill: ⛧ Fallen God Slayer ⛧ ⛧ First Generation ⛧
    Second Skill: ⛧ Shadow Dragon Slayer ⛧ Second Generation ⛧
    Third Skill:

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    Post by kittykool75 12th September 2017, 8:48 am

    FeitanKazeshini wrote:Name:Orthrus ( Proof of Purchase )
    Rank: Ethereal +
    Species:Two headed Dog
    Type: combat pet
    Description:
    Appearance:
    Orthrus is a twin-headed canine with a tail that is a snake. That is close to nine feet long. The tail is the body of a king cobra. This tail can be used as a whip, or it can bite opponents. It is also capable of moving objects throwing them, or using them as weapons. His skin is covered in a series of bone- like coverings which resemble armor. This hound stands at 2 and a half meters tall and has the dimensions to support the size. This does mean that he is taller than Feitan, and most people. Feitan is even capable of riding him if he okay with a seriously uncomfortable ride.

    Personality: Orthrus is loyal to only Feitan, and will obey no one else. He will also not stand for anyone who stands in Feitan’s way. He will kill anyone who harms Feitan, but Feitan also worked his magic on him so that Orthrus would be the check for his madness. The right head is quick to react and quicker to violence. He will not be caught off guard ever. The left head is slow to respond but acts more like a lazy cat who only pounces when he must. However, he is the guard and will not allow Feitan to be attacked without response or some kind of action to try to defend him. The snake tail also has a mind of its own and it will only strike when it can do so without being harmed itself and acts as the dagger in a fight.

    Abilities:
    Ability 1:
    Ability 2:


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    "You've got me shaking from the way you're talking
    My heart is breaking but there's no use crying
    "


    Orthrus (Ethereal +) 1LMjHkp
    Directory
    Golden Lacrima until 4/16/2019

    FeitanKazeshini
    FeitanKazeshini

    Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Magic Application Approved!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- Player 
    Lineage : Overlord's Fail Safe
    Position : None
    Posts : 757
    Guild : Errings Rising
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Mentor : Hisoka
    Experience : 6,240

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Satan Soul: Netherworld
    Second Skill: Aura Manipulation
    Third Skill:

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    Post by FeitanKazeshini 12th September 2017, 2:00 pm

    Edits have been made.

    However, I will not state that. The reason I will not is because of the weakness "One: This bite may only damage one opponent per head, per post. Any additional bites made by a head will not deal poison damage, and be judged at typical melee combat damage not spell damage."

    This means that each head can only bite one opponent each post and will only deal the Spell rank damage once to anyone. If they are bitten again it would go under basic melee combat rules, and to try and say that all Orthrus could deal in total is 1 C rank of damage no matter what is beyond absurd. After all, a spell weapon will deal its rank in damage every time it strikes because it is a physical weapon and can be swung multiple times against one opponent. It's the same thing.

    So in Summary, I already added in that stipulation as a weakness. If you had or would read the whole thing and edit it in its entirety the first time you'd have noticed that.


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    Posts : 1219
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    Experience : 0

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: ⛧ Fallen God Slayer ⛧ ⛧ First Generation ⛧
    Second Skill: ⛧ Shadow Dragon Slayer ⛧ Second Generation ⛧
    Third Skill:

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    Post by kittykool75 12th September 2017, 5:35 pm

    Spoiler:

    I do apologize for the misunderstanding, my mistake. But there is no reason to be aggressive, I suggest next time you have complaints against somebodies grading, point it out in a less aggressive manner. Sorry and Thank you

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    My heart is breaking but there's no use crying
    "


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