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    Ethereal Bond

    Emma
    Emma

    Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Working Together- Christian Minecraft Server- Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Spirit Warrior
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 174

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ethereal Bond
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

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    Post by Emma 24th December 2019, 4:06 am


    Ethereal Bond Magic


    Magic Type: Bond Magic [PET LINK]
    Description: Emma has become entwined with a being not of the physical realm, now capable of freely entering and controlling ethereal matter that exists on another plane of existence parallel to the physical world by channelling it through the ethereal creature. Without Amari nearby Emma can not use these powers, meaning that the two of them must be close at all times, however, they do not have to be on the same plane of existence. This means that Amari can remain in the ethereal realm and gift Emma her own magical abilities and spells to use as long as they don't separate too far from one another.
    Lineage: Spirit Warrior
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    Unique Abilities:

    • Ethereal Realm: Due to their ability to control pure energy, both Emma and her bonded pet are able to freely travel in and out of the ethereal plane. While in the ethereal plane their magical signature and physical presence from all senses (sight, smell, sound etc.) is hidden and only able to be sensed by someone using an active sensory spell of equal rank or above of Emma, to which they will appear as ghostly versions of themselves. While in the ethereal realm they are able to move much like spirits, such as passing through solid objects, float slightly above the ground (max 5m above surface), walk on water etc. While within the ethereal plane they can still be affected by spells/attacks thrown their way, however, they will have 25% physical resistance and 25% magical resistance as their bodies are intangible.
    • LOCKED TILL B RANK:
    • LOCKED TILL S RANK:


    Spells:
    D-Rank:

    C-Rank (Locked till C-Rank):

    Advanced Spells:

    Signature Spells (Locked till C-Rank):


    Last edited by Emma on 2nd January 2020, 11:25 pm; edited 1 time in total


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

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    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 2nd January 2020, 10:10 am

    Hey there Poko! So I'm here to grade this magic for you, all edits are done in this colour! Bump the magic once you've made the recommended changes and I'll take a looky~

    Overall Edit:: Just a note, because I actually started to pre-grade this a few days ago, and then came back to it only to see that you had changed stuff. Please let your grader know next time, as otherwise this can create more work for the grader and as a result meant I had to start from scratch.

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    Emma
    Emma

    Main Account- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Working Together- Christian Minecraft Server- Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Magic Application Approved!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Player 
    Lineage : Spirit Warrior
    Position : None
    Posts : 65
    Guild : Dies Irae
    Cosmic Coins : 0
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 174

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Ethereal Bond
    Second Skill:
    Third Skill:

    Ethereal Bond Empty Re: Ethereal Bond

    Post by Emma 2nd January 2020, 11:29 pm

    Bump~ Super sorry about not messaging about the changes. I got my pet graded and from there learnt my old UA idea wouldn't be allowed because it would have counted as immunity even though I couldn't do anything while in the realm myself. So thought it best to change it before you reviewed, and then also added C-Rank stuff because nearly at rank up now, didn't realise you had already started reviewing though, my bad.


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    Nessa Cordelia Lux
    Nessa Cordelia Lux

    Starlight Maiden


    Starlight Maiden

    Administrator- Moderator- Developer/GFX Artist- Main Account- God VIP Status- Dragon VIP Status- Knight VIP Status- Regular VIP Status- VIP- Gain An Artifact- Quality Badge Level 1- Quality Badge Level 2- Quality Badge Level 3- God Of Ishgar- Ten Wizard Saint Member- Rising Star- Custom Slayer- Neutral Guild Ace- Z-Rank- Y-Rank- X-Rank- H-Rank- S-Rank- A-Rank- Wanderer- EXP Grinder- Working Together- Forever Solo- Christian Minecraft Server- I Have Friends...- Teaming Up!- Limited Edition- Hired Help- Idolize- Achiever- Expert Achiever- Over Achiever- Buddy Buddy- Obligatory Beach Episode- Shipped- Sticking Around- Dank Memer- Fan Artist- Taskmaster- Halloween gfx'ers- Halloween Social- Halloween job event participant - Haiku Contest Participant- Richie Rich- Rich- Veteran Level 3- Veteran Level 2- Veteran Level 1- Character History!- Magic Application Approved!- Obtain A Secondary Magic!- Get A Pet!- Character Application Approved!- Complete Your First Job!- Obtain A Lineage!- Join A Faction!- Supreme Grand Master [5000]- Grand Master [2000]- Master [1000]- Senior [500]- Novice [250]- 1st Place Event/Contest Winner- 2nd Place Event/Contest Winner- X-Mas Event Participant- Hero- Summer Special Donor- Summer Special Participant- Have Seijin On Your Friends List- Have Onida On Your Friend's List- Have an Admin as a friend!- Have aeluri On Your Friend's List- Best GFX Artist Award- Player 
    Lineage : Vassal of the Cosmos
    Position : None
    Posts : 6990
    Guild : Fairy Tail
    Cosmic Coins : 145
    Dungeon Tokens : 0
    Experience : 26,209

    Character Sheet
    First Skill: Starlight Maiden
    Second Skill: Valkyrie Summoner
    Third Skill: Moon Goddess Slayer

    Ethereal Bond Empty Re: Ethereal Bond

    Post by Nessa Cordelia Lux 3rd January 2020, 7:40 am

    Ethereal Bond Pg4yhn10

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